Drabble- Stupid, Stubborn Hearts (On current track)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shivaay tried hard to look away. He really did. He didn't want to notice how gorgeous she looked in that long, red gown that fitted her curvy self so well. He didn't want to feel like stomping over to her table and beat that stupid fiance of hers into a bloody pulp. Instead, he wanted to be able to focus on his own date sitting in front of him, demanding his attention. He really did.

But hearts were stubborn things, Shivaay realized. They never listened to you and worked at their own will. They stopped beating when your wife hurt you and left, and started beating faster when she came back again. All according to their own pace, with no control of the person they were meant to serve.

Stupid, stubborn hearts.

With much reluctance, Shivaay dragged his eyes away from Annika who was sitting two tables away and looked at Ragini. Ragini seemed pissed off. So she wasn't stupid, and had realized that Shivaay had only asked her to dinner so that he could follow Annika to this place. Well, who cared. As long as Shivaay had Annika within his eyesight and made sure that no man dared to get too close her, he didn't give a flying f**k what anyone else thought of him.

Suddenly, the sound of laughter, like the tinkling of charming, pretty bells, reached his ears. He looked towards her table once again to find her head thrown back and face lit up brightly in mirth. He also noticed that a few other people in the restaurant had turned to look at her and were now staring at this beautiful woman in awe. Shivaay could have killed every single one of them and walked over their corpses nonchalantly. These people, they didn't know anything. They didn't know that the woman there, belonged to him, as he belonged to her. They didn't know that the seat opposite to hers was rightfully his. They didn't know that the Great Shivaay Singh Oberoi would give anything to be there again.

Sighing, he turned to Ragini again, to find her fidgeting impatiently with her purse.

"Shivaay, how about we go to another restaurant?" She said suddenly, startling him.

"Why would we go to another restaurant? This one's perfectly fine." He replied decidedly.

"Yeah, but don't you think it's too crowded?" Then, placing a hand over his on the table and adding in what she aimed for to be a seductive tone, she said, "I want to spend some time with you alone, you know..."

Shivaay not-so-subtly removed his hand from under hers and off the table. Taking a sip from his wine glass and moving his eyesight to a far more interesting view, he said in a haughty tone-

"You can go to a different restaurant if you want to, Ragini. Don't hesitate to send the bill to me."

Ragini widened her eyes at that. She had never felt more insulted in her life before, until what Shivaay said next beat that-

"And as for spending time with me alone, only one woman in the world has the right to do that."

Saying so, he got up from his chair, fixed his suit, and walked towards the seat where his stupid, stubborn heart lay.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kaash...we can see him snub NAGINI like this one day!!! Lovely drabble Payal...to spot on to what Shivvay feel and thinks, but hasn't been able to vocalize!! Love it...for it gives me hope for seeing such on the show too!!😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HahahahahahahahaahahOMG I love thisss!!!! XD <3 and the last part was epiccc xd aah I wish you had continued further but this was supeeerrbb as well
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kaash aisa kuch hua hota

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Posted: 8 years ago
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"You can go to a different restaurant if you want to, Ragini. Don't hesitate to send the bill to me." 🤣🤣 EPIC. I so wish Shivaay do the same in IB.

Beautifully written piece of work. Enjoyed it a lot 😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
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OHHH!!!!!!!!!!! Ragini just got burned!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

"You can go to a different restaurant if you want to, Ragini. Don't hesitate to send the bill to me." 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 You nailed this portion!!!!!!!! Absolutely loved it!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

"And as for spending time with me alone, only one woman in the world has the right to do that." This is what I call ROMANCE!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳

I LOVE READING YOUR WORK! Eagerly waiting for more 😃 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S You spoil me too much you know, you update so often (not that I'm complaining 😆) that when you don't, I'm like --> 🤢
I am always looking forward to reading you work 😛
Oh, this is so embarrassing, but I just wanted to make sure I had your name correct 😳 ... I believe it's Payal, right? PLEASE correct me if I'm wrong. It's just that I can't remember names for LIFE 😆
Edited by moon99 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just loved reading your works payal 🤗
you are really rocking 🥳
If you wanted to go to another restaurant then you can go ragini and dnt hesitate to send the bill to me... 🤣
That was epic 🤣🤣...I really wanted shivaay to give a royal insult to naagini like this in Ishqbaaz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahhahaahah what a chope 🤣
Awww one woman man posseive billu 😆 ❤️
awesome drabble
Edited by zyrah17 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing drabble..
Wish we could have seen such in the show..
Shivaay doing full insult of ragini.. ufff.. what a scene yrr..
Totally loved it..
shivaay so possessive.. fabulous..
Looking forward to read more of ur updates...!!
Till then - gud wishes.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You can go to a different restaurant if you want to, Ragini. Don't hesitate to send the bill to me." That was a tight nd invisible slap on Nagini 's face
And it was commendable
Why did u made it a drabble...I wanna read more wht happen nxt when he reach the table... Make it an OS...THREE SHOT OR TWO SHOT...PLZ PAYAL CONTINUE IT
TQ FR PM

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