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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Awww poorva this was so lovely yar...amazing... again different version of rikara
I loved this specially when she said suniye rudra ke bhaiyya😆
Khana khane aapne aap ayenge ya prem patra bijwayu😆
She uses different names for calling him..he?? Was waiting for her to call him..banda maze le raha hai..
And their little kiss was☺️ and their chotu chotu moments during dinner were so cute han...she burnt her hand 😒 his expressions after this..bechari gauri..and then he said lovely words with lovely voice khana khalo plz hum argue bad mein krenge..shanti mil gyi mere man ko bhi gauri ke man ko bhi😆
They talk about their day during night walk...nice part... they listen to each other...show mein toh aisa normal couples wala kuch mila nahi but yahan mil raha hai so udhar ki tension or gussa idhar aa ke khatam ho jati hai😆
Waiting for more
we are DKD🤣


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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: writergenie17

This was so... I really don't have the perfect word to describe it. It was different, relaxing and adorable at the same time.

Aise RiKara ko normal life mein settle hue dekh kar man ko shanti mil gayi. They manage to find moments for themselves while acting out their roles in the family. The little kiss was *sigh*, those tiny moments during dinner were adorable and the nightly walk tradition while they talk to each other about their day... so normal yet so perfect!

That they both listen to each other, wait for each other, manage to find romance in the most mundane of things just because they're together... is perfection.

Can't wait for more awesomeness from you!

Genie 🤗

What you said is exactly what I was feeling when I thought of writing something normal for RiKara ... Breezy, flirtatious, romantic and simple ...

RiKara has been mature, simple and up to themselves mos of the time ... They are not pompous and exxagerating which is why they are so relatable ... I actually gave them some moments which I observe in everyday family life ... The butterfly kiss being my own version of Sanskaar.

I feel that is how couples in love manage to have time for each other amidst responsibilities, routine and continuous work ... It depends on how two people want to.make it work ... I wanted to put up a simple instance of how commitment is effort and patience demanding

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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Rati0992

Pooru this is so romantic one awww ❤️

Rati 🤗🤗🤗 Thank you
Our RiKara they are ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

This was different kind of Rikara for me so soothing and serene just like a gush of cold wind in the hot sun.. am so done with the telly thingy.. but today's episode was good.. and this os is bliss.. Om waiting for his wifey to call him is just so adorable..

Hi Annabella 🤗
I feel mutual ... I am done with the telly thingy ... Just hopeful because I am a diehard RiKara fan ... I know the episode was very good ... Gauri portrayed as an OBahu ... In fact I loved the way Gauri and Omkara individually supported their family in crisis but their story as a couple is not so appealing to me right now ...
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my work.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Awww poorva this was so lovely yar...amazing... again different version of rikara

I loved this specially when she said suniye rudra ke bhaiyya😆
Khana khane aapne aap ayenge ya prem patra bijwayu😆
She uses different names for calling him..he?? Was waiting for her to call him..banda maze le raha hai..
And their little kiss was☺️ and their chotu chotu moments during dinner were so cute han...she burnt her hand 😒 his expressions after this..bechari gauri..and then he said lovely words with lovely voice khana khalo plz hum argue bad mein krenge..shanti mil gyi mere man ko bhi gauri ke man ko bhi😆
They talk about their day during night walk...nice part... they listen to each other...show mein toh aisa normal couples wala kuch mila nahi but yahan mil raha hai so udhar ki tension or gussa idhar aa ke khatam ho jati hai😆
Waiting for more
we are DKD🤣


Behnaa 🤗
Aaj phir mujhe Jo kuch bhi batana thha you understood everything 😳 yeah she calls him by diff names like Bhaujaai ke devar and Rudra ke bhaiyya ... I hope she will call him Gudiya ke papa in near future ... The kiss was my addition to the refreshing tale because such intimate scenes are one of my favorite thing to write and I know readers ko aise scenes padhke kitni khushi milti hain ... Apart from that their dinnertime was like normal husband wife moments ... Bilkul correct bola ... Show ki wajah se jitni bhi frustration hoti hai ... Woh yaha aake theek ho jaati hain ... And this is my one such effort so that RiKarians don't lose hope...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yaar this is the way you balance family n some couples time...i loved this everyday life settingthat you've chosen... RiKaras stolen moments as they go around their daily business ... how pretty a picture this makes... makes them so much more of flesh n blood... amazing read... n that soft kiss... aweee...n the way the whole dining table scene happensn then finally some me time...thatsthe way people behave... please go help harneet,.. its a request... till then i love this...n yea... i do miss Atif... n i terribly miss a script for RiKara cause i didnt sign up for Gauri as a bahu when her own character is not explored at all... a solid script with a few interspersed RiKara moments is all that i want n is what i wont get... but loved this story... Thanks yaa
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Yaar this is the way you balance family n some couples time...i loved this everyday life settingthat you've chosen... RiKaras stolen moments as they go around their daily business ... how pretty a picture this makes... makes them so much more of flesh n blood... amazing read... n that soft kiss... aweee...n the way the whole dining table scene happensn then finally some me time...thatsthe way people behave... please go help harneet,.. its a request... till then i love this...n yea... i do miss Atif... n i terribly miss a script for RiKara cause i didnt sign up for Gauri as a bahu when her own character is not explored at all... a solid script with a few interspersed RiKara moments is all that i want n is what i wont get... but loved this story... Thanks yaa

Neha 🤗
With you even I am highly frustrated and I know that we are not going to get anything normal in the name of RiKara forget something couple specific ... The writers have made them the coin with which they toss and decide what to do with the script ... One side being a wedding arranged on weird terms and on the other side some psycho thriller kind of drama ... RiKara has no head or tail here ... Maine umeed hi chhod di ... Aur harneet ka much ni ho sakta ... She has made a tasteless khichdi out of everything ... Atif sir 😭 I feel ridiculous with him not being there and about the script as I said ... Umeed hi chhoddi isiliye Jaisa bhi RiKara chahiye khud hi likh leti hoon ... Mann ko shanti mil jaati hain 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
awesome loved itt dear
thanks alot for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome loved itt dear
thanks alot for pm...

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Poorva your stories relax me more than watching IB!!
I read this one before i went to sleep last night and I had such a good sleep 😳 so relaxing, you know I love all your creations!

Typical husband-wife wala relationship infront of family, Gauri looking after family's every needs/wants and Omkaara admiring his wife similar to what we are getting in serial now, Gauri taking care of family and Om watching and observing 😳

Jhappie to you 🤗keep writing amazing creations, i look forward to every single one!


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