RiKara FIVE SHOT - TU HAIN KE NAHI - EPI THREE PROMO UPDATED Pg 12 - Page 2

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Wow dear.this is wonderful teaser

Now plz.update full part

As I wanna read full

Hola guys🤗

Finally I am able to post the update in the forum ... hectic life you know!🤔

To begin with Gauri is well qualified and not just any 5^th pass from Bareilly, other facts of RiKara story remaining constant to my creative liberty.

This one is especially dedicated to Dr. Priya @Admin Of The Shrenu Parikh Administration Thread because we are from the similar bandwagon of people who wanted Gauri To leave behind Oberoi Mansion and more importantly Omkara for whatever he has said and done to her.

The plotline is similar to the last episode of Dil Boley Oberoi ... where he tries and asks her to stay ... the twist here is that she decides and leaves.

For you all know the expressive me, yet again this story is away from being melodramatic and complicated. Hope you guys have a good time reading it

Happy RiKara Reading!

EPISODE ONE

He felt the tenderness of the lush green grass while observing a disciplined queue of black ants; Mt. Carmel is certainly able to teach more discipline to these ants rather than their own students! He chuckled looking at many kids howling and running across the play ground. Thankfully the ants were moving in the direction opposite to that of his. He sighed relief because now the ants were not going to walk over his body or clothes. He did not want to stand up. Relaxing on the grass in such mild cloudy weather felt very comfortable.

AAAHHH!!! He griped in pain. Something stung the back of his neck with random force. He turned to hold the tennis ball lying at his back now. He looked here and there not able to figure out who exactly threw the ball? It pained him a lot but he understood whoever hit him, hit him unintentionally, after all so many kids were playing around him.

" I am Sorry, Humme MAAF kar dijiye

From staring at the ball Omkara raised his head to look at a small boy who continued to apologize to him for more than five times. Om was shocked beyond wits and continued staring at the little wonder who seemed to be the facsimile of a five year old Rudra Singh Oberoi and adding to it were his beautiful Kanji eyes ... For a moment Omkara thought that he was hallucinating because of staying away from his brothers for more than a month now ... he thought he should have gone back to Mumbai straightaway from Kolkata instead of landing in Shimla this morning ... he recalls how Rudra was abusing him over the phone ... did his curse really work? Omkara stupidly continued thinking ...

"Aap toh bade ajeeb ho! Humne aapko kitni baar sorry bola ... Aap sunn kyon nahi rahe ho? Mera ball lagne ki wajah se behre ho gaye ho kya ????

The baby boy went nearer to him and started pulling his earlobes to check if Om is able to listen to him or not.

Om smiled realizing how cute the kid is ... he handed over the ball to him after which the cutie pie sat beside him and folded his legs.

Kya hua? Om asked him confused.

"Aapko humaari wajah chot lagi ... Dard bhi ho raha hoga ... Hum aapko chhodke nahi jaaenge ... aap ke paas hi baithenge ... " the little one pouted

"Don't worry ... I am fine, kuch nahi hua mujhe. "Om explained

"Pehle aap humse Kahiye ... Aapne humme maaf kiya! He demanded

"Haa Baba Haa ... Maaf kiya tumhe ... Omkara spoke rolling his eyes.

It was after good five minutes that Omkara understood that the boy did not go away and was not wanting to go away ...

"Beta tumhara recess time hain, tum jaake khelo ... Omkara said to him in a composed tone

"Humko aapke paas hi rehna padega ... kahi aap sachme andhe yaa behre ho gaye toh?!?! The boy started twirling his fingers on the grass ...

"Achha theek hain ! Tum dhyaan rakho mera ... par pehle apna naam toh bataao? Omkara chuckled

"HRIDAAN ... Aur Aapka ?

"OMKARA ... both of them looked at each other for a while ... Om was amazed as well as happy that this little kid is able himself singularly ... not conditioned to title himself.

" Aaap yaha new teacher ho? Hridaan asked curiously ... Omkara nodded negatively.

"Toh kya student ho? Hridaan started scratching his head ... Omkara laughed.

"Main yaha kaam karne aayaa hoon Om tells him

"Toh aapka laptop kaha hain? Hridaan darted him ... " Humaari mumma laptop pe type karke kaam karti hai! Aaapke paas laptop hain? he was investigating.

" Mujhe yaha laptop ki zarurat nahi hain. Om clarified ... And Hridaan forced himself to think about it.

" Aap acchhe ho aapna mere friend bann jaao! Hridaan offered his hand and they both shook hands in agreement.

Toh hum aapko kya bulaaye? Omkara Bhaiyya bulane ke liye aap thode se bade ho ... Omkara uncle balaane ke liye aap thode chhote ho .. aur friend ko sir thodi naa kehte hain! ... Hridaan explained his dilemma ...

"You can call me Om. Omkara asserted...

" Nahi nahi ... bado ko naam se nahi bulaate ... Shankarji gussa ho jaaenge humse. Hridaan declared thinking of a possible alternative. " Hum aapko KARA bulaaenge ! Theek hain naa? Hridaan asked for permission and Om smiled knowing a new rendition of his name.

"Achha theek hain theek hain ... abhi humme jana hoga nahi toh mere doosre friends Baura jaaenge ... hum aapse baad mein milte hain. Hridaan got up ... Dusted himself and walked away ... just to come back running in a few moments ... Omkara was surprised... Hridaan jiggled through his pocket and then put a small wrapped candy inside Omkara's shirt pocket... " Aap aaj mere friend bann gaye naa isiliye maine aapko kuch diya! Hridaan smiled happily and ran away ... Omkara was about to look into his pocket when the peon interrupted him ...

" Sir aapka lunch serve kar diya hain. Om had to get up.

After lunch Omkara walked in the long silent corridor of the school looking at the blank walls on which he was supposed to create something creative and different but in that very moment ... the wall felt similar to his own life ... plain and void. The loner was certainly unhappy ... he was never alone, always had his family around but had begun feeling reclusive for some time now.

Jahnvi had finally divorced Tej and moved out of Oberoi Mansion but chose to work for her share in the Oberoi industries, Tej & Svetlana landed in jail on grounds of different cases and charges, Priyanka had settled with Ranveer in Delhi, Pinky realized it was not just her Jethji fostering a mistress ... even Shakti was taking good care of Kamini but Pinky chose to live in an infidel marriage because she wanted to live as an Oberoi. Rudra decided to focus towards building a career and so started working as a fitness consultant in Oberoi firms, Shivaay is super busy managing work and taking care of his three year old Ansh' with a 6 month old pregnant Anika ... and above all Dadi is continuosly insisting that Omkara should think about getting married and having his own family.

Omkara had a very strange kind of feeling thinking about marriage because as a matter of fact he was already married to GAURI ... what if she chose to leave him and he chose to let her go? He knows he totally deserved it for assassinating Gauri morally in every possible way. The decision was practically very right but emotionally very wrong for him.

Other than his baseless hatred for Gauri, it was his fear of commitment, relationships, family and love that became an important factor to let Gauri walk away so easily. He had seen his mother struggling to save her own matrimony for a long time, that had become highly distressing for him but now as time passed and started healing the wounds of his disappointments and insecurities ... he felt sad. Realizing how Shivaay and Anika worked hard at every level to make their marriage work made Om feel very guilty because even he got the chance of being married and have a devoted wife like Gauri.

Gauri was always there for him. What come may! She helped him through so much and eventually he realized that Gauri was not just a part of his life but a habit for him. He appreciated her presence during her absence. Every little thing he decided was the outcome of embracing Gauri's thought process. He actually started loving her but then decided to not interfere in her life after knowing the truth of Kali Thakur. He resolved to punish himself. Gauri deserves a peaceful life ... a life without him troubling her ... afterall it is not at all Gauri's fault that he realizes the value of many things priceless ... after losing them!

This became a very strong reason for him to not go back home and keep traveling in the name of work. everyone kept complaining but then after a few moments all of them became busy with th ups and downs of their own life. he was left alone.

All of a sudden he remembered Hridaan's friendship present which was in his pocket ... he took it out and opened the wrap ... smiling surprised to see a KAMPAT in the wrapper ... Om had a sudden urge to toss it in the air and catch it in his mouth but then he simply kept in on his tongue to enjoy the sweet and sour taste reminiscing many crazy memories.

So guys I am very eager to know about how did you like it!!!

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Hridaan is the carbon copy of Ri..cutie pie he is..!! So Omkara realized that he started loving her nd Ri uski adaat ban chhuki hain..but afsos..!! She's not with him..hope they'll meet soon...loved the chemistry between Kara nd Hrid...will be waiting for the next updates..till then dher sara pyaar for u for this lovely shot...

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hey poorva my bhena 🤗

Big hug for this lovely part🤗 with lots of love

So... hridaan.. nice name btw

He is copy of gauri.. same to same..action bhi or reaction bhi😆

Love the bond of hridkara...they looking cute together..

Finally kara realized that he is in love but she is not with him by her own choice .. you are ryt kisi cheej ki value tab pata chalti hai jab woh hmare pas nhi hoti

And hridaan gives him that kampat haha and omakra's sudden urge to toss that candy lol isse pata chlta hai ke kitni miss kiya ja raha hai gauri ko.. i also missing uh😒

I hope wohi ho jo maine last page pe comment kiya tha😆

When will he meet gauri?in next chap?

Overall i loveeeddd it

Update soon