Sorry for the late cmnt.. I am just so glad you wrote on this Maha shit... It's just saving grace for Rikara... Thanks a ton.. Part 1- I love the way you go into the details.. What's going on the mind and all.. Each character mentioned in part 1 has been beautifully penned .. That I am just visualising it.. Shivay has guilt within him, his ocd with NMK brought trouble in his life , but he is glad that he has his wife besides him.. Now coming to Rikara my favourite... Om is kya karon? At one moment I so love him the next moment I so hate him.. I mean what's wrong with you man?? He keeps seeing her negatives which don't even exist.. It's like he has made an illusory world.. Where he is the God and he decides whose character is what.. I know it sounds absurd but that's what I feel.. I feel she is bechari so she is bechari .. I feel she is nakaari so she is nakaari.. Just judging people because of what you believe ain't right at all.. He has just kind of stereotyped people especially Gauri.. Which makes me go bonkers... Sorry for my rant..I'm just kind of too annoyed with this present track.. I wished for slowly realisation... Heart and mind conflict but yahan PR toh zeher khake marjo and all chal raha hai... Even though I am pissed off at Om right now I love the fact that like always he is protective of his family.. Somewhere he wants Ri out because he doesn't want his family hurt... In spite the fact that he is wrong.. Om still is attracted to her as usual use control krne mein problem ho rahi hai.. This line when Om is glad when she is sad makes him kind of sadistic and like tej finding joy in his wife's misery.. And there he begins his so called nafarat Jaap.. Whenever I see this am like is there a button called Omkara ko mute kro?? I so hate Om could he just yank that money plate?? RI stand c'mon it's enough... Show him who you really are?? Yeah!! Finally she decided to stand up.. This update reminds of the song human by Christina Perri human "Lyrics
I can hold my breath
I can bite my tongue
I can stay awake for days
If that's what you want
Be your number one
I can fake a smile
I can force a laugh
I can dance and play the part
If that's what you ask
Give you all I am
I can do it
I can do it
I can do it
But I'm only human
And I bleed when I fall down
I'm only human
And I crash and I break down
Your words in my head, knives in my heart
You build me up and then I fall apart
'Cause I'm only human, yeah
I can turn it on
Be a good machine
I can hold the weight of worlds
If that's what you need
Be your everything. Just a little I human... Until i had enough. I believe it perfectly suits RI.. It's time for her to stand up... For herself... Because nothing is more important than one's self respect.. I will cmnt on the next chappy soon.. PS sorry for the extra long cmnt it's just the maha shit has gotten on nerves..v
Edited by ....Anabella... - 8 years ago