The Day - OS *shivika ontrack* *thanku for 100+ likes * 9/8

LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

this is too beautiful yaar..👏

i hope they needs to show something like this in show too

i like the way you end vikram and ragini's story 😆

only you guys stories is motivating me to watch this show...

ps: i will pray to god that sometimes u needs to get writer's block so that we will get this type of khidkitod stories 😆

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: shonasyl
Awsome i love it. 😭. **khushi ke aansu** :'))

Just Wonderful. ... keep sharing wid us yaaar...

I find my Old Shivika here and Thank yu so much ❤️🤗

... big and FAT thank yu...

XOXO.

Thank you thank you and thank you sooo much for this lovely comment shona baby😳🤗

Love you loads.

Am so glad that this made you happy. Would try to write more.

Keep reading and keep supporting me sweetheart😳⭐️

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lourel24
Awesome

Thank you dear😊

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Awesome...
Though first they got struck with Vikram and Ragini but they are mr and mrs khidkitod Oberoi...will do it with some tadi
Poor Ragini and Vikram got struck in their own plans
Now they are together

thank you so much dear😊

keep reading and keep supporting me😊

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Totally amazing Smiley Di..
This Bikram and Nagini!!!
They had tried their best to separate Shivika... But no one could separate them...
Love it a lot...
Tnq so much for a Khidki Darwaja Tod update...

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: farinaks
Awesome ...amazing...brilliant... Perfect..chummeshwari... Kidkitod...darwazatod
Wish to see something like thus happening in show
Tq fr pm smilu
Loads of love ❤️

thank u soo soo much farah dear😊

you are a sweet heart

love u loads😊

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MafiaQueen17

@MafiaQueen17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Awesome
Thanks for lovely story and pm

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Docshradha

@Docshradha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

WATTTY! I asked for os and I get ds ( imma getting better at short forms ) ek ke saath ek free . I literally got excited hahaha. U gave us what we all wanted . And its u who are a sweetheart for coming up with something so creative in a short span of time and that too with a writer's block ! I guess the block is unblocked know and we can get a super duper SR!! Loved it smiley . Jtm 😳 keep writing .

Ps: sorrry for the delay . Lol and just to tell i that ur threat didn't drag me here . I couldn't wait to read it .

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Pragnya Kiran

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Shit!
I should have read that day this awesome piece of writing yaar.
Its great! Bravo Smiley!
I loved it.
Write more.
Write few drabbles at least it may help you with writers block.

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