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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
u have a baby,Faye baby? *shocked*
btw,this was sensuous yet sadistic..

Goodness, I'm sorry if the A/N was misleading! I don't have a child! I have an 10 month old nephew(who can crawl faster than the flash, believe me) from a sister who is out of town due to work (too busy making her damn career). So he's with me for more than 2 weeks now with my mother also out of town. I don't have a single maternal bone in my body, I don't even know why she trusted me with her little one. It is a huge responsibility.

Thank you for liking this. You guys sure know how to cheer someone up.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: lourel24
It was truly sadistic of you but yaa was written beautifully.

Thanks Lourel. I know I'm twisted. *Evil laugh*

I am honestly expecting things to be thrown at me anytime now. I was worried about posting this, it was SO angsty and on a reread felt like random thoughts.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sakura24
This - is - a - kill! Wow, it's so raw in the emotional department, that I always find so thrilling about your work.
And thank you for waking me up from a kind of writer block induced trance, I've been trying to catch a tune for my next chapter since hours and it occurred to me after being brutally torn at heart.
Awesome job!

You find my work thrilling, Sakura? My, my, you sure know how to make someone blush, don't you? Thank you!

And anytime! Always happy to help you guys out in every way possible.

(sorry for tearing your heart!)

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: writergenie17
Forgive me if I'm rambling on but I'mma try to explain what I'm feeling... and I don't really know how to translate that into words properly yet.
I read it through as an OS the first time and it sort of made me feel a bit numb... like when you hear some terrible news on TV but it doesn't really have that WHAM! effect on you cuz you're not directly affected. You know the world is a hard and hopeless place, you mourn for a minute and move on with your own problems.
The OS read was like that... it was one glimpse into a painful day-in-and-day-out life and after some time, you're able to feel bad for that person and get on with it

But the second time I read it, I read the whole thing like it was a bunch of individual drabbles, one under each heading... and that thoroughly f**ked me up.
I lost it... you made me feel helplessness Faye. Like I was privy to a montage of dysfunction and I couldn't do anything to help either of them.

I don't know how you manage to do it, but this is no less stellar than some of SRK interviews on 4 hours of sleep. And hats off to you woman, if you're managing to ruin us with words while taking care of a baby.

Don't forget to take care of yourself amidst all of this... You're very important to a lot of people in your life.

p.s. I love each and every header you've chosen... I apologize for sort of losing it all over your fic and blubbering like an idiot. I understand if you wanna pretend you don't know me anymore...

You know I love your rambles, Genie! Believe me, this OS is almost like my random thoughts being penned down.

I'm sorry if I made you feel sad. I know it's hard to find reasons to smile in this world and then I keep on posting this kind of depressing stuff.

I'm sorry for messing with your head the second time you read this! I was actually wondering if connection can be made between the headers and the words under them. I'm shocked that my words have that kind of effect on you, for you to actually feel helpless with an urge to help them.

Awww! SRK and me? No way this is that good.

My sister should be back in town now, so I'm gonna try to ruin you guys more!

Taking care of myself? That's one thing a baby NEVER lets you do. I feel ecstatic when my brother takes over the babysitting job for a few hours just so I could run around for work. Thank you for reminding me of my importance, can't believe I actually forgot that.

PS: absolutely, eternally in love with your long analysis. I love it when you guys leave long comments with your thoughts instead of sweet one-liners.

*gets a hold of you in the middle of a street and jumps up and down like an idiot* So definitely not gonna pretend that I don't know you, you're stuck with me!

Oh, and the headers are mostly random lines stuck in my head for days or some of my favourite lyrics.

PPS: I know that awful feeling, that's exactly how I felt when I heard of George Michaels death (your WHAM! Reminded me just how much I love him)

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: twerping
Oh god! I am such a mass of feelings right now I don't even know if I can verbalise that roller coaster of a journey you have encapsulated into this...
I can't call it an OS because what I read was pure poetry...the titles...each title! The way you framed the narrative, giving a colour, a texture to the emotional landscape of Gauri at that moment in time...it was so incredibly raw, so intense...not one sentence was extra...every word counted...the images that you created, honing in on those stages in her emotional journey that make her see him a bit more as well ad teaching her hidden depths to her own persona...it was as if two individuals who have had a history of misunderstanding each other have suddenly found themselves in a place where the walls are crumbling down...and then where do you go when you have no place to hide?
OK...I don't even know how to tell you how much I loved this! It will be one of those special bookmark pieces that I will.have to keep coming back to.
This was pure magic.

Hi Twerps! It's been a long time since I saw you around! It's good to see you.

You have no idea how happy I am that you guys liked this. I wasn't even gonna post it for the fear of being flamed!

You're calling my OS a poetry? Be still, my excited heart. Thank you!

I didn't want to elongate it and anyway I have this silly habit of writing down just exactly what I want to, not a word extra. It can sometimes take the charm away and be misleading.

Your replies are beautiful in itself, almost like a drabble.

Thank you for leaving such a nice comment. It is amazing to wake up to so much love.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: falala333
There is nothing else I can say but... I love this ❤️ 👏

That's the highest compliment I can get from an IshKara fan!

Just out of curiosity, what made you read?

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Shraddha Dikshit

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#17

Sorry for late comments baby..

So happy that you have come back.

What shall I say dear, I actually read this at night and was literally imagining rikara.

This was like a poem, just loved each and every sentence of this.

Waiting eagerly for all your upcoming posts.

And do pm me if not I might miss these gems...

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome yar...its sadistic but you written it beautifully...I am being honest that when I read it for the first time I didn't get it at all...but i read it again and I was like...dnt knw wat to say...it like I became still for a moment...its really superb

Oh believe me babe, even I was surprised when I read some parts of it. They seem so unrelated, its hard to draw a connection.

I'm just glad that you guys liked this. Thank you! I'm overjoyed to know my words have that kind of effect on you!

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Aayushi15
This is so sadistically wonderful. It's heartwrenching yet beautiful.
I really don't have enough words to praise you. And Its hard to believe that you manage to pen down such brilliant emotions while taking care of so many other things in your life.
You are truly a star and I am your fan now.

Thanks Ayushi! (now I know two Ayushi's!)

I'm relieved you guys don't see me as a sadistic maniac who goes on inflicting pain and suffering on poor characters.

Life! What can you say about it? Just 24 hours a day with about 24000 things to be taken care of! But we wouldn't want it the other way, right? Except maybe sometimes.

Thank you! I have a fan now? Woah girl, we can be friends actually! I'm really not a star, just someone who fangirls too hard.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit
Sorry for late comments baby..
So happy that you have come back.

What shall I say dear, I actually read this at night and was literally imagining rikara.
This was like a poem, just loved each and every sentence of this.

Waiting eagerly for all your upcoming posts.
And do pm me if not I might miss these gems...

Sis should be back by tomorrow and then I can handover that little bundle of energy and get back to my boring life. (can't wait for that but I swear I'm not an awful aunt. I just need a good night's sleep, that's all)

Poem huh? I'm smiling like crazy now. Thank you.

Sure, I'll keep spamming your inbox.

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