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Posted: 8 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: water9786
Di cannot write anything as I don't have words. That was something ...
Sorry Di will revert back to this post when I will get enough words.

Di even now I don't have words but even then I am writing this...

Anika's anger was justified because anyone in her place will feel exactly like that. and Shivaay's surprise was just out of the world. The admiration for him in Niharika's eyes, the happiness on Dadi's face is something that just made all this so much beautifull beyond words...

Shivaay cannot say anything about him... Di you know me enough to understand what I am trying to say?😳

Shivaay's surprise was good but really unexpected totally unexpected Di.

Anika's guilt for misunderstanding him, the way he was loosing control, his banging car door , her tears everything else was perfect👏

Then her tears, Shivaay's reaction superb

I loved Shivaay's thoughts about her being jealous.

Waitng for next update Di. Please please update soon.

Cannot wait to read about there college life.😳

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#302

Hey Harshu
I know I need to unres my comment on Journey SS
but couldn't resist myself from reading this first
you know my liking for your this ff ..don't you??

coming to the update
It was Amazing
Anika and Shivay both are lucky to have each other in one way or the other
Anika expects something from Shivay..isn't it a big thing in itself???
Shivay's surprise was so sweet and cute.
These small gestures are enough to fill a girl's heart with happiness
Who says girls can never be understood??? just think from heart and your small gestures will surely be enough
Awesome
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

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trishanaksh

@trishanaksh

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Hey there...

Thank you so much.

Glad you liked it.

Yeah sure. But make sure you dont disappear after that. I am so sorry but I have had such many experiences where people comment once to get PMs and they everytime forget to even drop a like.

Thank you

I wont forget!😉

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: water9786

Di even now I don't have words but even then I am writing this...
Anika's anger was justified because anyone in her place will feel exactly like that. and Shivaay's surprise was just out of the world. The admiration for him in Niharika's eyes, the happiness on Dadi's face is something that just made all this so much beautifull beyond words...
Shivaay cannot say anything about him... Diyou know me enough to understand what I am trying to say?😳
Shivaay's surprise was good but really unexpected totally unexpected Di.
Anika's guilt for misunderstanding him, the way he was loosing control, his banging car door , her tears everything else was perfect👏
Then her tears, Shivaay's reaction superb
I loved Shivaay's thoughts about her being jealous.
Waitng for next update Di. Please please update soon.
Cannot wait to read about there college life.😳

Chhaya, You are such a Sweetheart dear.
Thanks a ton for this wonderful comment.

Will reply in detail once I switch to laptop.

Lots of Love
- Harshada

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Loved the bonding between the young newly-weds and Shivaay's gesture!

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
Loved the bonding between the young newly-weds and Shivaay's gesture!

Thanks a lot 😳

Glad you are enjoying reading this!

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#307

Dear Khushi, Chhaya and Harshita...

Your feedbacks truly made my day:-)

Will revert back to you lovely Sweethearts, soonest I can!!!

Meanwhile, a big thank you.

Lots of Love
- Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
I always told you bestie...
Your ff shivaay is ideal husband for every girl...
Perfect hubby, perfect SIL, perfect man...or kya chahiye ek ladki ko...Anika is lucky very very lucky...

And dadi's friends reunion was fabulous, sab ko college or dilip kumar k dinn yaad aa gaye honge 😉 ...shivaay gesture touch everyone's heart...dill jeetna to koi Inn se Sikhenge...

And anika she is possessive and guilty...I like shivaay here he is not only console her but understand her hug her and make her feel protected...marvellous update beastie...love it so much. ...

Tum apne baare main mujse bhi pooch sakte ho...,
Ye tumse kisney kaha ki aayna zaruri hai...!!!

Dear Khushi🤗

Thanks a ton. He is a dream boy😳

Kash ese ladke sach me bante 😆

Glad you enjoyed reading it dear. He is one perfect character, anyone can fall in love with❤️ but let's see if he has his own flaws or not. Truly, a girl wants someone would would respect her family, love and care for her. What else a girl needs?

Ah, even I don't know how that reunion plan came. I just typed out, straightaway without thinking much. He is a Sweetheart, and for him, Anika's happiness matters and her happiness lies within her Grandmother.

She isn't possessive yet here. I wonder if she becomes one later😉

Lots of Love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: water9786

Di even now I don't have words but even then I am writing this...
Anika's anger was justified because anyone in her place will feel exactly like that. and Shivaay's surprise was just out of the world. The admiration for him in Niharika's eyes, the happiness on Dadi's face is something that just made all this so much beautifull beyond words...
Shivaay cannot say anything about him... Di you know me enough to understand what I am trying to say?😳
Shivaay's surprise was good but really unexpected totally unexpected Di.
Anika's guilt for misunderstanding him, the way he was loosing control, his banging car door , her tears everything else was perfect👏
Then her tears, Shivaay's reaction superb
I loved Shivaay's thoughts about her being jealous.
Waitng for next update Di. Please please update soon.
Cannot wait to read about there college life.😳

Dear Chhaya🤗

Like I said earlier, You are a sweetheart. And I love you so much for this sweetest comment.

Her anger is the start of their bond. It reflects she had started expecting things from him. If she wouldn't have cared at all, then she wouldn't have felt bad. But she did, because she feels.

Yes yes, I perfectly know what you are trying to say here.

I love bringing unexpected elements you know. Why will anyone remember my stories if I go on writing common scenes??😳

Ah, imagine SHivaay loosing control and banging door... Intense, no?

Will update sooner...

Lots of Love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Mystery1234
Hey Harshu
I know I need to unres my comment on Journey SS
but couldn't resist myself from reading this first
you know my liking for your this ff ..don't you??

coming to the update
It was Amazing
Anika and Shivay both are lucky to have each other in one way or the other
Anika expects something from Shivay..isn't it a big thing in itself???
Shivay's surprise was so sweet and cute.
These small gestures are enough to fill a girl's heart with happiness
Who says girls can never be understood??? just think from heart and your small gestures will surely be enough
Awesome
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

Hi Harshita🤗 How have you been dear? You were saying, you are running busy. Hope your life eases up a bit.

Oh thanks for mentioning. I always wanted to tell you all, you guys are not supposed to read my every update.

I am writing so many, but I don't expect you to read all of them. Read the ones you enjoy😳😳

Of course, this story is so lucky to have such amazing readers like you all.❤️

The excitement for this story is an altogether on different level. The number of PMs I get to update this one makes me go🤗

Thanks a ton. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

You got it so right. Thats what. She expects something from him and that is the start of their bond, relation. She felt bad, because she feels something❤️

Bang on. A girl needs nothing more than these small gestures.

Thanks again. Will update soon.

Lots of love

-Harshada