Drabble Series: A Romantic Divorce (NEW-DRABBLE Pg 34) 25th February

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jarir2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

loved it.its wonderful and of course want more.👏

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Sigh!!! That was wonderful writing.I just hope anika makes shivay proud in her own unique and innocent way. She has been there where shivay least expected her.loved it.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

awesome update..really loved it...looks like the Oberoi household is decked up head to toe in Anika's style...Shivaay desperation seeking Anika and searching for her in the crowd was endearing to read about...it looks like Anika is the oasis in the desert for Shivaay and reaching Anika, seeing her puts life back in Shivaay's parched soul...so Shivaay has decided to accept the fact and begin the new year with the announcement of who his wife is..let's see if it goes all planned without any hurdle...by the way I love this roadside romeo side of Shivaay, I wonder if he will present his roadside romeo self in front of the society and romance Anika openly...that would be fun...very well written..👏

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sbkt99

@sbkt99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Nothing you write could ever be disappointing! Love love loved this, and the ending dialogue, so Anika Your description of the party was awesome (especially he food, got me hungry!) I wanted to be there. Great job! Looking forward to seeing how the party continues and of course your continuations of your other short stories

Edited by sbkt99 - 8 years ago

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

wow this was just something

the way party is going it look so much fun i want be there

can't wait to read the next part

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

awesomeee

he is so smitten by her...

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Navin darling,

If this is how you write when you have a writers block, then I hope that this bout of whatever wierd form of it that you have continues because this was fantastic...the whole idea made me want to attend the party myself and I melted seeing this side of Shivaay but you really brought out Shivaay's true feelings here...that he loves her but cant express himself!! I picturised Ani in the dress you mentioned and wished that you were the stylist for Ani in the show too( no offense to her ideas but sometimes, Ani's wardrobe is such a disaster on the show!)

And is Ani drunk!! I think she will be a hit at the party or even if she isn't her hubby will love her more with the antics she pulls off at this party!!

P.s. I love your drabbles always but I kind of really really loved this one!!Asli duniya has been pathetic and I was so not in a mood to type anything long but this story made me!!

Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago

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samaz95

@samaz95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

I'm so glad to finally have you back, anything from you is better than nothing!(:

I was thinking that you must have had a block, therefore there was silence on your end.It's okay, just hope that it'll dissipate soon.

And coming to this , itso absolutely wonderful as usual, love how you've brought out his inability to actually talk to her, reassure her.I think that is pretty vital.

Though I'm a little bummed, I wont be getting to read both parts together!

Please update soon.