See if I care - A RiKara FF (Part 17 Updated Pg 55) 29/03 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Genie.. u nailed it.. I wanted Gauri to give jhatka to shivom.. exactly u did that.. yeh obros dumvos Hai.. instead of simply accusing her.. why don't they investigate.. I wanted Gauri to give one jhaap to omie for throwing Paisa.. and talking all crap.. shiv and a hogaya apne maaki galti dekh nahi paa raha.. this not drama is too much..🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Fantastic update
I just love Gauri
This is what we need in the show
This is what Gauri is
Dabangg Gauri...doesn't take every thing thrown at her
Loved how she shut omkara

Didn't expect her to go to shivaay
But that was the best decision
Omkara will regret so bad
I want this to happen

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Wow. Gauri is back.
Now Shivaay will find out the whole truth and Om will finally repent. Waiting for your update eagerly.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
And THIS. THIS is the Gauri I want right now. You've beautifully penned down everything I'd like to see in her and the fierceness and that "Obroi Sahab" . YAS GAURI. You GO girl.
I also love how you've interwoven both RiKara and ShivIka in this.
waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Sorry for the late cmnt.. I am just so glad you wrote on this Maha shit... It's just saving grace for Rikara... Thanks a ton.. Part 1- I love the way you go into the details.. What's going on the mind and all.. Each character mentioned in part 1 has been beautifully penned .. That I am just visualising it.. Shivay has guilt within him, his ocd with NMK brought trouble in his life , but he is glad that he has his wife besides him.. Now coming to Rikara my favourite... Om is kya karon? At one moment I so love him the next moment I so hate him.. I mean what's wrong with you man?? He keeps seeing her negatives which don't even exist.. It's like he has made an illusory world.. Where he is the God and he decides whose character is what.. I know it sounds absurd but that's what I feel.. I feel she is bechari so she is bechari .. I feel she is nakaari so she is nakaari.. Just judging people because of what you believe ain't right at all.. He has just kind of stereotyped people especially Gauri.. Which makes me go bonkers... Sorry for my rant..I'm just kind of too annoyed with this present track.. I wished for slowly realisation... Heart and mind conflict but yahan PR toh zeher khake marjo and all chal raha hai... Even though I am pissed off at Om right now I love the fact that like always he is protective of his family.. Somewhere he wants Ri out because he doesn't want his family hurt... In spite the fact that he is wrong.. Om still is attracted to her as usual use control krne mein problem ho rahi hai.. This line when Om is glad when she is sad makes him kind of sadistic and like tej finding joy in his wife's misery.. And there he begins his so called nafarat Jaap.. Whenever I see this am like is there a button called Omkara ko mute kro?? I so hate Om could he just yank that money plate?? RI stand c'mon it's enough... Show him who you really are?? Yeah!! Finally she decided to stand up.. This update reminds of the song human by Christina Perri human "Lyrics
I can hold my breath
I can bite my tongue
I can stay awake for days
If that's what you want
Be your number one
I can fake a smile
I can force a laugh
I can dance and play the part
If that's what you ask
Give you all I am
I can do it
I can do it
I can do it
But I'm only human
And I bleed when I fall down
I'm only human
And I crash and I break down
Your words in my head, knives in my heart
You build me up and then I fall apart
'Cause I'm only human, yeah
I can turn it on
Be a good machine
I can hold the weight of worlds
If that's what you need
Be your everything. Just a little I human... Until i had enough. I believe it perfectly suits RI.. It's time for her to stand up... For herself... Because nothing is more important than one's self respect.. I will cmnt on the next chappy soon.. PS sorry for the extra long cmnt it's just the maha shit has gotten on nerves..v
Edited by ....Anabella... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Awesome 🤗
I had imagined something similar to this happening... Why doesn't omkara do this ... He'll know the truth and these useless fights will end because he just can't listen to gauri and keeps hurting her...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
i want this to happen in the show..
cant see Gauri n Annika unhappy..
i seriously want Gauri jo ek jhaanp mein Omkie Shomkie ko deeebaaar pe sata de..
continue sooonish..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
wow you nailed it girl...you are a rockstar...
gauri had given shivkara a shock back to back...
I really loved this gauri...you really portrayed the real version of Dabaang gauri...gauri calling Omkara oberoi saahab was just perfect...and she should continue calling him this...he needs to repent and I don't want her to forgive him so easily
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Oh my god!! It was sooo good.outstanding. Dabang gauri is back.Omkara famous dialogue nowadays is tum jaisi aurat as if how closely he knows gauri n now she will show kaise aurat is she,one who never takes bullshit frm others. That word omkara saab was bang on full of coldness.
Edited by lourel24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Wow... Jhatke pe jhatke deh rahi hai Gauri😆
These two will need a doctor by the time she's done... Telling Shivaay about Pinky so calmly.. And then requesting him to put a detective behind her and find out everything there is to know...

I look forward to the next part

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