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Posted: 8 years ago
Rudy ke andar ka SRK jaag utha 🀣
Hehe, this was so adorable!

Who called out to Sumo though.. Anika? Shivaay? Ishana? Her Bade Baal Wale Bhaiya? Continue soon, climax pe mocie nahi chodte ;)

Edit : Take care... Get well soon 😳
Edited by Black_Maniac - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part- 4 was Hilarious...The Train Boarding Fiasco...πŸ€£πŸ˜†
Shivaay bichara...he was pulling a heavy luggage all alone cursing the to whom it belongs...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Rudra boarded the train as per Anika's instructions...chalo sahi kiya bande ne...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
ShivIka & their never-ending nok-jhok...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
ShivIka ekdum gazab hi hain bas...the train started to move & these two, instead of boarding the train, they are busy arguing about the heavy bag which turned out to be Anika's...both are MAD...🀣🀣
Anika shouting at the man inside the train to pull the chain was pretty funny...& Shivaay got the idea that he will go through bizarre things throughout the trip...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Anika k bag ka handle tutt gaya!!! Matlab bag rehe gaya station mein aur inn dono ko pata v nhi chala...& on top of that Shivaay threw away his phone in anger...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Anya, you know, whatever happened with Saumya has happened with me...ek hi train mein do alag alag train lagkar aate hain aur kisi ek station pe alag ho jaate hain...I too was about to board the wrong portion of a train...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† So thnkxxx for writing this part & making me remember my experience...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
IshKaraMya kaunse train mein chadhe, Shimla wale mein ya Nako wale mein??? πŸ˜²πŸ˜•
Saumya must have gone through a terrible thing...aadhi body bahar latki hui...aur wo patla sa ladka, bichare ka toh keema bann gaya hoga...ek toh heavy bag upar se Sumo, dono uss par gir gaye...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ishana v ek aur pagal...she sat on the platform to collect the snacks which fell from her hands instead of jumping on the moving train...Om ne sahi kaha, "iss ladki ka kuch nhi ho sakta"...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
IshKara train boarding scene was like DDLJ...but there was comedy added to it...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Part- 5 (1st shot) was Very Entertaining...πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸΌ
Rudra's phone is dead...he was not invited to a party by Nisha...& he saved the day of Zubair's wife Ahana who he thought was some unmarried woman with whom he could get a chance...really a bad day for Ruddy...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Wah Ruddy...help maanga v toh kisse!!! Jo khud first time train travellers hain...LOL...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
OMG!!! So, IshKaraMya are actually in the Shimla going train...& here I was expecting that atleast Saumya will run & board the Nako one...chalo koi nhi, ab toh aur mazaa aayega...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
RuMya met finally & exchanged news...temporary relief...now the three couples are together on their own (though RuMya are not fully together)...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
("Arrre sumo you got scared of this?"he asked amused.
"haan toh tumhe darr nhi lag raha hai toh tumhi yahan aa jaao"she said trying hard not to sound scared."which train will go to Nako this one or that one?"he shouted"this one na..so you need to come over here not me"he added.
"ok now common throw the bags and jump!"he again shouted."you can do this sumo..yahi time hai ki tum apne parathon ka taakat dikhao...chalo jaldi se jump maaro aur yahan aa jao."he encouragd her.)-------- RuMya are always funny together...& Rudra's one liners...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
So, IshKara too reached RuMya...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Accha...isse at least ye baat toh saaf ho gayi ki H1 kidhar hai uss ladhayi mein Saumya galat nikli aur Rudra was proved right...at least he got the right train...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ

Carry on soon...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
Beautifully written
Love rumya
Bechara rudt uska toh di. Hi kharab h
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsm update thanx for the p.m conti soonish
Posted: 8 years ago
A big sorrryyy cookie...was struck..
and more over my net digged me out...
Dhoka dedi aa mujhe😭😭

Hmmm...sorry cookie I am being late to comment ...and.
..once again I am in love with u and with this story...my obsession growing i Guess...hahaa love you cookie...




And what...who told u that u r dragging...
Hey girl u r portraying every single emotions and actions through ur pen work...

And I am amazed by that...do u call that dragging...πŸ˜•πŸ₯±πŸ˜²


I am so content with ur update...and with your writing way...keep being yourself...bcoz...u r AWESOME...πŸ‘πŸ˜Š



OK...enough of my tareeef...u may get cold...which I don't want u to have...πŸ˜‰




Awww...regarding update...
Waiting for shivika and shiv being nerdy...
Can't wait to see how u pen them offf...

Ru...finally Sumo ko find kardiyaaa...
Ye saari siyappa naa dumble oberoi ki wajas she...


Phir bhi I love Ru...
I love You tooo cookie...



Haha...take ur timeπŸ€—





Edit:
What u r down with fever..,.
Its ok cookie...u can update whenever u are being able...don't stress yourself honey...


Sending u loads and thousands of love and prayers...
Get well sooonishy cookie...



Ummmahhh...Huggies...kissies...and medicines for you

Edited by ashlok - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

That was lovely dear.

Hope you feel better soon. Take care.


thank you dear..❀️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Rudy ke andar ka SRK jaag utha 🀣

Hehe, this was so adorable!

Who called out to Sumo though.. Anika? Shivaay? Ishana? Her Bade Baal Wale Bhaiya? Continue soon, climax pe mocie nahi chodte ;)

Edit : Take care... Get well soon😳



Thankoo Krishi... ❀️
πŸ˜†πŸ˜† yeah uske andar ka SRK jaag utha..

Hmm...that you will know in the next update..πŸ˜‰
Will try my best to update it soon..

Love you,
Anya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roselind

Part- 4 was Hilarious...The Train Boarding Fiasco...πŸ€£πŸ˜†

Shivaay bichara...he was pulling a heavy luggage all alone cursing the to whom it belongs...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Rudra boarded the train as per Anika's instructions...chalo sahi kiya bande ne...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
ShivIka & their never-ending nok-jhok...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
ShivIka ekdum gazab hi hain bas...the train started to move & these two, instead of boarding the train, they are busy arguing about the heavy bag which turned out to be Anika's...both are MAD...🀣🀣
Anika shouting at the man inside the train to pull the chain was pretty funny...& Shivaay got the idea that he will go through bizarre things throughout the trip...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Anika k bag ka handle tutt gaya!!! Matlab bag rehe gaya station mein aur inn dono ko pata v nhi chala...& on top of that Shivaay threw away his phone in anger...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Anya, you know, whatever happened with Saumya has happened with me...ek hi train mein do alag alag train lagkar aate hain aur kisi ek station pe alag ho jaate hain...I too was about to board the wrong portion of a train...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† So thnkxxx for writing this part & making me remember my experience...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
IshKaraMya kaunse train mein chadhe, Shimla wale mein ya Nako wale mein??? πŸ˜²πŸ˜•
Saumya must have gone through a terrible thing...aadhi body bahar latki hui...aur wo patla sa ladka, bichare ka toh keema bann gaya hoga...ek toh heavy bag upar se Sumo, dono uss par gir gaye...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ishana v ek aur pagal...she sat on the platform to collect the snacks which fell from her hands instead of jumping on the moving train...Om ne sahi kaha, "iss ladki ka kuch nhi ho sakta"...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
IshKara train boarding scene was like DDLJ...but there was comedy added to it...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Part- 5 (1st shot) was Very Entertaining...πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸΌ
Rudra's phone is dead...he was not invited to a party by Nisha...& he saved the day of Zubair's wife Ahana who he thought was some unmarried woman with whom he could get a chance...really a bad day for Ruddy...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Wah Ruddy...help maanga v toh kisse!!! Jo khud first time train travellers hain...LOL...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
OMG!!! So, IshKaraMya are actually in the Shimla going train...& here I was expecting that atleast Saumya will run & board the Nako one...chalo koi nhi, ab toh aur mazaa aayega...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
RuMya met finally & exchanged news...temporary relief...now the three couples are together on their own (though RuMya are not fully together)...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
("Arrre sumo you got scared of this?"he asked amused.
"haan toh tumhe darr nhi lag raha hai toh tumhi yahan aa jaao"she said trying hard not to sound scared."which train will go to Nako this one or that one?"he shouted"this one na..so you need to come over here not me"he added.
"ok now common throw the bags and jump!"he again shouted."you can do this sumo..yahi time hai ki tum apne parathon ka taakat dikhao...chalo jaldi se jump maaro aur yahan aa jao."he encouragd her.)-------- RuMya are always funny together...& Rudra's one liners...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
So, IshKara too reached RuMya...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Accha...isse at least ye baat toh saaf ho gayi ki H1 kidhar hai uss ladhayi mein Saumya galat nikli aur Rudra was proved right...at least he got the right train...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ

Carry on soon...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Rose...πŸ€—πŸ€—
thank yuo dear...for this lovely feedback...
abhi shivaay ko aur bhi pagal pan dekhna and don't worry...they have boarded the train with annika's bag but th handle got broken...abh annika will not leave shivaay for it...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
hahhahaha...πŸ˜† tumhare saath bhi aisa hua tha...
it's my pleasure...that becoz of me you got to relish your crazy moment...😳
Are nahi ishkara in the shimla train oly...they will soon meet each other...πŸ˜‰
yeah H1 was in the left side...now rudy will not leave any chance to taunt saumya about it...πŸ˜†
will try to update it soon...

love you loads,
Anya😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Muku007

Awesome

Beautifully written
Love rumya
Bechara rudt uska toh di. Hi kharab h


thank you jaan...❀️
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Posted: 8 years ago

thank you dear...😳

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