Jitni dafa zidd ho meri.... a RiKara TS (Complete) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: DamseLInActioN

*rushes to drink chilled water with extra ice cubes*

OMG! seems like the heat is really getting to you,that was HAWT!! (Blushing like a tomato here)
do continue soonest!!!!!

Damn this heat, Suman! I'm SO fed up! To add to it, there was no episode of Originals last week!

I'll post sooonnn...! Thank you for the love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: magss24

Of course I want to read the next..part. Please update it soon..

Never seen you around Mags! Thank you for leaving the kind comment!

I'll post the next part soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: writergenie17

This was just... perfection Faye. Perfection.

With all these stories on an arc, you've given us lovely little peeks at their lives and now I feel like I'm one of the people invited to their anniversary party. Like... If someone asked me where the couple was, I'd confidently, fondly and a tad bit jealously say they're probably off necking like teenagers in some semi-public location, because I know them well enough to say that by now.

How you manage to make it so hawt and sexy but also so sweet and adorable at the same time is beyond my comprehension. I am genuinely in love with your Omkara... he is just adorable with how in love he is and how cute his interactions with the wifey are.

And those little things about being married that you manage to sneak in to your fics... like the way it feels to tangle your fingers with your love and hear the satisfying clinking of your wedding rings... those little details have nothing to do with the plot but they add so much to the story and they just make me melt.

As always, awesome, awesome work, thanks for sharing this with us and don't even think about not putting up the rest of this.

A thousand hugs and thank you's! Your lovely and long feedbacks always make me smile. It's amazing how you catch the little details!
It's the little things that matter the most in a relation sometimes.

I'm glad you like my creation of happy-go-lucky RiKara that the show seems so hellbent on denying to us! You know what? You are invited to all the RiKara functions that might take place in my OS's!

The real Omkara, the one we fell in love with is lovey-dovey, with adorable things that he does on a daily basis. He is a distant memory now, I know. But I'm holding on to the hopes of getting him back.

Now I can't think of not posting the second part, such amazing feedback all you guys leave! Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here's the second part! I hope you guys like it!

Har safar me mujhe; tu hi rehnuma chahiye...

When I enter the room, he is already on the bed, fidgeting on his phone. No doubt replying back to wishes he must have received. I hurriedly lock myself in the bathroom to change into comfortable clothing, all the while bustling with nervous energy. I know he is going to be happy but there's still a flicker of nervousness teamed with uncontrollable excitement in me.

I take a deep breath before turning the knob and entering back to our dark room. Using the light from his phone as guidance, I reach the bed. "Early tonight?"

He throws the phone to the side before pulling me onto himself in a swift move, "Having a party with just family members can be tiring too, I have found out." He tucks my now-tousled hair behind my ear.

"It was your idea," I brace my hand on his chest.

"it was, so I can't complain!" he rests his hand on the small of my back.

"Don't you want your birthday gift?" I murmur in the silence that follows.

"there's more? I thought I received it this morning," he whispers huskily as I pull myself up to look at him. My cheeks heat up at the reminder.

"I don't see anything shiny and wrapped," he squints in the semi-darkness.

"I'm not sure it can be gift-wrapped," I catch my lower lip in my teeth as I worry restlessly.

"What is it? An endless supply of glucose-wali chaai?" his thumb saves my lower lip from mutilation. I'm tense enough to ignore his silly joke; everyone knows he loves that chaai.

His expression changes when I still avoid looking in his eyes.

"What is it, Gauri?" he sits up on the bed when I don't reply, taking me with him.

"I love you," I say the first words that come to my mind.

"I know you do. I love you too, if that what you wanted to hear. But you're scaring me here. What's wrong?" he tilts my chin up.

I swallow nervously before taking that hand in mine and slowly bringing it to a rest on my stomach.

He understands it in a flash, his eyes losing the sleepy touch they have held. "Really?" his voice is lower than a whisper.

"Really. I've known for quite a while but I wanted to tell you on your birthday. Happy Birthday," I say excitedly.

"For a while?" a frown forms on his forehead, my wish goes ignored,"A while? And you let me ravish you on my workdesk this very morning! Are you out of your mind?" his voice turns to a growl by the end.

I let out a small laugh before raising my finger to trace that frown away,"Its fine." he runs his arms down my sides to check for non-existent damage. I resist swatting it away.
"I'm fine. Really. Not a breakable glass doll, remember?" A smile breaks on his face as the old joke resurfaces.

"Oh my God! I... thank you," he bends down to kiss my cheek.

"I should be the one thanking you," I place my hands on his cheeks, holding his face close to mine.

"I remember wanting this," he reminds me with a kiss to my nose.

"I wanted this too. So badly," I finally confess. He catches on to my tone quickly.

"Are you finally telling me what has gotten into you for the last few days? Hormones aside, you don't usually go all silent on me." so he has noticed, I think with a grimace. Anyway, I can't hide it from him anymore, so is spill the beans.

"Its about our kids. Zahara lives in her own world, too caught up in her art to even notice I'm around. And Akira... I sigh at the thought of my son. "Akira actually belongs more to Di and Shivaay bhaiyya than he does to us; not that I mind. Many people honestly think Vaanika and Akira to be twins or atleast siblings. I don't mind it one bit, it's the truth. But it would have been nicer if he didn't stop me from physical display of affection in front of other family members. Sometimes, all I want is just a cheek kiss." My tone turns wistful by the end as I recall Akira getting embarrassed and eventually asking me to stop kissing or hugging him in public.

He looks down at me with a soft smile, "I'm more than happy to compensate on that account, you know," his lips come to a rest on my cheek and I feel my heart flap in my chest.

"I'm talking about our kids, Omkara," I hit him on his chest.

"Zahara is in that phase, where nothing except your art matters. Not your parents, their problems, your brothers, their success. Nothing makes sense or seems important during that. But believe me, she'll be back. She loves you too much to ignore you for long, give her some time," he looks at me fixedly as he says that and I'm quite sure he is saying it from experience. It reduces my anxiety a little until I am reminded of Akira. He catches on to my train of thoughts quicky.

"As for Akira, well, Zahara too went through that phase, remember? All it means is that we are doing something right if our kids feel comfortable enough to demand less physical affection. I remember being deprived of affection and craving it during my days," he looks at the wall beside my head.

His words make sense, I realise before wondering if all this worry has been because of the harmonal changes in me. I shake myself out of thoughts when he keeps staring at the wall. "I can help with that," I say to bring him out of it.

"Sure, you can. Now kiss me," he orders as my words work.

I comply and pull him in for a long kiss. He teases my lower lip and I feel a shiver of response go through my body before leaning in to him and bracing my arm around his neck. His hand travels down to settle on my stomach while the other keeps a hold of my head. I pull back a moment later with a smile.

"Whatever you say may be right, but I'm holding this one in," I place my hand over his, right where our child is growing.

He looks up at me with a possessive look in his eyes, his hand slipping to my waist to pull me closer,"No. I'm not sharing you with anyone longer than I have to,"

"A possessive husband is quite charming, sometimes," I tug the hair on the nape of his neck. I can feel his smile against my lips as he pulls me in for a barely there kiss.

"It can turn out to be a boy, you know. Another Akira," I mumble out the fact.

"It will be a girl," he says confidently with his thumb tracing my cheekbone. I hum in response, his thumb moves lower to trace my lower lip, back and forth and I promptly forget to breath. He moves his other hand to my hip and pulls me closer.

"We'll be alright," he says as assurance against my ear.

"It's alright as long as you are with me," I tell him, flinging my other arm around his waist, feeling content in his arms.
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Tara Omkara Singh Oberoi is born on a rainy June night, a good 7 days later than the date she was due, after almost scaring her father to death with anxiety. Omkara growls out curses in the hospital, to everyone while I rearrange the bones in his hand.

Later, when everything is quiet with Tara asleep in her cot beside me, he lets me know how it is entirely my fault and wish coming true that Tara was so late. I shut him up with an exhaustion filled kiss that doesn't last long enough as I fall asleep, but not before feeling his smile against my lips.

Tara is an exact replica of me in looks but that's where the resemblance ends. She's a mini-Omkara, complete with the passion for art and a rebellious streak that rivals Annika Di's. Needless to say, she is Omkara's heartbeat. She has him wrapped around her little finger while I'm left being the strict parent among us. With her though, life seems to have come around in a full circle. For us, for the entire family.
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The ending was plain silly, I know! But meh, I feel like writing cheesy shit to cheer myself up from the utter nonsense that the show is throwing at us!

Ooh and did you guys like the names? Did you notice the pattern?

PS: my closing colons keep on disappearing! Is anyone else having that issue? If it disappears here, imma be editing it later. Much later!

Edited by FayeMia - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Rikara will have itne bache.. **wipes kushi ki aansoo** going by the show.. no hopes at all.. 😆 thank you Faye.. it's such a delight to read your words.. keep writing more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb superb
What is the pattern of names?
I didn't get yaar...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh this one was just plain lovely...
Warmed me from the inside out luv.

I loved the part where Om said they should be doing something right if the kids want less PDAs. Its true... only someone who's been deprived of it would understand the importance of small gestures of affection, especially during childhood when children tend to take affection for granted.

All the kids sound like they're little terrorizing angels... love all of them a lot but I seem to already have developed a soft spot for little Tara.

Loved each and every piece of the entire series, thank you for sharing pieces of Om and Gauri's beautiful life with us. I feel enriched for having known them this way.

Awaiting more brilliance from you soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww...such a flirtatious one shot.!
Loved it.!!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome. Beautiful story. Papa and the kiddos have name ending with 'RA' Poor Mummy left alone.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Wow..loved the part2 as welll.!!

Ok my POV

OmkaRA's name and Gauri's characteristics
ZahaRA-means flower like delicate
AkiRA-strength
TaRA-Star..!

Wht is it? acc to u..!??

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