Ts- Unfortunate Mission *Shivika Rikara Rumya*(Part 2 page 8) 15.6 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Do you guys really want your readers to die with stomach ache due to all the laughing this has caused?๐Ÿค”๐Ÿคฃ Oh god, I couldn't stop laughing at any given point.
This mix of the three pairs, all true to their characters was so darn adorable! Have just read the part but can't wait for the next one.

Gauri's sweet nature, Om jealous (because that is super amazing ๐Ÿ˜†), Rudra's habit of confusing things (How did you even think of this?!), Saumya generalizing all men, Anika trusting Shivaay and then BAM!, and poor Shivaay getting stuck in something he has no clue about.. God the confusions were hilarious.

This masque has got to be so amazing. I can't wait to see what happens there. I have some ideas about that but I am sure your version is 10k better ๐Ÿ˜†

Great work Anya and Rose! ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Fantastic
Small misunderstanding lead to this
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
OMG!!! ๐Ÿคฃ
this is total funn..
maim toh has has ke pagal hogayi hu..
continue sooonish,Rose n Anya..
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
This one is [B][/B]chummeshwari

Totally insane
Thnx fr pm
A nice attempt by both of u.
Super excited fr the nxt chp
Loved the way trio is defending each other's wife
Continue asap
Don't forget to pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: moon99

Anya!!!!!! I LOVED IT TO THE CORE!

๐Ÿคฃ

Like seriously, how did this even cross your mind?... Please don't tell me that this has happened in your family before ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

But honestly, the idea is so new and creative, JAHNUM FROM JAHUNNUM! ๐Ÿคฃ Only Rudra would screw that up ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

It was so apt and true to their personalities. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I mean Gauri caring for everyone ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Om trying to gain attention from his wife (this actually shocked me, but I can imagine it... he'd be soo cute)

Rudra, as usual screwing things up, wanting to meet the 'Jahnum' ๐Ÿ˜† , and getting beaten up by his brothers and wife ๐Ÿคฃ

Saumya, cursing men in general and beating Rudra ๐Ÿ˜†

Shivaay, having no mistake, still has to deal with 'Jhansi ki Rani' Anika ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ( this was my favorite part... poor Billu Ji ๐Ÿ˜† )

Lastly, Anika was so darn cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ , Her yelling into the phone ๐Ÿคฃ

Oh, this was just hilarious (If you couldn't tell already, but I was laughing throughout ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ )

SUPER DUPER EXCITED AND EAGER FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Loads of Love,
- Sims ๐Ÿค—

P.S THANKS FOR THE P.M! ๐Ÿ˜›



Sims...๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Thnkxxx ton for this lovely comment...
Your comments always brighten us up...๐Ÿ˜ณ
There was a big smile on our face while reading your comment...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
And ofcourse, only Rudy can screw that up!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Stay tuned for the next part...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Ž

--- Anya & Rose
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it

Omg ek jahaanum ki vajase itni problem
it was too hilarious


Thnkxxx lots for the comment...๐Ÿค—โญ๏ธ
Glad that you liked the idea & the 1st shot...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Ž

---- Anya & Rose


Originally posted by: bworm

That was so much fun.

Can't wait for the party and more confusion and fun.



Thnkxxx so much for the appreciation...โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Ž
Stay tuned...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š

----- Anya & Rose


Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

so freakin amazing loved it, what raita has spilled! Rudra gaya kam se!


Thnkxxx a lot for the compliment...โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Ž
Rudy is really the mess-creator...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
Stay tuned...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

----- Anya & Rose
Edited by Roselind - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sb1234

This is super cute .. loved it !!!


Thnkxxx for the comment...๐Ÿ˜Žโญ๏ธ
Happy that you loved it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š
Stay tuned...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ

----- Anya & Rose



Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

super fantastic story...ds rudy boy...he can make chaos out of nothing...and dese obahus...dy are similar crazy nuts lyk rudy...but all are so sweet and innocent...bechara shivkara...luv ur story..do update soon and pls pm me...thanks fr d pm ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thnkxxx lots for the appreciation...๐Ÿ˜Žโญ๏ธ
Glad that you are loved it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ya one word created a complete mess & thnkxx to Rudy he was the one who messed it up...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
You surely pm you next part also...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ

------- Anya & Rose


Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic
Small misunderstanding lead to this
Eagerly waiting for next update


Thnkxxx so much...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Happy that you liked the story...๐Ÿ˜Žโญ๏ธ
Stay tuned...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š

------ Anya & Rose


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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: heenagupta

OMG... ๐Ÿคฃ what is this Anya Di n Rose Di... rudy always do smthing to trouble his brothers.. n now he himself also got caught in t same... vaise jitni baar b ye jahnum word aaya na mene use 3 baar pronounce kiya but samaj nahi aaya kiya pronounce karu... ๐Ÿคฃ . This was too gud... plz update soon
n thanks 4 PM...



Thnkxxx a ton Heena for this lovely comment...๐Ÿค—
Rudy lands himself & his brothers in trouble...aur bichare ko pata v nhi chala...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Will try to update it as soon as possible...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Pls stay with us till then...โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Ž

----- Anya & Rose
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Do you guys really want your readers to die with stomach ache due to all the laughing this has caused?๐Ÿค”๐Ÿคฃ Oh god, I couldn't stop laughing at any given point.

This mix of the three pairs, all true to their characters was so darn adorable! Have just read the part but can't wait for the next one.

Gauri's sweet nature, Om jealous (because that is super amazing ๐Ÿ˜†), Rudra's habit of confusing things (How did you even think of this?!), Saumya generalizing all men, Anika trusting Shivaay and then BAM!, and poor Shivaay getting stuck in something he has no clue about.. God the confusions were hilarious.

This masque has got to be so amazing. I can't wait to see what happens there. I have some ideas about that but I am sure your version is 10k better ๐Ÿ˜†

Great work Anya and Rose! ๐Ÿคฃ



Awww!!! What a heart-warming comment...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thnkxxx tons Krishi ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— (saw the name from your profile...hope you don't mind me calling you that ๐Ÿ˜›)
We tried to punch in as much humour as possible...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
We will try our best to not let anyone down with the next update, whenever it will come...๐Ÿ˜Žโญ๏ธ
Stay tuned till then...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ

------ Anya & Rose

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Rishiak47

amazing work

thanks for pm


Thnkxxx so much for the appreciation...๐Ÿ˜ƒโญ๏ธ
Be with us for the next update...๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Š

----- Anya & Rose



Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

OMG!!! ๐Ÿคฃ
this is total funn..
maim toh has has ke pagal hogayi hu..
continue sooonish,Rose n Anya..
thanks for the pm.


Thnkxxx lots Annika...๐Ÿค—
Happy that we could make you laugh with our story...โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Will try to continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Ž
Stay tuned...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

------ Anya & Rose




Thnkxxx so much...โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Ž
Hang tight till the next update...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š

------ Anya & Rose

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