Darmiyaan - A Shivika Short Story [Chapter 5 - Page 23] *18/8*

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Seema84
Beautiful update dear OMG here also nagini 🥱 why why why but got some relief how annika did major wala chop 👏 ... btw nice update n thanks for the pm...

Thank you so much Seema. ❤️

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#162

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome update yar
wah...Annika did the o my mata of pinky...it was superb... Annika and shivaay become more comfortable with each other...totally loving this

Thank you so much. So glad to know that you're liking it. 😳

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#163

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
Rhea loving this story, I don't know how many times I have said how much I adore this story because I can relate to it so much. please keep writing, loved how Annika took care of that Nagini!

Aww thank you so much dear. I'm so glad that you're liking this story. It really means a lot. I will try to update soon. ❤️😳

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
haha anika to rescue was awesome
glad shivaay and anika shared their pain
please do continue
bye sumi

Thank you Sumi! Will update soon! 😃

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#165

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose
Oh so love is in air for the couples
That is too cute to read man rhea
I am thoroughly enjoying the story
Pls update soon
Thank u for the pm dr

Thank you Jen! So glad that you're liking the story. Will update soon. <3

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#166

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome update.
Loved it totally.
Very well written.
Enjoyed reading this.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for the pm:)

Thank you so much. It means a lot. ❤️

Will update soon. 😳

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Wow a cute update...

Though it started with jealousy...

As rigini clinging to shivu baby & Shivaay feeling uncomfortable wen she doesn't leave & Anika getting angry...

Loved d juice spilled..

Then Shivaay revealing abt his feelings for tia & his heartbreak to Anika

Which he never told to anyone.

Shivika & rikara go to shopping...

Shivika learn abt rikara relation...

Though not completely but their doubts go clear...

Continue soon

Thanks 4 pm

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Mystrygirl152

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Oh my god! It's such a sweet story! The chemistry between our Billu and billi is just excellent! Continue soon please.. 🥱

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#169

Originally posted by: farinaks
Nice update dear
Continue soon
Tq fr pm

Thank you Farah. Will try to update soon. 😳

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#170

Originally posted by: -Tadibaaaz-
Hi Rhea!!😳
Annika was so so jealous of Nagini..😆And she did OMM of Nagini..🤣Thank you for that..😛😆 Awww..Shivaay opened up in front of Annika..😳Loved that..⭐️RiKara part was cute..Totally loved the update..😃

Thanks for the pm..😃Update soon..😳

Love,
Rusha

Aww Rusha. Thank you so much for this sweet comment. Means a lot. ❤️

Will try to update soon. 😳