Ting! Ting! It's Love!! ShivIka SS. Part 5 updt on pg:17

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Brilliant as usual Sharmi 👏 ... sigh!! IB mein yeh kab hoga ???

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
P.S

Thanks a tonn for the lovely response for this ss.
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I want a small help. Can someone of u guyz plss suggest an apt title for this ss. I am not kinda satisfied... I thought so much for a proper Title but was left unanswered. It's a request. Anyone can suggest. It's a request.

Sharmi, how about 'Dil Mein Baji Ghantiyan Re: ShivIka SS'???? 😉😉😛

Actually, tera SS padho toh...wo 'Tu ne maari entriyan re dil mein baji ghantiyan re' song yaad aa jaayega...after all its love bells for Anika, & who knows, soon Shivaay might hear them too...😉😆😆

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

The update was Outstanding...👏👏

Shivaay is getting super confused with Anika's actions & words...😕😳

Anika's fear & hesitation...& Shivaay understanding & care...ShivIka power pack combo...penned down so well, Sharmi...👏👍🏼

("Shivaay... my life has always been very different and unfair. It's not what u think. Life was never easy for me. I had to fight this whole world... alone." She paused...

"Alone... I was left alone. And nothing can be more painful than loneliness. Whoever i have loved has left me. My parents... my chutki... Sahil's parents... everyone. U know that Sahil is my weakness as well as strength... but he is more a weakness.
Love has been my weakness... always. It pains when we lose someone close to our heart...and in my case I have lost all of them. I can't afford to lose u. I cant fall weak once again Shivaay. I can't make u my weakness. I tried my best to stay from you... thinking that ignoring you will be the best for me...for..."

"For?!"

"For us...
My life is filled with darkness... it is the same darkness that i am afraid of. My life is bitter Shivaay... nd i dont want to fill your life with my bitterness.
Pain.
It has been my best friend till date. It was someone...who was always wid me...nd will always be. I cant turn ur beautiful life into hell. I cant darken your life. I should leave u for your own good. I fear that i may lose u Shivaay. Which I can't bear. I have already lost many... I dont have enough strength in me to bear a loss once again. I just... cant. I have loved u soo much... u r not close to my heart. U r my heart Shivaay...and if i lose my heart... I can't live."

Nd she cried her heart out...)------- Anika's pain was heart-wrenching...she was miserable all through her life...Felt so sad for her...😭😭

(I didn't realize when tears sprang out from my eyes. I hugged her close nd she buried herself in me. I couldn't stand her tears... her pain. It was like someone stabbed me with a dagger.

"No Anika... U r really very strong. Nd i havent met a stronger woman than u in my life. And that's what i admire most about you. U r independant, strong, brave, selfless nd u make others smile. I want to be your strength Anika nd not your weakness. I want to give u all the love u craved for... in all these painfull years. I will give u every single happiness of this world...u know Why?
Nd i cupped her face and looked into her eyes.

"Cuz..you deserve them Anika. I will turn your life into the most sweetest one.. wiping of every bit of bitterness. I will light every corner of your life removing darkness from them, nd u will have to be no more afraid of darkness. If I am ur heart...then u are my heartbeat Anika...my breath. Nd there is no heartbeat without a heart. I cannot think of a life without you. Your tears will be replaced with smiles. And I want to be the reason u smile Anika."

She started shedding more tears and hugged me close... nd i reciprocated the hug. All i could do was pull her closer that our bodies were flushed together amidst tears.

We stayed like that for sometime. I kissed her hairs and caressed them with utmost tenderness. )--------- Shivaay is so loving & supportive...He loves Anika with all his heart & soul...😊

Shivaay couldn't figure out his own feelings...he is so puzzled about his own words & reactions...again you portrayed that feeling so beautifully, Sharmi...👏👏

Om's words flashing before Shivaay was an excellent scene...😃😊(Sharmi, tu v chahti hai na ki jab Shivaay ko ehsaas ho ki use Anika se pyaar hai tab use aise hi Om ki ye saari baatein yaad aa jaaye???? 😉😛)

Keep going...😃😃

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Wah wah wah Sharmi👏

Kya awesome as hai SS hai😃

Read all four parts in one go😃😃😳

Thoda late ho gayi yaha aane mein😆

Mein toh Teri SS ki jabra fan ho gayi😳

Shivika ki romance ☺️

Don't forget to pm me

Manas😃

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
@Asya🤗
Asya...u r simply amazing. I just love how u put in your feedbacks at every post. There r really enthralling. I love reading them...nd I am a fan of ur writing.😳
And I am of yours love ... I love the simple and light style you have .. I always have this silly smile on my face when I read your SS ... I can imagine ShivIka doing those things ❤️
I cannot help but give feed backs .. it is just so much fun to read the story
Don't forget to PM me ... k?
It wrds mean a lott to me. Its so exciting to read ur feedbacks. Love u loads...😳🤗
Thanks once again...
Love Sharmi.

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

beautiful really

love it

please do continue

bye sumi

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ShanÃ© Pillay

@MorningStar01

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Firstly I'm so so sorry for reading this sooo late. Life has been busy for a few weeks now 😒 Buhhht I'm here now and God am I glad to finally have read this amazing SS. It's just brilliant.

Secondly thank uUu for still dropping me p.m's for the updates eventho' I have been m.i.a. Love uUu for that. 🤗

Annnddd now lemme get to the best part...Ting! Ting! It's Love! ❤️... I'm literally still grinning to myself in the dark here after reading all 4 parts (luckily I got to read all the parts together, b'coz it would have been never wrecking to have to wait for the next parts) 😆

Part 1// I loved how Shivaay was constantly saying "My Wife" so easily, it's something I've wanted to see onscreen but it's ok, I've seen it here now... && thank Uu for giving for filling in all the blanks dealing with the jungle/death episodes. You covered the things the cv's couldn't and gave us a proper Shivika scene that we had all expected out of that episodes!! His promise to her gave me such feels. Sigh.

Part 2// "Deadly disease" ofcoz Anika would think of love like that, I'd expect nothing less from her. Ufff the "my husband" ... her battle with her inner voice was just too much, she should really listen to that voice... Finally he confronted her and sigh! how I wish this was how things happened onscreen. The pain and anger that Shivaay was feeling, I loved it (not in the sadistic way but in that 'Anika if affecting him' way). But then *bam* that end line had my heart beating extra fast.

Part 3// Leave it to Anika to confess her feelings, kiss him senseless and then blame the raita that getting phailao'd on him (buhhht I do agree with her blaming him) all in one go. I'm surprised that Shivaay didn't suffer from whiplash with all the sudden emotion changes from her...Tsserk can she ask him for al those things when she herself can't give him that. Anika Anika Anika. Sigh.

Part 4// Let me just say that you have made me cry. Because the fear and pain you described in this part hit close to home. And I can totally understand the feelings behind Anika's words. It's was beautifully set out and described and how I long to see this actually happening. I'm glad she's confessed to him and explain also why she "cannot". && Shivaay, he's just so confused, it's so cute. It's also really cute how he said he wants to be her strength and give her all the love she missed out on. It was a beautiful scene.

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&& now I want to read more 😭

Can I have more? Please. I'll send you chocolates and whatever else you want.

This had been amazing to read, especially after last night's episode with Pinky and her michmichi words. Everything was brilliant. You know I love your writing. There's always the right doses of humour, romance and intensity. It's perfect. ❤️

Sending you loads of reiki, virtual hugzZz && tons of love 🤗

-Shan'e

P.S. Sorry for the sucky comment, promise a better one for the next update.

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CaffeineMuggle

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

OMG ! I almost missed this but thanks to your PM's. Thanks a lot. This was so amazing , in fact I had butterflies in my stomach in most of the parts. This was so good ! Really 👏 Please keep up with the fantastic work that you do. Loving it. 😳
Love
Lis 😊

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Anika...

We sat there in silence... only our breaths could be heard. I don't know what to do. His words were like a balm to my wounds. It calmed my soul. I relaxed.

I felt so happy...

Finally... finally there is someone in this world to whom my presence meant sooo much. Who valued me. In who's life i was important more than anything. To whom my smile mattered the most. Who promised to make my life the best. Promised to be with me for...for..FOREVER. I didn't want to open my eyes. Cuz I feared if this was all a dream... then i would break.. break hard that i would not be able to put myself together.
It felt so good in his arms. Like i belonged there.

Only I.

"Shivaay...

Shivaay...

Shivaay..."

Was all that my mind...body..soul said, felt and thought about. He proved to me that he too loves me.

I paused..

Wait...Did he love me? Does He?

My hearts rate started picking up. What...what if... he did Not?

No...No...

I just couldn't even think about it after all that he said.

I didn't want to..but was forced to pull back and look at him.

His cheeks were still wet with fresh tears. His hair dishelved. It was because of me... the way my palms played with his hairs...when we kissed. His eyes were deep like the sea. It held many in there.
My hands automatically reached upto his face and wiped them off. His gaze was now on me...piercing into mine.
He held my face nd wiped the tear stains.

I expected him to say something. But he was mumm. He didnt utter a word. All he did was look at me. Like he was holding something really precious. I stared back at him.

"Do you love me Shivaay?"...,...

Shivaay...

Her question was the same thing digging my head. Nd I was tangled in my own feelings.

How weird.

Well... all the symptoms and feelings declared that it was..was... ummm.. lo...Love! Yes Love!

It was not wrong to Love her... but what about my Rules.. about Naam Khoon and Khaandaan?! My mind questioned.

'It's all fake... if Naam, Khoon and Khaandaan makes Anika not fit into your world... then u r wrong..
Did u forget what Tia and Daksh did?! What svetlana did?! Didn't they belong to the rich Khoon, famous Naam and Khaandaan?! Think Shivaay Singh Oberoi... Think!!'
My heart interupted

Yess... He is right... i guess Anika being an orphan and a middle class girl was best in her character. She is independant.. self-made, strong and beautiful. Her name is her identity. And she had created it with her own hard work. Absolutely perfect to be An Oberoi!

'Isn't she?!' My heart questioned again.

Nope... She is the best! And I love her!! Yes... I love her!

The realization bought a damn wide curve on my lips, my eyes glistened with happiness and joy... nd my body reacted awesomely..
I pulled her into a bone crushing hug.

"Yes... Yes... I LOVE U ANIKA! I SO DAMN LOVE U..."
I heard her let out a soft laugh. I felt my shirt getting wet. I pulled back to see her shedding tears.

"What happened? Why are u crying my darling? Did I say something wrong?" I asked with utmost concern.

"No Shivaay...infact u have said the most best and correct thing today. My tears are following out due to my unbearable happiness. Finally I have someone who loves for who I am. Finally I mean something special to someone... Thank You Shivaay... u have made me soo happy today... that i can't express it through words." She finished and I wiped her tears and lifted her chin to face me.

"Come here.." and I pulled her slowly towards myself.

"U r the only one that i can have for myself.
That i have chosen for myself. Something I know which is perfect. Just perfect. U r really special to me Anika. I know I am being selfish... but i want all of u only for me... atleast until u give me our baby!"

She snapped up at me as a shy smile spread over her face making her look heavenly.

"That's more like my Anika. I Love u... I love u soo much."

Nd I took her close to me as I claimed her lips slowly. Drugging myself and her into it. She is soo intoxicating. Don't kmow what she does to me. I just don't like it when she is far away from me. She is soo beautiful both in and out. She is someone so different... a very rare piece.. and I am SO happy and proud that i have someone who is "Carodon mein ek!"

My tongue slided in feeling her warmth. She tasted so good. And I want to taste her for lifetime. To be by her side forever. I want to the reason she smiles as well as cries.. meaning both happy and sad. Only i can love her, hurt her, touch her and Mark her mine.

"U... R... only..Mine Anika... Only MINE!" I claimed against her lips. She smiled and I took her in for another kiss.

"Oh...i love her soo much!!" My insides screamed.

Anika...

My heart melted as those words escaped his mouth. I really couldn't believe what i heard... and he said once again... how much he loved me. My heart swelled with happiness. My mind exploded as I couldn't take the fact that he really confessed his feelings for me.

I am so special to him... and I am only his... '"ONLY HIS!!" That sounded so good... so perfect...like it was meant to be.
I really can't express what i am going through. I felt like all the happiness was dumped on me all together. It was a feeling that i had never experienced throughout my lifetime. I have heard it feels great when u mean so much to someone... but i never it could be sooo... umm... I really can't say. My smile and my tears said it all.

Then he kissed me... and this kiss was filled more of love than need. 'O My Maata... I so love this Man... He's made me go crazy!!!'

And our lips met again and it all felt soo heavenly!!!
Finally it was the perfect... Mr. And Mrs. Shivaay Singh Oberoi... Mrs. and Mr. Anika!!

Well tell me if have to continue or not... and do tell whether the realisation of Shivaay's feelings were gud or not?!...
I apologize for my late update... sorry ppl.
Had exams.. so was a little busy.. so hope apology is accepted.
Love ya all!

Love Sharmi..