Os||Heartbeat|| ft.mahi 13.5

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 8 years ago

this was highly emotional..
*cries bucket full of tears*
i am crying..

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

That 's terrible😭😭😭

pure tettible

i swear tears are rolling down my eyes ... i told u have a thing for making me cry i swear😭😭😭

that was deep ... poor mahi ... i am choking with my own tears cause of this😭

i thought he'll get happy moments in life before ...

I hope harneet isn't inspired by thins or else i'll keep mourning for a long time ... oh god i am so miserably sad right now u have no idea

u're really talented ... although making me cry isn't really a talent to be written in cvs😆😆 but in terms of amazing writing & expressing emotions ... ur writing is spotless

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Nohsin10

@Nohsin10

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

This is too much for me.

I'm crying😭😭

It is so emotional 😭😭

Poor mahi😭😭

I always wanted happiness for him

O god I'm very very sad right now😭😭.

But awesome os

Well written 👏

Edited by Nohsin10 - 8 years ago

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Realoona_8

@Realoona_8

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

I am legit crying right now. This is just amazing.

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

it's too much😭😭😭

you made me cry...

i really loved mahi so much...

I wanted a happy ending for him...

He deserves happiness...

you are an awesome writer 🤗

it was an emotional one but I it's too good

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Zarmina

@falala333

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

I'm crying and crying and crying 😭 😭 😭

This was beautiful

Edited by falala333 - 8 years ago

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moon99

@moon99

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

Anya !!!!!!!!!!!! NOOO! 😭

Do you know how much you made me cry? Mahi's letter basically triggered my tears that I was holding back!!!!!!! Oh, Anya, why? 😭

But it was freakishly amazing! 👏 A gazillion flying kisses to you for this terrific post ❤️

I love Mahi anyway, and now I love him even more ❤️

But, do you really have to write sad and heartbreaking stories? 🥺 I guess I shouldn't complain because I ❤️ all your stories no matter how sad they maybe. 😳

WAITING FOR MORE OF YOUR WORK!

I don't know if I've ever said this, but you are one of the many amazing writers on this forum! ❤️

Loads of Love,
- Sims

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Nirmala

@nim_var

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

lovely story..moved me to tears...

Mahi was so selfless in the end...saving Shivaay's life, giving his loveless life so far a meaning and purpose... beautiful...

If this were to be shown...I would need a box of tissues handy...

Finally we get to see Anika and Om...bond and running to save Shivaay's life...when they read the letter from Mahi..I had tears in my eyes..could barely read...as my eyes were blurred...

Mahi...who yearned for love and acceptance all his life..hope he found what he was looking for in heaven.

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

itna koun rulata hai...
i cry buckets... so emotional... Mahi .. such a great guy , he deserve happiness... shivaay has his brothers heart... such a beautiful thought...
lots of hugs n kisses to u for this lovely n emotional story...
-Himanshi

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