Shivika Os||His Remedy|| 23.7(seperation Track)

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome anya...

loved it...it was too emotional but beautiful

you portrayed their emotions amazingly...

Anger,hurt,jealousy everything was there...

it was a beautiful shot

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S.love1

@S.love1

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow

Just what I wanted to read to take out my frustration on the current track

You have written this awesome one shot just perfect and even the ending was good, cause it gives us hope

Beautifully portrayed their emotions and feeling, anger love and jealousy...

I love the fact shivaay is not engaged and Samar seems like a descent friend

Much love and keep writing!

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moon99

@moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

That was absolutely beautiful Anya!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️

In this particular OS, I think Anika's pain seemed more intense if you will, she struggled keeping her self together, where as he left no opportunity taunting her 😭

But when she broke down in the bathroom, that was heart-wrenching 🥺
I felt an ache in my heart 😭

But the end just burst through like a ray of sunshine after a storm 😳

I loved it ! ❤️

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hii Anya🤗

Amazing one shot sweetie

Loved this!!!

This was filled with angsty, pain, anger and love pure love..

Loved the last scene when Shivaay opened his fists and smiles.

That was my fav.

This was awesome sweetheart❤️

and All the best for your exams!!!!

Love you

Chhaya

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

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Posted: 8 years ago

amazing os anya.
so ani think shivaay moved on, n cry to b strong, emotional..!!
last was nice, shivaay want his wife back, he kiss her with rights. he will b t one to put that chand again in that breclet that make his anika, ANIKA.
lovely update
-Himanshi