Ye Dooriyan :A shivika SS ,part 10 updated on 26/7/18 (37)

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

it was Awww... i luv it ...i was reading n it suddenly stop... i was like... what u hell why this end so soon... plz update soon ...
please PM me nxt part

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1070625

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Totally loved it dear. Shivaay is so loving, so adorable...just love him. Cannot wait to read more.

Waiting for next please please...update soon.

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nohsin10
Interesting story.
Shivaay is so adorable.
Evil pinky😡

Thanks a lot my friend for your reply

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Interesting
Why can't pinky see Shivay is happy with Anika only
But no she is obsessed with her hera beta
Update soon

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Purple Feather

@Purple.feather

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Nice concept
Of course pinky is going to do so much drama n be the possessive mother
Waiting to see what happens next
Thanks fr d pm

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Beautiful update!!
Luvd Shivika...
Hope they pass the evils safely...
N pinki can finally learn a lesson!!
Continue soon
Thnz for pm

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

interesting...

shivaay is so caring...

evil pinky is planning to separate them...

let's see what is she planning to do

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Suprb strt...nd a nyc plot...I liked dere chemistry... Bt dat evil eye is sure pinky Aunty..., i don't know why she is admant to do 'oh my mata ' of her son's lyf...she iz overreacting

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Sam98

@Sam98

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Hiya!!

I had absolutely no idea that you were into writing 😭 BUT nonetheless this was amazing- a really amazing start, I do hope it takes a detour from the way the current track is shaping up 😳 Shivaay and Anika were fabulously fabricated- the way you wrote about Anika's emotions and her realising Shivaay's dismissal of his mother were very aptly added in (this really needs to happen in the show itself 😆 ) Pinky being irrationally jealous is something to watch out for! Really loved it! Do continue with lengthier updates 😃 and PM if you can! Loved it!!

Love
-Sam