Shivika FS : 'Realm Of Deceits.' Epilogue .

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

he did .. hurt her
by calling her past time...
so cruel..
she just broke her heart...
and Om did
great with the score...
but
why do i feel...
it is something to do with om...
shivay did this...
misunderstanding...
something is there..
or he is plain idiot..

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

so something did happen between om and shivay...
and om
is hiding from anika...
but now it is clear...
shivay.. why
so confuse
what is the problem...
to see violence om..
is different
nice update
continue soon

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Shivay was a jerk back then but the shocking twist was that Om already knew all these. Being a friend he is looking like a betrayer ! Om was also involved? Was this a plan...! Yes, please make it a 4S, I was seeing it's a Ts but the last part incomplete, then looked at your note ! ❤️

The emotions, angst, hurt was portrayed so brilliantly! Hoping for a justification of Shivay's and Om's behavior and hope, a positive change will happen in Shivay and he will help bring out the lovely, cheerful Anika back to life, who seems lost in pain and couldn't move on !

Waiting for the next !

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Linsie
congrats on your new story...
thanks for the pm

Thank you so much

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Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

My apologies for such a late comment

Shivay loves her now...He is guilty of his deeds

Om didn't want Shivay to speak to her bcoz he knew evrything??????????????😲😲

U stopped the story at a cliff hanger

Awesome

Continue soonish plz

Thanks for the pm😊

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Author's Note...😃

Hello People !

I'm sorry I'm giving this update late but I'm still sick. Blah !

So not blabbering much today I'm sorry if you guys found it abrupt , rushed and sloppy because it's written in fever and I just did it. I know some may feel that she forgave both very easily but that isn't right , in her mind they'll always be her culprits no matter what. But she couldn't deny the truth of herself being in love with Shivaay and now For her own happiness she chose to be with him.

Sorry no proposal scenes here. It was supposed to be this way. I'm so happy to see the response you people give me.

Thanks for everything.

Will try an Os next.

Current track. Do stay tuned.

Lots of love

Ritzy

Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 8 years ago

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mahalaxmik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Firstly , I am sorry to hear that you are sick. You still managed to write a great chapter down.

I like the story. I was kinda tense wondering why Om betrayed annika. Now I know that it was all one big misunderstanding amongst them all.

So Shivaay did truly love Annika. It was his jealousy that made him suspect Om and Annika. Poor Annika was just the victim here.

Om had a lot to feel guilty for. He also has a lot to make up for. He lied to his closest friend and also to the love of his life. Bad choices.

Nevertheless, all is well that ends well. Annika has realised that she still loves Shivaay and that Shivaay loves her right back.

Hopefully all the misunderstandings will be cleared up and they will start again.

Perhaps, you could make a chapter as a epilogue. Showing how they made up and lived happily ever after??

Great story. Different theme. Loved it. Hopefully you will write another one soon.

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pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Amazing Ritzy..Thank God all the misunderstandings have been cleared...Poor Anika She was doubted by her love of life and cheated by her best frd...I know situation was like that but still her pain is too much to bear when 2 imp persons of ur life behave like that

This was amazing story and I enjoyed a lot...Please give an epilouge if it is possible

P.S. Sad to hear that u r still sick..Get well soon and take care 🤗

Edited by pri12 - 8 years ago