Ishqbaaz FF-Heartstrings| Chapter 4(C) Pt 2 pg 16 updated on 28 Sept - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome FF

Glad u included Rikara in this

Shivay has a twin sister aanya
advay Anika & Gauri are siblings
Anya ran away from home
To marry advay

Anika is troubled
Why is she having these nightmare
What triggered them
That she is getting them so often

Shivaay is so broken
That he can't help her
Omkara not letting Gauri help
When actually it is only she
Who can help Anika

We're Oberoi's against Anya's wedding
Doesn't she meet Oberoi's after marriage
Wonder how will they react
Will advay be angry on Oberoi's
Shivaay & Omkara for not treating his sister's well
Though shivaay loves her
Still he did hurt her in past

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon




Wow hold your horses. I'll clarify all your doubts in next update with an attached author's note.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
awesome update dear...
loved it so so so much;
thanks alot for pm !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Amazing I just loved it... I always wish gauri will be the real sister of annika n u have done that with advay as brother my god it's really fantastic... please try to update soon n please send me pm if possible...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
superb update

loved it...

anika having fever
& in deep slumber she is rest less as she has her nightmares..
nightmares of her past...
the siblings being tortured..
though her concious mind forgot it.. or try to forget
her subconscious mind still has that memories & haunt her..
poor girl... still suffering...
shivaay wants her to relax..
but her fever is still high..
he goes to fetch medicines for her but pinky stops him...

as pinky feels ignored she is more angr with anika & now hates her more...

gosh this women is seriously.. no words for her...

gauri warned by om for not going near her family...
but still seeing anika restless she too becomes rest less & goes to her...
wow she sings a lubaly for anika...
d same which their mom used to sing in childhood..
anika immediately relaxes being in gauri's lap.. & now the lubally makes her sleep soundly...

shivaay surprised with this but also happy...
he thnks gauri...

continue soon
waiting to know when & how wil siblings meet & come together

thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Seema84

Amazing I just loved it... I always wish gauri will be the real sister of annika n u have done that with advay as brother my god it's really fantastic... please try to update soon n please send me pm if possible...


It will be up in 5 minutes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

superb update

loved it...

anika having fever
& in deep slumber she is rest less as she has her nightmares..
nightmares of her past...
the siblings being tortured..
though her concious mind forgot it.. or try to forget
her subconscious mind still has that memories & haunt her..
poor girl... still suffering...
shivaay wants her to relax..
but her fever is still high..
he goes to fetch medicines for her but pinky stops him...

as pinky feels ignored she is more angr with anika & now hates her more...

gosh this women is seriously.. no words for her...

gauri warned by om for not going near her family...
but still seeing anika restless she too becomes rest less & goes to her...
wow she sings a lubaly for anika...
d same which their mom used to sing in childhood..
anika immediately relaxes being in gauri's lap.. & now the lubally makes her sleep soundly...

shivaay surprised with this but also happy...
he thnks gauri...

continue soon
waiting to know when & how wil siblings meet & come together

thnks 4 pm


Total summary said.
I'll update it in 5 minutes.
Sorry for replying late. I have not seen your post Hiya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Sorry again for late update. I was busy with making VMs. Jalkukda and Synced Heartbeats will be updated later on Saturday night.I set up a poll for the character for this 3rd chapter on Indian Forums. Annika won the poll. So this chapter will be from Annika's perspective. Enough of my rant, let's get track on the road.I was going to post it last night just got tired physically and need rest. Here is the update. I'll update Jalkukda or Synced Hearbeats tonight.

You guys are all confused with the character sketch of the story. Click on the link which I'll post with the next chapter.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Chapter 3-The Lingering Dream

Read the character sketch before reading the story.

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Lori lori lori

Lori lori lori..."

Chandaniya chhup jaana re

Chhan bhar ko luk jaana re (Luk: hide)

This song. It seems so familiar. So warming, so soothing. It calmed me down.The voice feels like I'm home now.

"Mama! Mama!" I murmured in sleep. Suddenly I opened my eyes only to find myself in a women's lap. She was caressing my hair. She seems to be in early 30s. She was wearing a red saree and had applied vermilion on her partition.She was singing a lullaby to me. Recovering from the semi blurry image, I saw my mamma in front of my eyes.

Mama was stroking my long hair, my breathing slowed. Then she began to sing the lullaby she'd always sung to me and Bhai and Chutki at bedtime since we were babies. Now her tears had stopped, leaving only their tell-tale wet tracks down her sweetheart shaped face. She could soothe me like no-one else, even her own breaths were deep and even. It was impossible to stay anxious or upset with Mama around. Then my eyelids started to became heavy and drooped she carried her up the stairs to the bed she'd pre-warmed. Then she slid into the bed next to me and cuddled me until I was asleep in minutes.

I woke up with a jerk.

"Bhaujai!!!" ,"Annika!!", "Bhabhi!!"

They all chorused my name in unison. I saw the people who called me are Jhanvi Aunty, Gauri, Shivaay and OmRu around me. Gauri made me lie back on the bed. I was tear eyed and squeezed my eyes shut. I don't want to see anyone notice me crying.

Shivaay was stroking my hair for some time. In the warmth of his hand which flowed to my body,lulled me to sleep.

I stirred in my sleep. I open my one eye once to check out if someone is awake or in the room. I saw Shivaay was asleep. Now probably I can sneak out for fresh air. I need it badly.

I went near to the swimming pool. It was glimmering with the white luminous lights refracting back and illuminating the dark room. It was making me less afraid of darkness.

I went near the love seat sofa cum bed. Keeping my phone there, I went near the swimming pool and dipped my cold feet in the water. It was soothing and relaxing.

I relaxed for a while and let my mind to linger for a while.

Flashback

Two girls were running behind a boy. He was faster than those two.

"Bhai please stop."The two girls said in unison in between panting due to running for so much time.

"We want to rest Bhaiya for a while." The youngest out of the trio demanded the boy.

"Chutki you want to rest?"The boy said in not-so-innocent tone to the younger girl.

He winked at the elder girl. Understanding what he meant, she went inside the house for a while.

Chutki had lied down in the soft grass letting her enjoy the fresh breeze after chasing her brother.

"Anni please give me that." Her bhaiya said something to her Anni Di.

She was wandering what those are whispering. Suddenly she felt a large splash of some liquid colliding with her small body.

"FHAT THE WUCK!" Chutki shouted.

She opened her eyes to find her siblings laughing at her.

She was mad at them and start chasing them both.

Flashback ends

Thinking of Chutki and Bhai, a smile formed on my face. My parents and my siblings were my life. I was leading a normal happy life until that inauspicious day. The day when I lost everything.

Thinking of that day, made my blood boil. He was the reason for me today being an orphan. Today me and my siblings are not together anymore because of that human being.

I hate him to the core. If my path crossroad that blood bas***d's path, I'll make sure to avenge him for my sufferings of years.

Suddenly I felt a hand of my shoulder. I look back to find it was my Shivaay.

"Why are you here?"He asked me curiously. He took a seat beside me in the water.

Engulfing me in a bear hug, he pulled me closer.

"I want some fresh air so I came here Shivaay."

I laid my head on his shoulder. He was running his fingers through my hair which making me calm and making the thoughts of that bloody bas***d foreign.

For now I want to cherish this moment of my life with my Shivaay. Till he is with me, I don't need to fear of anything. He's sun of my life. He makes all of my pain disappear in a blink. His eyes are enough to calm me. He's my THE GREAT WALL OF SHIVAAY.

I'm always his. No one can take me apart from him.

A/N- Please tell me guys about your views regarding the update. I'm not a little satisfied with the chapter. Your comments will be enough for me to know my progress of this chapter.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Awsome...So annila knws the reason of her parent's death...
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anika is still not over her past
But who will
When u had such amazing time
With ur siblings

Wonder how come Gauri is not affected
She too might miss her family

I wanna know
Who is responsible for their separation
What happened that they are so shattered

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM

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