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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Simply beautiful Ann...

You have included so many things I wanted to actually see on the show in this OS!!

Especially after the 2 Rs. dialogue that Ani had talked about the epi before and how Ani is actually supposed to protect Shivaay from all harm , I too wanted Ani to get shot instead of Shivaay!!

Shivaay's feelings when he filled out her form and his realization that he actually knew nothing about the girl who he loves, Om finally giving Ani Shivaay's name , Pinky finally thinking and asking herself why Shivaay wasn't accepting Tia, Shivaay's tadap. Just brilliant!!

And after reading the attention to tiny details here, how I wish the writers had done some research when they showed the medical scenes too because as brilliant as the emotional scenes were in the epi, the medical parts were LOL worthy!!

Hugs to you for this !!

Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago

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Arohi

@arohiarsh16

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

woow... Its totaly awesome...
So beautiful n heart touching moment's between ShivIka...
I just love this caring SSO...wish k show main v kuch aisa hota...
this is simply beautiful...

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Wow this is absolutely loveky

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

I was hoping for a story like this, thanks so much for sharing, kinda wish she had been the one shot, and Pinky did her own DNA test to get proven wrong about her stand with Tia

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Awesome with a huge dose of reality...good one indeed ...

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sweetnoori

@sweetnoori

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

ossawm Os dear

what about DNA ..??

lovely Os

update soon..

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sky-if

@sky-if

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

oh just loved the part where Shivaay is stumped where he has to fill in the forms - Shivaay really knows nothing except Annika's name.. Also love that Pinky really pauses to think about why her son was plain refusing to acknowledge the baby as his own.

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Sania Dhariwal

@sanu456

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Lovely os

Can't stop reading it again and again...

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S.love1

@S.love1

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Wow

THis was beautiful

I wish this had happened in the show but you see my wish came true through you at least

Thanks a lot

Loved the part where shivaay realised he knows nothing, literally nothing about his annika

And the fact that pinky is at least considering the fact that there must a reason as to why her son keeps on denying that Tia's child is his, it gives us hope 😊

Much love!❤️

Soumya

Edited by S.love1 - 8 years ago