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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Peeps!

This is my first post. It is based on recent episodes. Couple of days back there was an article claiming Shivay's death . So,I just wrote a random thing.
SSO is near to his death, and so he decides to profess his love to Anika through this letter ./poem.
My apologies in advance if it turns out to be disastrous.
Reviews would be appreciated.:)


hundred sweet tunes throng the heart
One moment,then as fast depart
As I advance amidst the blasts ,
I quickly revisit all moments of my past

Two lovely eyes, the warmth in your touch,
the love, care, all of which I miss so much.
In the depths of despair, I didn't sleep last night


Now when I see splinters of death rise in front of my eyes,
In my conscience, your glowing face , I realise
As I try to smell your hair and feel your hands in mine
I try to remember for the last time,how your eyes used to shine.

Now our faces seem distant, but I hope for a ray of light
You don't know what I would give to see you for one last time!
Dreaming hopelessly about my love, because I walk a thin line

Fate have now thrown us apart,
But we will live on forever in each other's hearts.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sad and beautiful, touched my heart!
-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its too emotional as well as heart touching
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was Beautiful 😭
you made me cry 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Painful one 😭 , yet beautiful
SSO better confess it soon, before this kind of situation really turns up.
Write more, if possible, happy one. 😊
Would love to read more from ya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks ya all ,for your feedbacks:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: joy1

Painful one 😭 , yet beautiful
SSO better confess it soon, before this kind of situation really turns up.
Write more, if possible, happy one. 😊
Would love to read more from ya


Thanks. Yes, I would try to write happy one, if something comes up on my mind.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanka_22

It was Beautiful😭

you made me cry😭


Ow. Sorry for that. I know it was too sad. I could not think of any better way of confession.
Thank you for reading though 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Sad and beautiful, touched my heart!

-Sanu


Thank you Sanya 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Its too emotional as well as heart touching


Sorry if it was too heartbreaking. SSO gave no choice ,but to write in this way . 🥱
Thank you for your feedback. 😊

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