PriVeer OS- Fire and Ice

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey PriVeer fans, I love PriVeer and here is a small OS on them😳. Hope it's worth a read😊.

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"Aap chodiye...chodiye mujhe" The room echoed with her frightful screams, but he didn't tear his gaze from her. Was she not so nervous, she could have melted due to the intensity of his gaze. She looked in his eyes. What was he? Fire?

He stared at her trembling lips. What was she? He felt a weird pain in his heart seeing her tremble like this. Shouldn't he be happy seeing her in fear, then why was he feeling unhappy?

She pushed him and was about to run away, but he grasped at her right wrist and pulled her closer to him. Her back banged into his chest. She closed her eyes in fear. Seeing her breathe heavily, he smirked.

She turned to look at him. Seeing him smirk, the last pieces of patience in her fell down, shattered. Angrily, she raised her hand, but he held her hand.

"Aap bhi toh ek bhai hai, ek ladki ke saath aisa kaise kar sakte ho?" She said, looking at his hand that was holding her hand, firmly.

"Haan hoon main ek bhai, jiski behen har minute maut ke paas jaa rahi hai, jiska nephew apni maa ke saath khelne, uske paas rehne ke liye tadapta hai," He said, pulling her closer to himself.

"Leave me!" She screamed.

"Nahi chodunga, woh dard mujhe nahi chodta, toh main tumhe kyun chodu?" He asked her, his voice getting huskier.

She felt a sting in her heart. She looked in his eyes and felt herself drowning in her eyes. Brushing off her thoughts, she pushed him and moved out of his grip.

"Ab jaane de raha hoon, par yaad rakhna, I won't let you go!" He said and winked at her. She walked out of the house.

He couldn't help but smile. She was ice, but had the power to ignite a fire with her eyes, and he? He loved playing with fire!

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Edited by __shibani__ - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Shivani 😃,
Nice update 👏. I was waiting for something like that only. Fire and ice? I liked the way you wrote how he smirks and pulls her closer I can imagine this now. It felt like that of the scenes where he corners her in the wall and says I'm gonna marry u.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dimaag

Hey Shivani 😃,
Nice update 👏. I was waiting for something like that only. Fire and ice? I liked the way you wrote how he smirks and pulls her closer I can imagine this now. It felt like that of the scenes where he corners her in the wall and says I'm gonna marry u.


Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely... priveer stories are always a welcome... keep writing more... rather go join the priveer story circle... new writers are always welcome there..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: arohiarsh16

woow...this is realy awesome...


Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivikaishkara

Lovely... priveer stories are always a welcome... keep writing more... rather go join the priveer story circle... new writers are always welcome there..


Thanks😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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res res
hopefully i'll un-res fast 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it 😊. I could totally imagine Ranveer pulling Priyanka close to him 😉.
PriVeer stories are always amazing to read. Why don't you join the story circle, you're really amazing 😊
Edited by Aamna_Ox - 8 years ago

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