Shivika TS: Love and War(07/08/2017)~~(Completed)

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: S.love1
This was awesome 👏
Loved shivaay sensor, it was finally very useful
Although shivaay didn't find out the whole truth but the way you have composed this 2 shot really satisfies us as readers as we know know he will find out the whole truth
Please do continue if u can😳

Loved how adorable annika was, a very fun piece
Thanks
Much love!😃

Thank you so much...😊

Shivaay's Annika Sensor is so adorable...

I wanted Shivaay to be the one who finds the truth himself...so that he has enough clues to work on and find it...

Annika is always fun to watch...She is so adorable...😳

Though few times she tests our patience...😆

Like billuji, I end up aww-ing her cuteness...

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar...
it was superb...
it should have been happened like this...

Thank you...😛

Even I wish it happened this way...

Shivaay's game plays are fun to watch...

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
Yup like this alternative too...

Thank you...😛

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: bworm
Lovely. Enjoyed it so.
Would have been an unusual twist if it had played this way in the show.

Thank you dear...😛

Good to know that you enjoyed it...

Indeed the twist would have been pleasant...maybe CV's have planned for a bigger dhamaka...

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Blink_Cat
kirthi... this is such a beautiful TS. Specially 2nd part.
shivaay's anika senser is amazing.
chivaay was sooo... cute. anika told him truth, bt nt illegitimecy one. anika unbutton his coat, he was like he dnt plan this. aur coat covering them was nice. and anika's janaman was superb
thanks a lot 4 PM.

Thank you...😊

I love Shivaay's Annika Sensor...

Drunk Annika is even funnier than sober one...Rudy's punch party was 😆...As Annika says Shivaay becomes cute billuji when she becomes bold...Hope we get to see bold Annika and cute billuji avatar of Shivaay during the wedding track...

I was laughing imagining how Shivaay would react when Annika start using endearment terms to him...

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
Amazing. I loved how it played out in your story!

Thank you dear...😊

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Superb...
Shivay sensing Anika saved his plan else it would have been flop
Finally Anika told everything but left the main part

Thank you...😊

Yes the game changer was the Annika sensor...

Yes Annika left the main part but gave enough clues for Shivaay to work on and find it by himself...😳

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Kirthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ithihaas
I really loved your version of Bhaang for Annika. She didn't reveal the truth in entirety but still gave Shivaay enough clues to find out the truth. Wish something like this happened on show.

Thank you ...😛

I really wanted Shivaay's plan to work in the show...😳but Annika emerged winner in that...

Hoping that Shivaay hasn't forgotten the truths Annika revealed when he was high...and also this was all a plot to bring out Pinky's sachai...😳