RiKara DRABBLE - OF MOONS AND STARS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I know RiKarians need medication after watching today's Episode and so I bring to you a simple drabble where Ri & Kara are nothing more than a normal husband and wife

Dedicating this to one of the Forum's consistent writer Karthi @Yayni because she helped me when I was confused thinking Iss Drabble ko Kya Naam Doon ... Thank you for the Naam Karan Sanskaar Karthi 🤗

OF MOONS AND STARS

Everyone looked unusually tired at the dinner table. Dadi was back from her nth trip to Tirupati, Rudra was almost snoring with his head in the empty plate, Shivaay was yelling at his associate for punctuation defaults in some documents ... Pinky was doing OH-MY-MATA emptying the peppermint bowl because her stomach was growling unbearably, Anika came to keep the casseroles of Dal and Rice ... And served the vegetable curry to everyone. Gauri peeped out of the kitchen to see that every one had settled and were helping themselves with the food. Anika was arguing with Shivaay because he was still romancing his phone, Dadi was trying to wake Rudra up and Pinky gorged on the steaming rice ... The only thing missing was her artsy specimen ... She knew that he must be engrossed in punching some clay or sketching some wonder ...

" Suniye Rudra ke Bhaiyya ... Khaane khaane apne aap aaenge ya prem patra bhijwaau? " Gauri yelled walking out of the kitchen to the staircase.

Omkara was standing leaning against the door frame of his room for the last fifteen minutes waiting for her to call him. He smiled knowing that today her version of calling his name was ' Rudra Ke Bhaiyya'. He loved all such unusual ideas of his dramatically romantic wife, it made him feel very special.

He lazily walked down the staircase with a My-Wife-Is-So-Cute! Look when she stood on the step of Tue staircase with her hand on her hips. He towered her on the second step and gave his signature ZulfiKara smile when she was well prepared to scold him ...

" Aise Muskuraaye Mat!!!" She warned him

"Kyon???" He asked caressing her to wipe the dry flour coating her cheek bone.

" Humme aapko kiss karne ka mann kar raha hai." She complained as all her intentions of reproaching him fluxed.

She did not realize when his lips brushed against hers in slow soft comforting ways ... His hand rested below her ear, his thumb still caressing her cheek as their breathe mingled. Her fingers ran down his shoulder as there was no space left in between them ... He lifted her above the staircase so now her feet rested on his. She was unprepared but his warm mouth felt nice ... her heart fluttered at the delicate butterfly of a kiss and he was so satisfied to observe his effect on her ...

" Chulbul Bhabhi mujhe papad fry karke do!" Rudra' s voice broke the romantic RiKara riverie.

Om stood near the table watching Gauri run robotically from the kitchen to the dining table and then from the dining table to the kitchen in different speedy rounds because Dadi wanted mustard pickle and then Pinky wanted finely chopped onions ... She is so energetic he thought his flirtatious mind being distracted by all the energy she is going to require for his plans of the night.

Om refilled the glasses of water around the table and then pulled a chair for Gauri as she finally came to eat. She served him and was about to take the first bit of food when he glared at her ...

" Aaj tumne sabzi kyon nahi banaai?" He mumbled irritated

" Anika Bhabhi wanted to cook it today, humne unhe aaj yeh recipe sikhayi hai." She told him seeing that he was dipping bits of chapati in the bowl of dal to eat ... She smiled hopeless knowing he is not going to touch the vegetable on his plate.

After he finished two chapatis ... She kept two more on his plate. He looked at her pleading ... He did not want to eat more chapatis and she gave him a strict smile. His appetite had to be taken care of ... He is so unnecessarily losing weight! She did not like it...

" Gauri mujhe nahi khana." He requested babyishly

"Dekhiye hum inn haathon se aataa goond ke gol gol roti banane ki mehnat isiliye nahi karte ke humaare pati hi dikhaayen nakhre noor jahaan ke!" She reprimanded him and distantly high-fived Anika ... Thanking her for the diction.

Omkara held her wrist to see the brown mark on her palm ... She again burnt her hand while making her 'gol gol roti'. He looked at her furiously such a careless Gauri was rare ... She understood his expression and looked down at her plate with a sad face which was inflating like a balloon ... He kept looking at her for five minutes and she did not care to eat anything ...

He held her hand from below the table and pressed it affectionately ... She looked at him with a pout.

"Please khana kha lo ... Baad mein argue karenge ..." He said in a humbly defeated sigh and Gauri was finally able to have her food properly ... It felt bliss after an exhausting day.

He held her hand to drag her out of the house for their routine night stroll after AniRi cleared the table ...

" How was your day? " He asked as she slid her hand in his arm.

" Hum bohot busy thhe aaj, Subah Maa ke saath ek book launch event par Gaye thhe ... Phir main aur Bhabhi sale mein shopping karne Gaye thhe aur shaam ko toh Rudra ke saare friends ne ghar par aakar Jhingaa lala hoo hoo kiya ... Main, Prinku aur Bhabhi sambhalte sambhalte pareshan ho Gaye ..." She said yawning.

He smiled thinking about the where abouts of her day, He knew she would have lectured the watchman on not sleeping at night, scolded the utensils in charge of the house keeping staff for using dishwash liquid carelessly and would have called for called for her Shankarji if the floors of the mansion were not sweeped and mopped properly ... She does all of this everyday.

He told her about the detailing of his work ... She actually never understood anything especially his fancy elaborated terminologies but he liked telling her because she was never bored like anyone else plus she was learning from him. With being spouses and friends ... Both of them had begun to share a Teacher-Student relationship ... He liked it.

" Humme Kerela Jana hain " She demanded and he finalized the destination of their next vacation ... Both of them deserved a break with each other from their schedules.

They lay below the dark night sky where the moon seemed to lighten the night bringing forth the stars that shone in the blackness ... She glanced at him while tracing the checkered pattern of his shirt as he gazed the twinkle... She could feel his heart beat at the back of her head and he could hear her soft breathe as her head rested on his chest ... That is when they always felt peaceful ...

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Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditiyuvi

woww...really amazing...keep writing...love rikara...

Thank you Aditi 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Can't express how much I loved this..this kind of writings always have it's own charisma...Ri has her charms..I just love this girl...and after watching today's epi, (Though I've watched the Ri's part with family members only) I can proudly declare that she deserve to be called as a perfect bahu...har kisi ki fikaar hain usse..and she was handling everyone with so much love and care..bahu hone ke farz nibhane ke saath saath haq bhi jata rahi thi aaj..she's such a sweetheart...aur yaha bhi you described her relation with the family members with so much simplicity...simple words mein sab kuch bata diya...sanskari bahu and strict biwi..ahaan..what a character combo...loved it..RiKara's part was simple, yet meaningful...I just want to see them as a normal couple...yeh log other couples ki tay tay phiss kar degi with their chemistry if cvs explore their relation theek se..uss din ka intezaar toh hain..but when you guys come with this kind of stuffs, toh humari armaan poori ho jati hain...I just loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pooru.. finally you got some inspiration to write this drabble after cheering for our cheerleaders..!!😆
Udhar bhi perfect bahu and idhar bhi.. 😲 Mujhe na ab yeh perfect bahu ki darr lagne lagi.. 😆
Oh that butterfly kiss.. Gauri kitna koshish kar le.. she will melt like icecream before him.. her only weakness so far...😆

Kerala jana hain.. Acha.. you are from kerala..? right?
I loved that she listens to him, not matter what. That s a sign of healthy husband and wife relationship.

You know what..you should have continued a little more after that.. i felt i wanted to read and you stopped it already..

😡


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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so... I really don't have the perfect word to describe it. It was different, relaxing and adorable at the same time.
Aise RiKara ko normal life mein settle hue dekh kar man ko shanti mil gayi. They manage to find moments for themselves while acting out their roles in the family. The little kiss was *sigh*, those tiny moments during dinner were adorable and the nightly walk tradition while they talk to each other about their day... so normal yet so perfect!

That they both listen to each other, wait for each other, manage to find romance in the most mundane of things just because they're together... is perfection.

Can't wait for more awesomeness from you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pooru this is so romantic one awww ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was different kind of Rikara for me so soothing and serene just like a gush of cold wind in the hot sun.. am so done with the telly thingy.. but today's episode was good.. and this os is bliss.. Om waiting for his wifey to call him is just so adorable..
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Can't express how much I loved this..this kind of writings always have it's own charisma...Ri has her charms..I just love this girl...and after watching today's epi, (Though I've watched the Ri's part with family members only) I can proudly declare that she deserve to be called as a perfect bahu...har kisi ki fikaar hain usse..and she was handling everyone with so much love and care..bahu hone ke farz nibhane ke saath saath haq bhi jata rahi thi aaj..she's such a sweetheart...aur yaha bhi you described her relation with the family members with so much simplicity...simple words mein sab kuch bata diya...sanskari bahu and strict biwi..ahaan..what a character combo...loved it..RiKara's part was simple, yet meaningful...I just want to see them as a normal couple...yeh log other couples ki tay tay phiss kar degi with their chemistry if cvs explore their relation theek se..uss din ka intezaar toh hain..but when you guys come with this kind of stuffs, toh humari armaan poori ho jati hain...I just loved it...


Tasnim 🤗

I agree Ri is innocent and charismatic she is perfect as Lady Kara and an Obahu ... In the episode .. I just saw the way she gave it back to the adh nangi vamp, Gaon basa nahi bhikhaari pehle aa gaye 🤣 Gauri sachme best hain ... I really liked the way Gauri and Omkara took care of their family as responsible individuals ... But at the same time I want them in one frame talking and solving whatever problem crops up ... I don't want moments or attraction ... I am just missing their screen presence 😒

Coming to my drabble ... I was thoroughly disappointed not having any RiKara scene yesterday isiliye socha khud hi kuch light hearted likhti hoon ... First thought of writing a sequence of After party at OM where RiKara is relaxing at the pool ... But then socha to write something about dinner time

RiKara as a couple have a lot of scope being a lethal combination of what we call innocence and intensity ... We have been witness of how they don't even need dialogues to express their emotions ... Saying this makes me miss Atif sir terribly! But yeh baat toh shat pratishat satyvachan hain ke ... Jab romance karne pe aaye toh baaki couples ki tayy tayy phhish kardenge RiKara ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: yayini

Pooru.. finally you got some inspiration to write this drabble after cheering for our cheerleaders..!!😆

Udhar bhi perfect bahu and idhar bhi.. 😲 Mujhe na ab yeh perfect bahu ki darr lagne lagi.. 😆
Oh that butterfly kiss.. Gauri kitna koshish kar le.. she will melt like icecream before him.. her only weakness so far...😆

Kerala jana hain.. Acha.. you are from kerala..? right?
I loved that she listens to him, not matter what. That s a sign of healthy husband and wife relationship.

You know what..you should have continued a little more after that.. i felt i wanted to read and you stopped it already..

😡


Karthi 🤗
RiKara is habit to me ... Toh every little thing can inspire me to write RiKara ... And more than that you know how much I needed some detox and peace of mind
Show mein she was perfect ... Here I don't know, just tried and kept her normal 😳 ...
I will repeat the way I named your combination of RiKara ... Creamy ice cream and hot and soft dark chocolate browny just yum ... Bataao kaise resist kar paaenge?
I am not from Kerela but I myself want to visit Kerela ... Isiliye flow mein Gauri ko bhi Kerela bhej rahi hoon ...
Again I wanted to show that these two are happy in their normal relationship ... That is what you said to be a healthy relationship
You know this one is already elongated ... I thought of writing their walk then added the dinner part and then zested with the butterfly kiss ... All of this spinning around her dialogue ..
" Suniye Rudra ke Bhaiiyya..."
I am super happy knowing that you wanted to read more and don't worry ... There is a lot more to come from my side 😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_


Tasnim🤗

I agree Ri is innocent and charismatic she is perfect as Lady Kara and an Obahu ... In the episode .. I just saw the way she gave it back to the adh nangi vamp, Gaon basa nahi bhikhaari pehle aa gaye🤣Gauri sachme best hain ... I really liked the way Gauri and Omkara took care of their family as responsible individuals ... But at the same time I want them in one frame talking and solving whatever problem crops up ... I don't want moments or attraction ... I am just missing their screen presence😒

Coming to my drabble ... I was thoroughly disappointed not having any RiKara scene yesterday isiliye socha khud hi kuch light hearted likhti hoon ... First thought of writing a sequence of After party at OM where RiKara is relaxing at the pool ... But then socha to write something about dinner time

RiKara as a couple have a lot of scope being a lethal combination of what we call innocence and intensity ... We have been witness of how they don't even need dialogues to express their emotions ... Saying this makes me miss Atif sir terribly! But yeh baat toh shat pratishat satyvachan hain ke ... Jab romance karne pe aaye toh baaki couples ki tayy tayy phhish kardenge RiKara ...

Yup...their sizzling chemistry ek bar dikha de show mein, toh aag laga denge..par hum itne khush kismat kaha to get romantic scenes, thoda sa ss aur a proper conversation between them...!! 🥱 mujhe aab show dekhke hi frustration hoti hain...ss ki baat toh chhod hi dete hain, we didn't even get a meaningful conversation..jo milta hain woh sab kuch bhi adhi adhoori lagti hain...I miss Atif..he used to make scenes soulful..bina koyi conversation ke kya qayamaat wali scenes mile thhe..sab kuch chala gaya..DBO, Atif, RiKara's ss, their moments together...aur believe me, elder couple ki woh ghissi piti story se tang aa chuki hoon...they always get long scenes with kabhi na khatam hone wali conversation..aur hum ek scene, ek convo ke liye taras gaye hain..waah..!! kya kismat... 😕 Thank God...!! Your writings are savior..mann chaha scenes se lekar deep meaningful conversation..sab kuch milti hain..and I really love you for writing these kind of stuffs... 😳

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