RiKara SS - Amor Intermissus part 08 updated Pg 32 (30/07) Complete

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: alexa.melody
superb yaar 👏
loved their frankness towards each other

Thanks for taking the time to craft such a lovely comment alexa...

There should be an update coming your way soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
romantic update 😊

It was... wasn't it?

I hope you liked it! Thanks for commenting...

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Hi genie..first of all big sorry...my network has some trouble...so wont be connected to the sites all time...so i couldn't make up to the 3rd short on time...so reading both the shots now...what to say both ate amazing...and also i like the bold gauri in the recent update who herself told to om that what she feels for him or how comfortable she is with him...and little bit emotional too...a very beautiful writting on growing relation ship between husband and wife...as a wife i know how its important to convey your thoughts toyour husband in the initial days of your marriage...you portrayed that part with great efficiency...the relation between a hus and wife include lot of emotional faces too ,that too i can feel in your writting...a very well written updates dear...and also i didnt find the qstn on lost chances too...im really sorry for that...please dont feel bad...when my net service become fine i will follow every updates...till then i may be late to comment please forgive me...ok...

Oh yaar Aarathi... you really need to stop apologizing for things not under your control.

We're all on IF for our own pleasure... koi zabardasti nahin hai yahaan. I love to hear from you guys but there's no expectations from my side. I write what I like and I post it with the hope that you'll like it as well. So sit back and relax, I'm very happy that you're able to comment now.

Waise, I'm glad you liked this update. I was basically going off of my own and the experiences of a few friends and sisters when it comes to newly married couples who've had arranged marriages in India. There's that awkward phase when you need to communicate but it is just so weird to try and get your point across without hurting the other person or their ego. You're emotionally involved but nothing too soulmatey has happened yet... thinking back to that phase brings a smile to my face even now.

Anyways, enough of my nostalgia, there should be an update soon and I hope you enjoy that too... some OBros coming up and Dadi too!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
sizzling hot update

Thanks dude!

I'm glad you liked it...

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: minamma
So passionate
Haayee me mar gyi...

Nahiiinn!

I didn't want to kill anyone! 🤢

Please don't be dead... agar aap mar gaye to mera agla update kaise padhoge? *sprinkles fairy dust over you and chants in an unknown language* 😆

There should be an update coming your way soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
loved it so cute

Thanks for taking the time to comment.. I'm glad you found it cute!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
nice hot intense but emotional also

Sumi... yaar thanks for such a lovely comment.

I'm glad you found it intense and emotional... exactly what I was going for.

There should be an update coming up soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: enthusiastic
awesome update dear
loved itt soo much...
thanks for pm

Thanks for taking the time to comment my friend!

There should be an update coming your way soon!

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sara1990

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Ginie, I read it and I forgot to comment. Sorry. That was quite hot. Still blushing. Will be they going for honeymoon soon? Our Pagli understands her Nandi so well. Perfect for each other. Waiting for your next update.

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: ..dtd...
Is it wrap?

its yet bulger and romantic..

our rikara is mature isnt mature in honeymoon🤣

superb yar!!
waiting for next

Sorry if I misunderstood some parts of your comment...

If you meant is it a wrap? No... I have a few more updates coming, nothing as X-rated as this last update tho

You thought it was vulgar? I'm sorry if it offended you in any way... But you also thought it was romantic... so that's nice.

I'm glad you seem to have liked it well enough.

There's an update coming soon!