Shivika Os||My Jhansi Ki Rani||Ft.PriOmRu *with a Vm by Manas!* - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
awesome yar...
I loved it...❤️
I really wanted to see shivika going on a date...
Rudra is the cutest...
shivika's rain dance,their conversation is so perfect...
I think they don't need to confess their feelings...their eyes says it all and a I love you can't never explain their relationship...its much beyond that
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Hi anya
First of all loved the title.. It is unique..
Story was just awesome.. I loved the dialogue of mahi..
I loved choti maa ki wish wala dialogue..
the kissing scene was amazing.. Fattu singh oberoi.. Kya imagination hai dear..
Last scene was killer.. Still laughing.. Rudra just make the episode rocking..
Thanks for the os
Keep writing
Loves ananya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
That was so romantic!!!!! 😳 😳

Shivaay is so romantic and cute!! 😊 😳
But poor Mahi, all the things he has to go through. 😆

But my favourite parts were Rudra's antics. The way he knocked Mahi out in the beginning... 😆 😆 😆 and his interpretation of the red lipstick mark on Shivaay was 🤣 🤣 🤣 .
Honestly, that was just hilarious.

You should write more Rudra and Anika antics, they would be hilarious. but, seriously, you're a very talented writer. ⭐️

Hoping to read more in the future.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ck1234

awsome... Shivika... & my rudy is cutest...



Thankoo dear.. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

And Anu is back with a bang😆

Amazing...
With the beginning of the Khulam Khula Romance if Shivika in the show this OS was a treat..😳
Shivay planning a date for Anika on their 6 month anniversary
Loved the Jhansi Ki Rani avtar of Anika😳
A stupid smile didn't leave my face reading this😳
It is beautiful...
Loved it
Jhappies and Pappies for you🤗
Thanks for the pm😊



hhehehe... 😆
Love you loads Harshi 🤗
Yeah,I also love yhis avatar of her 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: lifeiscrazy


Hey thanks
U r always welcome on my thread
But this time song choice and scenes suggestion goes to anya😳



Partner the whole credit goes to Manas so dont trust her 😆
maine toh sirf isse ye sabh bataya tha but she made it more beautifully ❤️ as always expected ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Ohh wow anyu
I came here after a time and read urs os
It's really superb ...Mast welcome back ho Gaya mera toh

Really good work .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
anya i cant express how much i love the story i was smiling from begging to end this was a delight to read the title of the story is amazing and i love every dialogue from rudy they were life and love that you showed Shivomru bond which was missing in the show love the part where shivaay is making a mentally note to not fight with his jhansi ki rani and anika teaching him what DKKM means 😆 was laughing on this part so much. My favourite part was the date and kiss from begging to the end from her walking down the starts to the car part and the dance LOVE ITTT ❤️ ❤️❤️ when i was reading this I felt goosebumps the words that you used in the part where anika says what he means to him AMAZING I was glued to my laptop reading that part because you wrote it so beautifully and every line was pure perfection. Anya this is the one of the best shivika story i have read on this forum keep writing you are amazing and incredible at this i am waiting another story from you.
And the VM is just amazing as well manas yaar you did amazing job with it will comment on your thred as well and great song choice by anya the lyrics to the song are a dream and perfect for shivika love the begging with shivaay looking at her this part went so well with the part anya wrote of anika coming down the stairs in white sari AMAZIINGGG a

I always love to see collaborations because it is about incredible talented people like you two that come together and make masterpieces like this.
❤️❤️
🤗



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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Awesomeee
Rudy antics in the last part was just 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Awesome amazing fentastic os dear
shivika romance and kiss ❤️
poor rudy know one explain him 🤣



Thank you Mariam❤️
If anyone would have gone to explain him----the person would have been in the asylum for sure😆

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