ShivIka OS | Making Promises *13/6* - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Absolutely loved it.
I do hope that something of that sort actually happens on the show :-)
We all know how much NKK matters to Shivaay but the end of the day, you cannot bury the truth forever especially when there is evilness like Pinky ,Kamini looming around. He will eventually come to know some day or the other. Going by Pinky's character graph, there is no guarantee that she wouldn't hurt him in future even after Annika leaves.
Whenever Shivaay comes across this stark truth, he would be engulfed with pain. His belief on NKK, his mother's truth, Annika's pain & sacrifice, Om, Ru & Jhanvi involvement, everything that he had held on to until now, all important relations that he cherished, everything will be shattered.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
this was really lovely.. Emotional kar ditta..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
This got me so emotional
So heat- touching
Awesome
Hope like something happens in the show too
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Awesome os
So emotional
Thanku for pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi,

Thanks for penning down such a beautiful piece of work. I completely agree with your view of how the emotions were displayed by you through your words. Your understanding of the characters is really good and it completely justified the situation and their relationship.


Great work! !
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Beautifully written especially Shivay's emotions
Brilliant
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so beautifully written!! I wish we get to witness something like this in the show. Loved how you drew in the symbolism of the place where they first met.
Their emotions were like a pool. We have never REALLY seen Shivaay break down, it would actually be heartwarming so see him long for Anika after she is actually gone.

Once again a really emotional and beautiful story. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Superb os
Loved it very mucvery emotional
I almost cried out reading this


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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Very nicely written... Kaash serial. Mwin bhi kuch aisa hi hota...
Yup it was saddedning to see anika like this...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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This had me so emotional! I almost cried reading this! I hope they have an emotional reunion like this on the show and I hope it's very soon! I loved this!

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