Rikara FF: Junoon : EPILOGUE - Pg 19 : 22-08-17; Index - Pg1; COMPLETE - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Beautiful update yaar. But hamare serial se bhi jaldi jaldi SR ho gayi Rikara ki😆
Anyways loved how Gauri accepted that she also wants to be with him. But slightly cnfused on wot Om said ki shaayad mein tumse muhobbat bhi karne lagoon. He is not yet in love😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Absolutely love the way you characterize Gauri. Shes smart independent caring understanding and most importantly not afraid to fall in love even after everything she has been through! The fact that physical intimacy did not cloud her judgement is another aspect i admired👏
thankyou for such an intriguing read! please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: perfictionist

Absolutely love the way you characterize Gauri. Shes smart independent caring understanding and most importantly not afraid to fall in love even after everything she has been through! The fact that physical intimacy did not cloud her judgement is another aspect i admired👏

thankyou for such an intriguing read! please update soon


Thank you for this beautiful review! And the next update will be real soon. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
awesome update.. thanks for the pm.. keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Finally they confess their feelings..she confess about dil ki bhadaas and he confess about his dil ki baat
And and finally she is ready to give them a chance
lovely update dear update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Loved this part...both of them are trying to make their relationship work...and Ri is falling for her Kara...finally they're finding solace in each other..it was awesome...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Awesome update...👍🏼
loved it ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Beautiful update...really nice to read...loving and caring omkara...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
This is getting better and better. Rikara are finally giving a second chance to their marriage. I love it. Om is all set to win her heart. I wonder what she meant by I am ready.??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 16 - Khushiyaan

The last Part a.k.a Part 15 - Beintehaa Mohabbat, if someone has skipped is in Page 5. This is for those who have skipped reading that chapter. I uploaded Part 15 and 16 on the same day back-to-back so there might be some confusion.

A/N: SURPRISE! 😃

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"Haan, bhaiya. Hum sabhi theek hain. Woh.. aap log kab laut rahe hain America se? Ok... theek hain.. to main aapse phir baat karti hun.. Ok, bye." Gauri finished her call and almost walked into Omkara who was standing right behind her.

"Are! Kya hua? Itni jaldi jaldi taiyaar ho ke kaha jaa rahi ho? Aur woh bhi itne subah subah?" Omkara held her in his arms, while she squirmed.

"Om! Hume jaane dijiye na! Aapko pata hai na.. Aaj Anika bhabi ki god-bharai ka rasam hai? Hume kitne kaam hai! Aap naashte ke liye humaare saath neeche chaliye.. sabhi humara intezaar kar rahe honge.. Chaliye!" Gauri said to him, while she tried to drag him with her out of their room.

"Acha, baba. Chalta hun. Lekin pehle ek morning kiss to de do hume!" Omkara said to her, giving her an endearing smile.

"Om.. aap ye subah subah kya rat laga ke baith gaye ho? Chale! Hume deri ho rahi hai!"

"Deri to tum kar rahi ho! Hum to kab se aapke saath jaane ke liye taiyaar hai, par hume humaari kiss de do... phir hum chalenge!" Omkara grinned at her.

"Om.." Gauri grumbled as she blushed.

Omkara caresses her heatened cheek, and bringing his lips on her cheeks closer to her ear and whispered. "Kal raat aapne hi to hume pehle kiss kiya tha.. bhul gayi?"

Gauri looked down, turning a further red as she remembered their last first night together. It was their first night as a married couple because she won't consider the night they had spent together in Goa due to their drunkennes their first night.

She quickly looked up and kissed him on his lips, moaning as they continued till they were breathless.

"Ab chale?" Gauri gasped out.

"Bilkul! Jo hukum ho aapki!" Omkara said, giving her a wide smile.

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After the God-bharai rasam was done and all the guests had gone home, everyone sat tired in the hallroom.

"Anika bhabi, aapne baby ka koi naam socha hai kya? Matlab ladka hoga to kya rakhenge yaa ladki hogi to kya rakhenge... Waise aapki koi preferences hai... matlab aapko aur Shivaay bhaiya ko kya chahiye - ladka ya ladki?" Rudra asked Anika bhabi.

Dadi who was sitting next to Rudra, hit him on his head and said, "Are khote! Ladka aur ladki me kya rakha hai? Humaare ghar dono ek samaan hai.. Samjhe?"

"Are dadi, mera woh matlab nahi tha! Maine to bas waise hi puch liya..."Rudra said, as he rubbed his head where Dadi hit him.

Everyone burst out laughing as he made a crying face.

"Mujhe to bas ek healthy sa baccha chaahiye. Mere paas ladka aur ladki me koi difference nahi hain. Aur Shivaay ko to..." Anika said, as she looked at her husband.

"Mujhe bhi, sirf ek healthy baccha chahiye. I don't have any problem with genders." Shivaay said, smiling at his wife who smiled back.

"Acha aap dono ka romance aap log apne kamre me kijiye ga.. yaha par thoda PG-rated rakhiye kyunki hum bhi hai yahaan.. Om! Tu hume kab khush khabri de raha hai?" Rudra said, as he now targeted Om for teasing. Omkara and Gauri glanced at each other, both of them turning red as the whole family awaited for their answer.

Dadi once again hit him on his head.

"Are khote! Uski to abhi abhi nayi shaadi hui hain.. Tu abhi se hi uske peeche pad gaya! Lekin teri shaadi ko to ek saal hone ko aaya hai na? Tu kab hume khush khabri sunaane wala hai?"

"Are Dadi! Aap hume hi kyun daat te ho humesha?! Humaari bhi to shaadi kuch hi din pehle hui hain! Aur hum to abhi bhi padhaai kar rahe hai... hum kaise - ?" Rudra stammered, as he tried to divert everyone's attention from him and his blushing wife who was currently glaring furiously at him.

"Haan. Haan. Jab teri baari aayi to kaise? Chup kar! Apna muh kholne se pehle kuch soch liya kar!" Omkara said to him.

Everyone laughed at Rudra's foolishness.

"Chalo ab bohot raat ho gayi hain. Sabhi sone chale jao. Dekho Anika puttar bichaari so gayi hai.. kitni tired hogi wo aaj ke baad.. Shivaay, use dhyaan se apne kamre me le ja.. Hum bhi sone jaate hain.. " Dadi said to everyone and everyone slowly got up tiredly to head to their rooms.

Omkara and Gauri stood as well to head to their room. As they passed Rudra and Bhavya, Omkara hit Rudra lightly at the back of his head, and showed his tongue at him.

"Kya O! Aapko main kal dekh lunga!" Rudra whined at him as he pouted.

Both the couples laughed as they parted ways to walk to their rooms.

"Aap dono.. abhi bhi baccho ki tarah harkate karte hain!" Gauri chuckled as she shook her head at their antics.

"Hum to Oberois to aise hi hain. Ab aapko hume aise hi apnaana padega." Omkara said as he held her against their room's door.

"Hume to aap jaise hain bohot ache lagte hain."

Omkara bent down and kissed her and she kissed back...

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As they lay awake on the bed in each other's arms after they had finished their love-making session, Omkara brushed his hand through her long hair.

"To tumhe kya khayaal hain?" Omkara asked Gauri.

"Kis baat ki?" Gauri asked, moving back to look at his face.

"Jo Rudra ne kaha... Tumhe kya lagta hain? Hume kab gharwaalon ko khush khabri sunaani chaahiye?" Omkara asked as he looked down at her.

"Itne jaldi.. Humari job.." Gauri stammered as she really thought about it.. Waise... if she really thought through it, the thought of bringing a part of her and Omkara into this world did many pleasant things to her. And then she realized, that she really wanted it. To be a mother.

"Tum apni company ki owner ho. No one will ask you any questions. It depends on you.. if you don't want then... hum wait kar sakte hain." Omkara said to her, caressing her face.

"I just realized... ki main... taiyaar hun. I mean.. I have no problem.. Aur aap? Aapko kya chaahiye?" Gauri asked him back.

"Mujhe tumhaari jaisi ek beti chaahiye." Omkara whispered to her, making her smile widely.

"Aur agar aap ke jaisa beta hua to?" Gauri asked raising an eyebrow at him.

"Mujhe koi farak nahi padega. To agli baar mujhe beti de dena." Omkara said as he grinned at her.

"Agli baar?! Pehle waale ko to aa jaane do... aap dusre bacche ke baare me bhi soch rahe hai?!" Gauri exclaimed at him, making him laugh aloud. Gauri joined him as well.

She sighed happily.

"Om... mujhe kabhi kabhi dar lagta hain. Ki hum abhi kitne khush hain. Itni khushi maine apni life me kabhi experience nahi kiya. Mujhe kabhi kabaar dar lagta hain... ki humaare khushiyon ko koi nazar na lag jaaye." Gauri said to him with tears in her eyes.

Omkara held her close, tightly as he kissed her forehead and said to her, "Aisa kuch nahi hoga, Gauri. Kuch nahi hoga."

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P.S: Hope you will like this one as well!
Edited by DeewaniMastaani - 8 years ago

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