Drabble Series: A Romantic Divorce (NEW-DRABBLE Pg 34) 25th February

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Pritha Roy

@pritzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#271

Navin 😭 You made me love Naval.. I always had hoped for Annika getting a guy some like this one you created... Perfect , but for some people perfect is not what they need.. 😊

I know he is a temporary guy but I loved how he felt the rage in him about Annikas belittling herself about her life and bg .. I loved how he cares for her Self-esteem and pride and respects her .. which shivaay lacks as of now..

I am so sad that that Naval is gonna leave someday 😭

But yes I would love if he could actually show annika what she is missing and indirectly make Shivaay realise what he is loosing, maybe that way Naval really gets his own beautiful memories... to live life...not all love stories are successful.. Like SRK and Ranbirs convo in ADHM..

R: Aasan hai kya aisi mohabbat karna jiske badle mohobbat na mile?

S: Its the most beautiful feeling in the world

R: Kamzori nahi lagti Apko?

S: Bilkul bhi nahi, ek tarfa pyaar ki takat hi Kuch or hoti hai, aur rishto ki tarah 2 logo me nahi batti, sirf mera haq hai ispe, sirf mera.. Mujhe usse behintehaan mohobbat karne ke liye uski hi zaroorat nahi hai ...

❤️

Navin You are a wonderful wonderful writer darling... you touch emotions with your words .. you know to play and mingle words and emtions ... you connect them so easily... You do magic .. plain simple magic. 👏

I don't always comment on all updates... I always wait for chapters to pile so that I can binge read them... and I am hating this now that I read at the wrong time.. I cannot wait to know what happens next..

But please note this down... I love you for your Beauty in writing and your way of expressing the intriguing characters with detailed actions and emotions and in such easy words that we just get deep into the story and actually watch it happen in front of us 👏

Beautiful Piece. My First favorite is Dil Bole Oberoi - FOR ANNIKA and Second is THIS ❤️

Keep writing and please update soon.. Soonish !

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sky-if

@sky-if

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#272

oh my! Just got a chance to catch up on all the parts so far and am blown away..

You are magic! Loved loved the emotions you portray.. whether it is the OBros bond with Annika, the fiercely protective and possessive Shivaay or Annika herself..

Ah you even had Mallika and Vikram join in in a game with the Oberois, had the elite eating off of Annika's hands and then you bring in Naval, just what Annika needs! ❤️ it!

Can't wait to see how you take this forward.. while I feel for Shivaay, its about time for billu-ji to wake up and smell the Saira-bano 😆

I know am going to go back and read this series so many more times! Thank you!