Shivika FF: Resilience, Chapter 9 Part B, 19/08 UPDATE (pg 69)

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Jaslee Saggi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Loved the concept of the story. Really refreshing from all that is happening in the show. At the start of chapter one I had initially thought that it is going to be long ride to the level of romance but you wronged me. The sweet little scenes were just a treasure to read, the hand hold and the "what about me?". It clearly showed how much he had missed her without really knowing for himself that he is feeling such a thing. Can't wait for the next update.

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Aparna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

I just love d concept of the story...❤️

The Jealous Singh Oberoi is too adorable... 😳

Anika's bonding with the Oberois is amazing...

The pool scene was superb...Shivaay embarrassed Anika...☺️

Post Soon... 😊

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Man you are brilliant! Amazing work, the story writing is really good and the way you explain each scene and moment it great!

really nice.. hope you will update soon!

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Kripa Shankar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Chap 1

Shivay had me with is 'What abt me?' could he BE any more cute😳

Marriage of convenience it is for ShivIka, but it is sooo great to see SSO say all that!

N Anika has a strong naam khoon n kandhan here, dts nice! After all the fiasco of the nafratbaaz in d show, i hope u don't have a cricket team of villains here😆

Already hooked n waiting to see Shivay woo Anika

Off to Chap 2

P.S. Pls do pm me if u update😊

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Kripa Shankar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Rudra n Anika ❤️ fav there n fav here! Best Bhabhi-Devar duo, n loved the Man child dt Rudra is...

N ShivIka☺️☺️ Shivaay wins me every chapter, "you think I am cute?" i love him already, with his signature thadi!

N Anika is no less, but I wonder why she thinks Shivaay is not interested her😕 it is clear as sky dt he is, he might not go all Romeo on her, but man der is attraction!! So much ofc, at least she has a hint of it now, cuz of purple😉😆

But u know wat i really want, Rudra spilling beans to the younger Oberois n hv an endless teasing session😆

Wonder how Anika's family is, really curious now...

Great update btw, n plz update soon😊

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Both the chapters were awesome
Loved shivaay is taking small step in their relation...he is so caring nd possessive for her...eben from his brothersecond chsp was a bit sensuous
Update soon
Do pm me

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panjami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Loved your story...

2nd chapter was kidkitod...

Waitng for more...

Cntinue sooon

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HarshaMawra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

This is wonderful

Please continue soon

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lamz325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: rainbowveins
Girl, I absolutely love this story.I was so happy when I saw you've updated, and knew I was in for an amazing read. And how right was I!
Shivaay was so adorable in this chapter!Starting from muttering about how Annika found Rudra the cutest Obro, to instantly giving up the pretense of sleeping when she called him cute, Gosh!So adorable

And then emerged his romantic side. That was daaymn hot! Shivika and the pool always give us something fiery, but this was sizzling to a different level entirely! I wonder how far they would have gone if Rudra hadn't interrupted...

But my favourite part was definitely the last part; who knew our Billuji was such a cheapda! I love how smug he was about seeing her in that sheer clothing. And when he said purple colour compliments her, hayee, I think I almost died!

Overall I loved this so so much. The Obros are as usual the perfect devars, and Dadi the perfect...well, dadi. Can't wait to meet Annika's family next, and see some more Shivika romance! Update soon-ish and pm me if possible :*
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Payal

Girl, you're too sweet! I'm so glad that you loved it so much! Hehe I like to think that if Rudra hadn't interrupted them, then Shivaay would have tried to initiate their *first* kiss! And we all know Rudra so he definitely won't let them forgot what happened either!

I'm glad that you like the cheapda part! I wasn't even planning for that part at first. I kind of added it as an afterthought, a small detail. But I wanted to portray Shivaay's smug attitude, taadi baaz, and his physical attraction to Anika, of course! I'll definitely PM you for the next updatE!

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lamz325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: _ishqbaaaz_
Loved the concept of the story. Really refreshing from all that is happening in the show. At the start of chapter one I had initially thought that it is going to be long ride to the level of romance but you wronged me. The sweet little scenes were just a treasure to read, the hand hold and the "what about me?". It clearly showed how much he had missed her without really knowing for himself that he is feeling such a thing. Can't wait for the next update.

I'm glad that you kept reading! Yes, i wanted to start the romance from the start of the story. That's why I decided to start my story after a couple months of them already being engaged! I didn't want to go through the tedious process of them meeting each other for the first time, their initial dislike of each other, and their fights! That's not to say that we won't see any more fights between Anika and Shivaay here on out, either lol. Because let's face it, it's not Shivaay and Anika without their dog-cat fights, right?

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