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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
woah!!! one hell of a roller coaster ride it was..
excellent update..
continue sooonish .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
I really wish they come up.with a story line like this in the original serial as well.
Please continue.

It's going to be omm for us fans in the original serial. At least let's have your story with a logic and shivika stay together.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
I liked it.. It seems so relieving.. But if happens on the show, the CVs will give it different turn which won't suit our taste.. But yes, it cheered me up this ff. Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Wow, you have an amazing story going on.
Loving this.
Poor shakti, you made me feel sorry for pinky too.
Good that dadi, shakti and janvi Got some ss...show mein yo sirf rotlu reactions dete hain.
I like the family standing up for shivay. ...the support to the wall. He is so loved by all.
What next. .you have me curious.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Everything has a limit...even love!


Aaah!! Pinky cried as she woke up from her nightmare. She had done everything to take away Anika's sleep. Bust she herself couldn't hhave a proper sleep. Anika would go away from the house forever and also from Shivaay life.
Shivaay..a name so deeply etched in her heart.

"Mera Shivaay mera Shivaay kehakar kabhi mera subhaan dhak nahi jayenga".

Kamini was his mother? She had even erased her own sister's memories just to become Shivaay's mother. The blue eyed boy who had become the soul existence of her life. Even when she was pregnant with her own child she loved him no less. When she had to give her firstborn back to God, she was left with him. She was depressed yet content.

Pinky smiled at the irony as she voiced it "Uske liye poora duniya se lad sakti thi mein, nahi toh, woh kud mera duniya thi" She laughed hysterically.

"Par sab jhoot tha, sab, woh na meri, na meri behen ki, na maa, na maasi, bas woh kameeni ki gandey koon di"

Flashback

"Pinky you feel bad that you made Priyanka elope? Nahi toh, tuney ekdam sahi kiya. Tumey pata ki Priyanka kon hai? Tumari eklauti beti ki kooni hai woh"

Pinky felt as if her world crumbled into pieces.

"Your first child was no still born, I took her away from you so that my son becomes the only heir of the Oberoi empire. You being his second mother can do anything, so I played safe"

"Tumara kya matlab hai" Pinky's voice cracked as she voiced her fear.

"Yahi toh tumey samaj aya, Shivaay aur Mahi dono mera beta hai. Priyanka ki dono bache hospital mein margayi uske saath. Because I killed Priyanka before she could even give birth. Then I kept my one day old Shivaay there, Mahi was too sick so I kept him with me. I did all this for Shakti but tuney toh meri saari plans paani phekdiya Pinky. But ye baat toh hai, ki tum Shivaay ki ma bhi nahi hu nahi maasi".

Pinky collapsed on the floor realising her whole life was a lie. She sobbed through the night. If she was separated from her family ( her sister, her daughter,her nephews) by Shivaay and his mother then he would have the same fate.
...

She cried harder as she couldn't bear the pain that wrecked her soul. Her daughter, she couldn't even see her face once, she carried her in her womb for 9 months. She had even given that too Shivaay.

Pinky smiled as she knew that she would soon be able to separate Anika from Shivaay. It was the last day Anika would spend in the Mansion. Wasnt she his takkat.
Then she can break OmRu, his lifelines. Finally she can tell him that he has nothing of what he was always obsessed of and thereby completely break him. Pinky laughed through her tears like a mad woman.
...

"Shivaay" Anika's worried scream rung through interiors the Mansion.

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You can assume Pratyusha Banarjee as Shivaay's real mother. She used to be such a beautiful and talented actress.

We are coming to the end of this SS soon. I hope it will get over in one or two updates!

Please give me comments and suggestions on how to improve.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely. ...such a sad cade pinky is
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pinky is doing all this to revenge Shivay
But is me Shivay ki kya galti
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Wow...Kameeni has woven such a twisted tale...wondering what Shakti's revelation is going to do the Kameeni's lies!?!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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True or False: When it hits you hard.

Khanna had always known that Anika was the one for Shivaay. Even when the preparations for the great ShiTia shaadi was going on, he had seen his boss's attraction for his wedding planner. Khanna would simply take her name getting a frown or curse word from his boss in return but few minutes later he would always find him lost in a dreamy world. Many a times he had caught him staring at her without even blinking his eyes.

As khanna saved the files, he ended up typing an incorrect security key alerting the security features of the device. The last saved file was sent to Shivaay. Khanna held his head as his body shivered thinking of the oncoming consequences.

...

Anika walked across the hall. She had received the DNA reports neither Kaamini nor Pinly was Shivaay's mother. She had broken this truth to the younger ones who seemed to be as clueless as she was. But when Om broke this news to Jhanvi she didn't seem as affected as them. Om had demanded an answer and Dadi had called them all for a meeting.

As Anika heard Pinky's sobs she peeped into her room. Before Anika could reach her Pinky shot up.

"Don't you dare touch me Anika, you have just few hours more. If you don't find a way out yourself, then Shivaay is going to bear the consequences" Pinky seethed as if possessed.

Anika who lost her remaining cool, shot back for the first time.

"How about me not doing anything like that" Anika asked arching her eyebrows up.

Pinky blankly stared at her in disbelief.

"First thing is that I don't trust you. Secondly if it's the truth Shivaay has the right to know it, so isn't it better if he gets to know it now. Kal koi is sach ya jhoot, uski faida utta sakte hai na, koi business rival etc. Abhi toh unke saath unka parivaar hai, bhaiyon hai, mai hu. Ham sambhelegi unne". Anika finished with an air of confidence.

"Don't think it's possible Anika" Pinky tried to fight a lost battle. "He will break beyond repair".

"Sach kabhi badal nahi sakte auntiji, bas unki samna kar sakte hai" reasoned Anika before leaving her MIL to suffer her own fate. Pinky fell back on the floor breaking into wails, she now needed to find a new sword to war against Shivaay. Little did she know that it would soon pierce through her own heart.

...

Shivaay had just finished his meeting when his phone rang a security breach alert. He called Khanna who informed nothing was wrong but Shivaay found the latter's behaviour odd. Shivaay stepped into the lift and descended down the Oberoi Heights (one of their hotels) his driver was already waiting for him. (Khanna had already sent a driver so that Shivaay doesn't run his car over cliff after seeing the video)


As he played the video Shivaay felt as if has world went still. His mother for 32 odd years was telling that he was an illegitimate child? He was someone's impure blood? He had a brother, Mahi, the doppelganger? It meant that Anika was right. Possibly he should have known all that to save him. She wanted Anika to leave? Anika knew all that? She was even ready to leave him behind to save him from this heartbreak? He felt his vision blur as tears graced his white cheeks.

He was nothing that he was always proud of. His blood brother, his twin, lived through all the harsh realities while he lived in all the comforts. Anika had to go through so much pain, he never knew. He not only left her alone among all this but shouted, abused, mistrusted her all the time. He felt he would die at the moment unable to process all this pain.

Khanna had known that the inevitable had happened when he saw his boss sitting unaware of the surroundings on the back seat of his BMW. He had been trying the phones of the different family members for the past half hour, but all of them were switched off. He gently held Shivaay by his arm balancing him as he stumbled through the lawn.

Shivaay's eyes reflected no specific emotion, suddenly something flickered in his eyes, something more painful than the pain that he was already experiencing. Getting out of Khanna's grips he ran inside the Mansion.


"Anika, Anika kaha ho tum, bahar aaja" he screamed like a mad man. He searched for her in their room, in the kitchen, the poolside, every odd place he would find her. The fear of being left alone clouded his senses and he fell panting on the ground.

"How could you leave me Anika" he wailed.

"Sirji sirji, Anika madamji aur baki sab DadaSirji ki meeting hall mein hai"Khanna said holding back his tears unable to see Shivaay break like this.

Running in the direction of the meeting hall he quickly opened the door giving his fingerprint. As soon as he entered he saw her facing his side. Even in his terrible condition he felt his breaths falling back in place, his heart started beating again. Taking a step towards her he fell on his knees as this familiar feel of relief washed over him again.


"Shivaay" Anika screamed as he fell heavily on the floor. She ran closing the distance and held him in her hands. "Shivaay" she screamed again extremely worried as he closed his eyes and leaned onto her shoulders. How much would he have heard? Did he hear the correct thing? Anika felt lightheaded as these questions swam in her head. She softened his hair and gently rubbed his back trying to take his pain away.

He reached out his hands rubbing aways her tears.

"I'm fine Anika, Promise me that you'll never leave me alone"

"How can I do that" she cried as she kissed his hair. She felt the weight on her side increasing.

Shivaay had collapsed with his hand clutching onto his heart.


Please give me long comments. Atleast hit like!

Edited by MariaRebecca - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
awesome update yar...shivaay now knows the truth
but wat shattered him was the thought of Annika leaving him...I really hope that he is Fyn

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