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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Sooo painful nd emotional
U penned it down so beautifully
U just nailed it dear
Tq fr pm

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Damn...that was painful...but beautifully articulates Shivka's turmoil. The impending separation is going to turn me into a watering pot I think!</font>

Thank you so much! <3 Means a lot! :")

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Rhea, I'm sorry I cannot write much today because I'm totally messed up; your piece of writing and the speculation of on-screen separation hanging like a sword; god, I'm lost!

But, trust me, the way you have portrayed their emotions, I doubt we are going to get that on-screen; but, yeah, let's see. I am not even sure, whether I will be able to watch it; when I was moved to tears reading this beautiful yet so painful piece of yours.

Keep writing more, but, happy-shappy ones, please?

I liked this but it has pushed me deep in despair; I love your fun-frolic stories, a cheapda Shivaay and a nonetheless bold Annika ... 😳

Edited by MrsSSO - 8 years ago

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Awesome OS Rhea.

It was emotional...

Anika left shivaay😭

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MaDiee

@MaDiee

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Good one Yaar!!

Nice selection of song!!!😊

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a s h u

@SlytherInMe

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

beautifully written, you capture the anguish perfectly. truly loved it!

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 50

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

This is so heart wrenching! 🥺

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Ananya

@Smiileplease

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Amazing work dear

Speechless

Shivika's turmoil was well written

Its just the beginning

Loved it

Continue soon

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Akshu

@AK_2010

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

dreading about the upcoming separation in the show, but you give me hope.

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: _fati_
Beautifully expressed...
U should continue it and thanks for the pm dear--

Originally posted by: Mystery1234
Beautifull...Amazing
You portrayed the emotions so well
I could feel the pain through your words
Awesome
Do continue
Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you so much. :')