Drabble Series: A Romantic Divorce (NEW-DRABBLE Pg 34) 25th February

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#211

amazing amazing amazing update.

oh how much i loved it.u never know😉.

thanks⭐️

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samaz95

@samaz95

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#212

Aaahhh, you've managed to done it again !(:

I can't tell you how happy I was to read that you'd continue this, because i had felt the last update to be not such a good ending note :(

P.s don't get mad.

Coming to this, it was absolutely wonderful; just what is needed in the circumstances to hopefully and finally bring SSO out from his dream slumber, in regards to his wife.

And it was even more apt given the current situation in the show, I am so glad to be able to actually see some emotional progess on Shivaay's behalf there.

Can't wait to read more about this angry but helpless Billu

So glad to see the rest of the family try and diffuse the impending doom, lol.

Absolutely loved the way you described her as his heart, beacuse she is (:

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Samira

@mishti4maan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#213

Why? Why can't you be the damn writer of this show???!!! oh my god! the jealousy... i love this so much... i just pray something like this happens in IB. I mean it's ridiculous what they are showing right now.. All this money and resources spent on the stupid pointless Shitia wedding!!??? REALLY?? it's just such a waste... but amazing part.. i love the bit where he said "he has done this"- the ramifications of his actions are finally catching up to him. Seriously why can't you be the writer of Ishqbaaz?

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#214

Amazing
Anika did right thing and shivaay really needed reality check
Continue soon

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Awesome navin...

Ab jake kale je mein dhandAK padi

Shivay deserves this...now he will do something to get the situation under control

👏

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Rida Sadaqat

@ridz13sdqt

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Yeahhh u decided to continue.. 🤗 and what a brilliant piece 👏 I love Shivaay's condition and the way you explained that he created this situation for himself on his own..

I loved the last line.."with Shivaay Singh Oberoi's very heart buckled safely in the first seat of naval's viper.." so on point.. all the feels 😳
Keep writing...

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#217

Thanks for continuing...Yay !!!! Naval marring mauke pe chauka... Loved Shivay being jalkukda... Continue soonish 😊

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shanry

@shanry

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#218

OH MY GOD!

You did it AGAIN?!

I'm totally awed by your wealth of talent and depth of imagination. You are simply, BRILLIANT!

And now to hope you will not follow in the footsteps of serial CVs and will indeed get to the Shivaay beating up little Tata & embracing Anika in front of the world within the week 😃

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#219

Hey Navin.. Read this one finally.. Lolz.. Can our IB writers pick something from this.. ? 😛 I really really want some other good businessman's son to fall for Anika in real not creepy like Daksh..Plz don't want another Daksh had enough of him.. 😆 Then will see Shivay's face.. right now when he is making Anika J by romancing Tia.. 😳 Solid Michmichi.. 🤢 N one more want anika now to earn N be independent.. but sigh.. anyways coming to update.. I loved Jala bhuna Shivay singh Oberoi.. Kya kare.. now someone else's heart came on his Jaan.. Gosh I can Imagine.. he will never let her work.. if men start ogling over his wife..

So nice story.. Loved it.. 😊