Shivika SS: Agar Tum Saath Ho~Part 19-B, 20~(03/05/2018)~page 87

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KnowItAllSwot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Hey dear.! Firstly sorry for commenting so late.! I know you have been sending the pms for all the parts but its just that i never got the time to comment.! Extremely extremely busy with studies these days. And i know how it feels when you write something & people don't make efforts to appreciate it or even let you know how they find it.! So please forgive me, i will try to comment more often.!

Anyways the story is just outstanding.! It was really heart wrenching to read Annika's struggle since childhood.! Poor girl suffered alot.!

Shivay is being such a support to her.! That's the real beauty of the husband-wife relationship where your life partner truely knows the meaning of sharing everything, be it happiness, pain, peace or revenge.!!

This new *Oberois may be the reason of her destruction* angle is really a turning point & the real test of their relationship.! Let's see how they deal with it.!

All in all an amazing piece of writing.! 👏👏 Keep it up.!

Thank you so much for the pm. Keep them coming. Will try to comment regularly.!

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Khidkitod

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi Kirthi!😳

This was such an interesting update..⭐️Day by day it's getting more interesting..👏Now Oberois are behind Annika's past suffering..It's getting damn awesome..⭐️Waiting to see Shivaay's reaction..

Update soon..Thanks for the pm..

Love,

Rusha

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S.love1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

What did he just say, oberio behind annikas miseries? This is super duper exciting

Wow wow

I am impressed with the way the story is talking shape

Although this does make me feel bad for the future shivaay, he will consider himself the cause of annikas loss if his family was involved, which I am sure is right. I can only hope that you will not let this effect their relationship.

I loved how protective shivaay was in this update, and the way he gave annika strength was awsome. The fact that annika is more open now is fantastic, it only makes their relationship stronger and deeper.

By the end of this update, I didn't feel too disgusted by this Natvarlal guy as I was feeling at the start, I could almost feel where he was coming from.

Very beautifully penned story

Eager and excited for future story plot

Keep writing

Much love!

.Saumya.

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angelshah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Amazing
Omg it was tej who did this
Plz cont soon can't wait

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KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

OMG!
This is going to be dhamakedar.
Oberois were the reason Anika has lost everything!
Waiting for next update

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Shaina744

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

It's called jor ka jhatka aur jor se laga...Shivay's own family is behind his wife's dreadful past... Family and Anika are only the things which matter to him...It's time to choose any one of them...
This story has taken very interesting turn.. Waiting for the next part... Tnq so much for the pm..