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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Enas n Chaya! 😃
A khidkitod collab resulting in a darwazatod update! 😉
Amazing concept dearies. 👏 The intro was fab n the P.s. at the end of the intro was ekdum taka tak that this story is about Pinky's OMM!! 😆
So Ani is the daughter of famous designer n businesswoman Mrs. Avantika Mehta who is also the owner of Aneeqa Fashion House n Mr. Sameer Rey who is also a businessman. Although Ani's parents r divorced, they still r friendly towards each other. 😃 And Ani's step mom Mrs. Shagun Rey is a social worker n loves Ani like her own daughter n also shares warm bonding with Avantika. 😃 Ani also have a loving Dadi who loves her mom as her own daughter n a Nani with whom Ani n her mom Avantika stays. 😃 The CS of Ani's family is damn interesting n Ani is having a loving family. 😃
Okk so Shivika separation is according to the serial but the only difference is that here the world doesn't know that Shivay is married to Anika n also Ani is staying at OM for only 3 month time period before their divorce, thanks to OmRu. 😃
Ch-1:-
Yayy! Mallika got the post of official interior designer at AFH. The Rana family is happy for her. 😃 Hope Mallika gets to know that AFH is owned by Ani's mom n she will be working under Ani's mom soon. 😳 Urrgghhh! That Pinky n Raginii! 😡 🤢 Lemme just ignore their part, but have to mention that how Ani did that Ragini's chop by giving her a curt reply. 😆 😉 I loved Jhanvi doing indirect OMM of Pinky n Ragini. 😛 So OmRu is giving their major ignorance to Shivay. 😆 Shivay is confused ki how come OmRu still love Ani after what she did. Bechara SSO agar apna bach kucha dimaag yaha use karta toh accha hota. Anyways! Yes SSO u better talk to Om, asap! Haahaa! SSO did chop of Ragini by refusing to go with her to select her dress. 😆 Okk then Tej asks Shivay to ask Ani to come for the AFH party. Shivika scene was full of pent up emotions- love, pain, angst, confusion, care. Loved it when Shivay saves Ani from falling in the pool. 😳 Then Shivay tells her about Mallika's party but also tells her that he doesn't want her to accompany him, after Ani refuses to go to the party. 😕 Awww! My poor babies. 😭 💔 Ani was hurt to see him indifferent towards her. And finally at the party, lol Shivay was ignoring Ragini. 😉 And finally Mrs. Avantika Mehta arrives. 😃 In that FB of Shivay where he was recollecting about the interview given by Avantika, shit he had just missed reading about that part that Avantika named AFH after her daughter Anika! Now while talking with her face to face, he is finding similarities btw Ani n Avantika. 😉 SSO plzz use ur pea sized brain here, I beg u! 😆 Avantika is shocked to hear that Shivay is getting engaged again when he's already married to someone else! Jhanvi was going to say something but that Pinky cut her with her nonsense rants about class, standard n all n started praising that yuckini due to her high class!! 🤢 And finally Avantika did a very good OMM of Pinky!! 😉 😆 I was jumping in glee while reading it!! And Shivay was rewinding his rusted memory along with Avantika's words that how many times Ani saved n took him n his family, risking her own life n putting her own reputation at stake! Finally TejVi controls the situation n invites her to Shivay n Ragini's engagement but she refuses it, but finally accepts it after Dadi requests her. Finally the party ends n everyone goes back to their own places. But Pinky's words were making Avantika restless, n on the other hand everyone from OM specially the elders r supper angry at Pinky (hona hi chahiye!) n enters OM but sees that Ani is standing in the living room with a black figure n suddenly she slaps the figure in front of her! Who's that figure?? 😕
Okk dearies I have some doubts for u to clear,
1:- How is Ani living with her mom n Nani (as mentioned in the cs) coz she's at OM right now? 😕
2:- Does Ani's mom knows that Ani is married to Shivay? Coz somewhere I felt that Avantika's burts out at Pinky's taunt was more like a personal burst out than a general burst out. I'm sure none from the Oberois knows about Ani's real background that she's Avantika's daughter, or does everyone knows about it except Shivay n Pinky knows it?? 😕
Plzzz plzzz update soon guys!! I can't even wait to read the next part!! 😉 Its so interesting!! 😳 And thanks Chaya for the pm. 😃 And Enas I'll be sending u buddy request, plzz accept it. 😳
Okk enough of my rants! 😆
With love,
Aheli.


i am glad u enjoyed reading the update through out😊
you will get to know the answer to ur questions in coming updates...😉😉
and i enjoyed every bit of ur comment😊😊...it just made me so happy that u got involved in every part of the story❤️

i hope u enjoy it more as the story unfolds
with love from both of us🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Shona77

Awesome update
Pinky ki toh Sach mein oh my mata ho gayi
I love this avantika character
Plz give next part soon Nd pm me


ofcourse pinky's OMM happened...will continue to 😆😆
u know we have put pinky's OMM as the main point in writing every chapter...hating pinky just brings magic to our wirting😆😆😆



Originally posted by: rash2222

update soonish...

i want to see family reaction and most importantly pinky's


we all want to see that😆😆...turning pinky's face into a tomatoe is what this entire ss is about😆😆


Originally posted by: grockks

Awesome. Superb writing. I like avantika. Waiting for the next update

you'll like her more with each passing update...she's the TRUE MOTHER in our story😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Anya and Enas,
guys loved the update.
It was indeed awesome.
I'm waiting for next update.
Totally loved it.
Pls update soon


we're really glad u like it😊😊
will try to do it as soon as possible



Originally posted by: zyrah17

Wow awesome update
very intresting chaya and eanaz
anika slap someone
excited for next
countinue soon


glad u liked it ... thank u😉

Originally posted by: farinaks

Awesome
I'm so happy seeing pinky ponky's ng nagini's OMM 🥳 for me it's party time [:D/]
Tq for this treat nd pm
Continue soonish


even chahya and I started dancing while reading pinky's OMM
will try to make it looong & painful ...we're that evil😈
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: AimanAsim

Awesome update

Update soon


thanks...wil dol do

Originally posted by: aichaab

This is an amazing piece, something different. Can't wait to see the shock on their faces when they learn of Anika's background. Waiting for Pinky's OMM.

do Pm me please


yeah that will be a huge slap for pinky😆😆
will do😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile


Update soon.
I'm already giddy after watching Jealous Shivaay which I see rarely on the show. I should work now on my Jealous Shivaay shots too.

Update soonish.


will do...here u'll see Pinky's OMM & Shivaay using his brain more...which is also shown rarely on the show these days😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: itzanya32



hahahha! There no need to be nervous Yaar.😆 and that too because of me I think I get nervous but now seeing you say that I make you nervous is a whole new feeling for me 🤣

😆 I can understand your situation because you can see my reaction too😛 And I'm hella Known to your Evil Ideas! Who better other then me know about it? ; )

I know you two will Rock it ,(Again repeating 😛)

Love Yaa.❤️


hahahahah...u made me laugh real hard when i read this comment...all the tension went out the window


Originally posted by: itzanya32


reserved.
When I'll reeach home after my studies,I will surely unres it soon.


Unreserved.
Sorry for being late,just reached home and was so excited to read this. 😆
But it was worth the wait 😳 But let me say you one thing that the description you said about their situation and the scene near the pool, the way you two showed the comparison with the dripples of water and his azure orbs made me do aww! it was superb. Just loved that scene.
But why annika is away from avantika? I think there's alot more to it, really wanted to se their meeting. I think it will come soon isn't it?
and regarding pinky, it gave my burning heart peace seeing that chudail left alone by evryone.even by shivaay.
And who was the person to whome annika slapped? well my curiousity wheels are spinning at much higher pace so I'm eagerly waiting for the next part.
Do update it soonish gals.

you two are doing great!

Love yaa,
-Anya ❤️


i'm glad u enjoyed the update...i am so glad u liked
chahya we did it🥳
i'm glad the tory made u curious 😆😆
i'm trying my bbest to reserve my evil ideas only for pinky😈
lots of love from me and chhya 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: SassyQueen

Hye chhaya!

Thank you for the PM first so of all. 😊
Coming to the story, it's first uniqueness is, it's a collab! Point of view of two different person into one book/story is very intruding. So a plus one love! 😉
Plot seems very very interesting.
Pinky 😆😆

Hoping to read more.
Do PM me.
. Keep up the good work both of you!

Love,
Sakshi


thank u for the kind words😊❤️
will try to merge our thoughts the best way possible
will try to update soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update yar...❤️

Totally loved it...
avanthika is rocking yar...ofcourse she is Annika's mom...how did she lost Annika...eagerly waiting for the next update yar


wait till the story unfolds...Anni was never an orphan is all i can tell u...as in she was always around her parents😊😊

and avantika is rocking to make pinky shocked and do her OMM 😆😆😆
thank u for reading❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: .rumki.

interesting

do cont soon

thanks ..will do😉


Originally posted by: aishwa04

Interesting
I want to read more

will try to make it even more interesting...😊


Originally posted by: kinnika

Love the premise of the story! Do continue, and PM when you do! Thank you!


that's chahya's magic❤️...will sure do😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Seema84

Wow it's super exciting story. Because all r doing OMM of pinky and Ragini moreover here annika is not orphan she belongs to a well known family for what always she used listen pinky's harsh words sometimes shivaay also remind her the same 😕 well I love d lady Avantika but one doubt I have here how come no one knows about annika's real identity n why it's a secret???? At the end who was that got slap from annika ???? Please update soon and send me pm if possible...


the one that got slapped is someone i personally hate😆😆😆
and about annika's identity will be revelaed to all soon
and the reason will be out soonish ... it hink

thankks for reading
hope u enjoy it more
lots of love❤️

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