Shivika SS : 'The Raven And The Rambler.' Epilogue. - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

After reading the prologue I had thought that the late husband would be Shivaay.
But after reading the chapter I was like now who the hell is this Omar Chauhan 😲
And to tell the truth this piece of new info got me hooked to your story.
So waiting for the past to unfold,
and a future where Shivika will neet 😉

Update soon.
Thanks for pm


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Haha. Thanks so much for replying.
Soon they'll meet, very soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Frozen-Storm

Heyya!

The story has a great start. Love the way you write. The emotions and description are very well written as I am a sucker for both. Waiting for the mystery and past of the Raven 😲 Also waiting for how Shivaay and Anika will meet. Why do I have a feeling that Mr. Chauhan is alive?😲

Much Love,
S.



Thanks for reading this and appreciating.
It just increases the story level if you can write emotions fluently.
No Mr Chauhan isn't coming back he's good pretty dead. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: DilSeDilTak

What an interesting start😳😳
you have your way with words, it's AWESOME👏
continue soon... I'm so happy that person is not Shivaay😆
Loved loved this part, waiting for the next update



Thankyou so much for comments.
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Because I will be sending the pms to those only.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: -Ishqbaaaz-

Nice! Love the details.

Waiting for Shivaay's entry 😳



Thankyou for comment.
He will enter soon. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
OMG, Ritzy this is AMAZING yaar!
Thank you for uploading it fast, I love that. 😆 Got hooked while reading the prologue but then you come up with the first chapter and everything gets even better. ⭐️ I feel your Anika is not the type of girl that would rejoice over someone's death but this time her reasons are quite understandable and so much interesting. I'm wondering if you'll reveal what he used to do to her and made her so cold regarding everythinng about him. If she will be able to get over that hatred and embrace a new chance to find love in Shivaay is something we will find out only if we continue reading your awesome story. 😉
What a great chapter! I must say that my favorite part was the way she feels whenever she thinks about him (her late husband) in comparison to those bugs. Ugghhh, I could feel all that disappointment, misery and mystery that surrounds her and her life. Definitely waiting for more And as usual your writing skills are fab! 👏 Continue soon dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

OMG, Ritzy this is AMAZING yaar!
Thank you for uploading it fast, I love that. 😆 Got hooked while reading the prologue but then you come up with the first chapter and everything gets even better. ⭐️ I feel your Anika is not the type of girl that would rejoice over someone's death but this time her reasons are quite understandable and so much interesting. I'm wondering if you'll reveal what he used to do to her and made her so cold regarding everythinng about him. If she will be able to get over that hatred and embrace a new chance to find love in Shivaay is something we will find out only if we continue reading your awesome story. 😉
What a great chapter! I must say that my favorite part was the way she feels whenever she thinks about him (her late husband) in comparison to those bugs. Ugghhh, I could feel all that disappointment, misery and mystery that surrounds her and her life. Definitely waiting for more And as usual your writing skills are fab! 👏 Continue soon dear 😳


Oh. My. GAWD.
Thankyou so much for this lovely lovely comment.
Yes you understood what I I was trying to convey.
No she isn't the type who will rejoice on anyone's death. She suffered a lot and the hatred is what turns into happiness after his death.
Yes it will be revealed in the next chapter itself and then it will come and go on and off.
I mean there will be some percentage of things in some chapters.
Oh you keep guessing it will be revealed all in good time.
Thank you for appreciating my writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Very interesting story. Waiting for more:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Start.😊
The Starting Quote was so Nice.
Anika Character was so Interesting.😊
May be Anika Suffered a lot in her Past.😭
The Emotions of Anika were so Nicely explained.😊
Anika Husband Omar was dead and she didn't like him,it was so Interesting.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai

Very interesting story. Waiting for more:)


Thanks for reading. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Start.😊
The Starting Quote was so Nice.
Anika Character was so Interesting.😊
May be Anika Suffered a lot in her Past.😭
The Emotions of Anika were so Nicely explained.😊
Anika Husband Omar was dead and she didn't like him,it was so Interesting.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu



Thanks so much.
For replying.
Anika has suffered a lot.
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