Shivika SS_Calming Silence_ (last part pg29) 18.7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Res

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Unres

First of all I am sorry to res in this way😳😳

Update was brilliant.👏

The way you showed Om's conflict with himself, his past and present ( Jhanvi and Anika) no not past as Jahanvi is still same.. Amazing

Totally loved it.

Thanks dear for update But please take care of yourself.

With Loads of Love

Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Updated ; )

Sorry for being late.

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Rohini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

The internal conflicting thoughts of Om are beautifully portrayed. He had always seen his mother suffer because of this father and when Annika was going through same, he couldn't see her breaking down everyday. And he couldn't make his brother understand about what Annika is going through. He left because he couldn't handle the situation.

Of course seeing his brother like that might have knocked him off. He was angry with Shivaay for what he had done to Annika, but he never would have imagined that he would have to see Shivaay like that. He wanted his brother to suffer the consequences of his decisions, but not like this.

Emotions on the spot.

Thanks for the update.

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

hello hello

i am so glad u updated this ... i missed this so much

i have to say that om seeing jhanvi in ani is very understandable...having this anger and distancing himself from shivaay., he wanted to avoid being hurt by a shivaay who is becoming a Mr.Oberoi

although as u mentioned there are many sential diferences between the 2 women and men but i can see the simlarity

i have to say that i am not as much curious to know how he'll react to Ani's engagement as to what he'll say to shivaay when he enters the ICU

he thinnks he was right by leaving Shivaay... it's shivaay's on doing...then what is he going to apologize for?not answering his calls or leacing him alone?? Om is much more complicated than Rudra..cause he always had this fight in him and it always never reached a bay ...so curious to know what he'll say to shivaay and y is he feeling angry

about ani's engagement..Om is more detached than Rudra ...if Rudra didn't get angry with Ani then Om won't either...i think he'll support ani and tell her it's the write move...well done👏👏

but one line that really striked me back and made want to re read the story in a new light

"his brothers are his strength and his wife was his shield and he lost it all" & that too for three years...that is even more heartbreaking than ever ... it's a looong tiiime living with guilt alone😭😭😭😭

but what i am curious the most about is what will happen...how will this unflod??

Ani is not going to leave sammer

Om doesn't want to forgive shivaay

sameer has a plan but i doubt it would be making ani hate him

just ...i'm curious how will this move ahead...really interesting phase

what will shivaay do when he wakes up { i can imagine him saying it feels like heaven as he just woke up and saw his brothers and ani around him}😭😭😭😭

i don't need to tell u how much l loved this

u already know ...my huge love for this story,ur writing, & fast updates😆😆

take care of ur health

lots of love

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pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

superb...U well described Om's inner thoughts..loved it

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Beautiful update darling.

Om's thoughts portrated nicely.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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aichaab

@aichaab

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

At loss for words, the way you captured Om's POV was so beautiful and heartbreaking. Ketki's words also so true, his brothers are his strength and Anika his shield which he missed these past three years.

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KashiTessa

@KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Loved the update.
Take care of your health.

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

awesome update yar...

you beautifully portrayed om's emotions...

childhood is the beautiful phase of one's life when we laugh with out any stress or tension...our childhood plays an important role in making wat we are now

om's childhood was painful...at the age of playing with friends he witnessed his parents fighting...at the age of hearing beautiful stories wat he heard was his mothers painful cries...it was a nightmare for him...

years later he witnesses the same thing but wat shattered him was his brother doing the same...he loved shivaay the most and shivaay becoming the person who hates the most was unbearable for om...

he leaved om not because he hates shivaay...its because he dnt want to hate shivaay...I really don't think om will hate Annika for getting engaged to sameer...

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Part is really gud

But really telling u I don't like what Om think about shivaay being like Tej. There is a lot of difference between them , shivaay loves her but can't accept coz of his NNK issue ,n believe me it's really hard to change ur mind when u r really found it important. Tej is different not at all like shivaay.

Last was gud

Thanks for PM

Wating for next

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