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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Absolutely loved the update Aarfa! It's too good.

This fiction is going great. :)
Continue soon. In love with ARR. <3
Thanks for the PM.




Means a lot!
ThankYou..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
U know I just love this story
Awesome update
Love how u show the story
From everyone's POV

Anika is shocked seeing shivaay like that
The typical SSO NKK
Anika would never be impressed
But if the matter comes to Raigarh's future
May be she might think about it

Gauri is just amazing
My most loved character
That's what I wanted her to be like in reel
This tikhi mirch
She can get Oberoi's easily riled up
Specially Shivaay Singh Oberoi
Omkara is best for her
He can calm her down
We shouldn't have let them enter
N in last one kuch zada hi acche se swagat kar diya
I just keep falling in love with this Gauri
Omkara is gonna have a tough time with her
And shivaay too she won't let him win without a tough fight

Rudra n Bhavya are babies
Their lives completely revolve around their siblings
Well thats the common link between them

I think their mom doesn't know about the deal
She only knows about the marriage proposal
And is very happy for her daughter

Can't wait to read more
Waiting eagerly
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
My sincere apologies for this late comment...was really busy somewhere
Amazing updates
Shivay has put a deal in front of Anika where Anika can lose evrything or save everything and Shivay has nothing to loose
Gauri as a short tempered but loving sister
RuVya also fighting due to Shivay's this step
Awesome
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm of one chapter ...i was wondering why didn.t i receive pm for the next chapters
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

My sincere apologies for this late comment...was really busy somewhere

Amazing updates
Shivay has put a deal in front of Anika where Anika can lose evrything or save everything and Shivay has nothing to loose
Gauri as a short tempered but loving sister
RuVya also fighting due to Shivay's this step
Awesome
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm of one chapter ...i was wondering why didn.t i receive pm for the next chapters




Thankyousomuch for commenting😊
And for pm's.. You have to comment regularly.. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Chapter 6. Messed up.
"There are all these moments you think you won't survive. And then you survive."



Shivaay Singh Oberoi



I once looked back at her and she was standing looking downwards in a deep thought with stress lines on her forehead. I smirked.
My words have hit the right cord.

I don't know why but the very thought she could marry someone else that too that Rana was boiling me from inside but now you will be where you truly belong very soon Anika, in my mansion, in my room, in my bed.

I put my shades on and walked towards their mansion. I hope mom and dadi have made her mom agreed to this proposal.

I reached inside the hall and found everyone seated. The elder ladies of both houses were chatting merrily while our siblings were sitting their quite uncomfortably for their own respective reasons.

Gauri immediately stood as she saw me trying to find Anika behind me.
Jo bhi ho she really cares for her.

I came inside as her mom welcomed me but before I could take a seat Gauri came to me and whispered, "Anika kahan hai?"
"She must be coming..", I replied.

"Arrey Gauri beta.. Bethne do Shivaay ko.. His black coffee is ready!", Maa told me.

"Bethiye.. Coffee pijiye.. Aur jaiye yahan se..", she said with an attitude that no one has ever used with me.
This girl is really testing my patience.

"Dhang se baat karna seekhlo.. Varna age tumhe hi problem hogi.. After all, is ghar ki badi beti se shaadi karne wala hun me..", I told her.

She laughed a little, "Really? I didn't know Shivaay Singh Oberoi din me khayali pulav bnata hai.."

I smiled a little, "Shivaay Singh Oberoi kuch bhi aise hi nhi kehta.. Aur agar kehta hai then he makes sure ki wo hoke rahe.."
"Agar aap is shaadi ki baat kar rhe hai toh I assure you ki yeh shaadi is janam me toh nhi hogii..", she told me with utter determination.

I was about to reply but Om cleared his throat to gain my attention and gave me a look Tu-yeh-kya-kar-rha-hai?.

"Sorry to burst your bubble but yeh shaadi hogi.. Bahut jald hogi.", I replied acting cool and sat down.

As I sat down, OmRu gave me a deathly look which I actually deserve if I look from their point of view. I gave them We-will-talk look which they royally ignored.

"Arrey Anika.. Come insides beta..", mom saw her and called her inside. She came and stood beside Gauri. They shared a brief look and Anika shifted her attention towards the elders and smiled.
She knows how to compose herself though being in such a dillema. Nice! After all how can Shivaay Singh oberois' choice be wrong?



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Omkaara Singh Oberoi



This girl really amaze me. She was so mean and unrational with me just now but after listening to her conversation with Shivaay, one thing is evident that she cares for Anika very much. She was acting like a protecting for Anika against Shivaay but how can I make her understand that Shivaay actually feel something for Anika but is just not ready to accept.
Why everything is messing up so badly?

As Shivaay sat down in front of me I just wanted to kill him. It's all because of him after all. How can he take advantage of their situation?

"Vese it's verys obvious but phir bhi Anika kesa laga tujhe mera Shivaay?", Choti maa asked all proud of his big son.

Anika was hesitant and looked away, "Voh.."
I hate seeing you guys in this state Anika!

"Arrey puttar sharma mat.. Hmare Shivaay ne toh tujhe pasand karliya hai.. Par tu is rishte ke baare me kya sochti hai.. Hmare liye jan na utna hi zaruri hai..", Dadi said lovingly to Anika which made me smile. Even Anika became a little relaxed.

"Anika ko thoda time chahiye..", Before Anika could say Shivaay replied and looked at her.

"She needs some time which is quite reasonable I think.. Vo kal tak hume apna desicion btadegi..", he told everyone and Anika nodded with a smile.

"Chalo yeh bhi thik hai.. Hume tumhare jawaab ka intezaar rahega beta..", Dadi told.

Choti maa was looking upset as to how someone didn't accept his son's marriage proposal immediately. I mean ya people I mean girls are dying to marry us, The Oberoi brothers but here we are dealing with Maheshwari sisters and off cource she doesn't know what her ladla has done outside.

"Toh I think ab hume chalna chahiye phir..", I said looking towards Shivaay sarcastically. He sighed.

"Han Sarla.. Ijazat do.. Hum ab chalte hai.. Waheguru ne chaha toh ab toh milna julna laga rahega..", Dadi said.
"Ji bilkul.. Aplog yahan aye.. Hume Toh isi ki bahut khushi haii..", Aunty replied folding her hands which Dadi and Choti maa reciprocated.

We Brothers too wished her and were ready to leave. I wanted to meet Bhavya properly but I knew I couldn't. So we just had a handshake and it was visible that she too was upset because of all this.
So much mess to clear up!

Anika smiled at me just for the sake of elders glairing at her. I was feeling so bad for her.

I forwarded my hand for a handshake with gauri but she looked away and ignored. I rolled my eyes and put my hands back in my pocket.
I should have knew it before!

Why is it so difficult to make a single judgment on her?

Wait! Did I just imagined or Shivaay and Gauri just shared a challenging look.
Now what are these two upto?, I wanted to face palm.



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Rudra Singh Oberoi



So now we were in our car. Mom was blabbering about why did Anika bhabi didn't say yes to bhaiyya the moment we sat in our car.
Aapko kya pata aapke bete ne bahar garden me kya drama kiya hai.

Me and Bhavya met after so many days and she didn't even talked to me properly. I was so happy that I will be able to see her and our long lost dream of uniting our families will finally be fulfilled.
But bhaiyya ne sab kharab kardiya! Aise kon shaadi krega inse..

"Mom Dadi I have some work here at Sanjhgarh. Toh I will be here only today and will return back tomorrow. Hope it's fine with you guys.", Shivaay bhaiyya told everyone.

"But tune ghar pe toh kuch nhi bataya tha..", O said.
"Haan beta.. Konsa kaam hai?", Mom asked.

"Om remember we have a pending land deal with Mr. Desai. Me usi ki baat kar rha hun.. I thought ab me yahan aa hi gya tu toh let's crack that deal.", bhaiyya replied.
"Fine. I will come with you.", O announced.
"Mebhi.", I demanded.

"But guys..", Shivaay bhaiyya protested but stopped seeing our deathly glares. We needed many answers and he knew he can't back off from answering them so easily.

Dadi and Mom too agreed while Bhaiyaa informed Mr. Desai to make arrangements for our arrival. Sanjhgarh ruled by desai family seperates Raigarh from Ameerkot. It was just a two hour drive here from Maheshwari's mansion.

I have to talk to Bhavya and for that I have to ready with answers which can only be given by Shivaay bhaiyya.

Desai's car came to pick us up while Dadi and mom left for Ameerkot.

We reached Desai Sadan and we were asked to freshen up first. We were alloted our own rooms. As I went inside my room I tried to call Bhavya being desperate but she didn't picked up.
I hope everything's fine there!

"You remember our chuddy buddy promise? We were never supposed to hide anything from each other. And trust me I haven't broken the promise.", I texted her and drank the welcome drink brought to me in the room.
Bhaiyya aapko toh me chodunga nhii.



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Shivaay is kinda obsessed with bringing Anika into his life but I have a feeling there's a lot to happen between them.☺️

Gauri is all determined to kick Oberoi family out of their lives especially her sister's. Will she be able to win the challenge from Shivaay?

Omkaara has many things to handle. He want answers from his brother and he don't want any injustice happen to Maheshwaris but will he be able to help them? 😕

Rudra desperately wants to talk to his bestie. He was missing her so much already. They obviously can't give up on their dream so easily.

Guys I wasn't satisfied with your comments on the last updates. It really left me upset. 😔

Please do comment dil kholke this time. Even your criticism is welcomed but do comment.

Waiting eagerly to hear from you guys! 👍🏼









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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Hey,
I really love your story. It's one of them I am following in IF. And we really need writers like you for a very interesting storyline different from the current stupid track.

You are doing an amazing job. Keep it up.

But please update often and don't leave the story half way through.

Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ipkkndrrns

Hey,

I really love your story. It's one of them I am following in IF. And we really need writers like you for a very interesting storyline different from the current stupid track.

You are doing an amazing job. Keep it up.

But please update often and don't leave the story half way through.

Thanks




Thankyousomuch 🤗
Keep reading and commenting..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Amazing...Loved it
I love Shivay and Gauri Tashan 😆 Both are same
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
OMG
What an update
Each one better than the previous one
This time brothers POV

Shivaay Singh Oberoi will have a tough time
Both with Anika &Gauri
I think he will handle Anika with care
Cuz he wants to marry her
But with Gauri he will be SSO
I just loved shivaay & Gauri's Takkar
Both can back answer so well
That their fights can never stop
But this shows how much Gauri loves Anika

I just loved shivaay & Gauri's fight
Wonder what will happen when
No one is around to stop them

Omkara will have a tough time handling gauri
More than Shivaay
He is too caring
He doesn't want to hurt Maheshwari's
But his brother is leaving no stone unturned
He needs some answers only then
Can he do something to help

Wonder in saving her family from Oberoi's
Gauri doesn't fall in love with an Oberoi
Fighting shivaay & Fall for Omkara
That would be awesome

Poor Rudra
Can't bear Bhavya ignoring him
He too wants answers

Pinky was so sad
For not getting immediate YES
For her Heera beta..doesn't know what stunt he pulled
Else she wouldn't be so happy

Now that O'bros are together
Hope they talk about Maheshwari sisters
What has Shivaay actually planned for them

Also now Oberoi's are out of MM
What will Maheshwari's decide
3 sisters will definately have a meeting
Regarding Raigarh's future
Would love too see Anika & Gauri's reaction

I am.so excited for the best update
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
I want to know what happened between the two families. You are writing their present really nicely

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