Ye Dooriyan :A shivika SS ,part 10 updated on 26/7/18 (37) - Page 4

Originally posted by: aarushi04

Beautiful update!!
Luvd Shivika...
Hope they pass the evils safely...
N pinki can finally learn a lesson!!
Continue soon
Thnz for pm

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

interesting...

shivaay is so caring...

evil pinky is planning to separate them...

let's see what is she planning to do

Originally posted by: farinaks

Suprb strt...nd a nyc plot...I liked dere chemistry... Bt dat evil eye is sure pinky Aunty..., i don't know why she is admant to do 'oh my mata ' of her son's lyf...she iz overreacting

Originally posted by: Sam98

Hiya!!

I had absolutely no idea that you were into writing 😭 BUT nonetheless this was amazing- a really amazing start, I do hope it takes a detour from the way the current track is shaping up 😳 Shivaay and Anika were fabulously fabricated- the way you wrote about Anika's emotions and her realising Shivaay's dismissal of his mother were very aptly added in (this really needs to happen in the show itself 😆 ) Pinky being irrationally jealous is something to watch out for! Really loved it! Do continue with lengthier updates 😃 and PM if you can! Loved it!!

Love
-Sam

Originally posted by: Dik..

Awww that was too cute..

Can't wait to read next..

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Oh my...pinky is such an insecure...he is ur son but let him live a little yaar...

Originally posted by: tikit

Wow this is so interesting. I loved it totally but I hope Pinky doesn't do oh my mata of Shivikas relation. Btw if possible please pm me😛

Originally posted by: jarir2010

nice start.

Originally posted by: Sanjana2412

Nice loved it. Continue