Shivika SS: Enough *PART 3* pg 10* 5/1* - Page 3

Originally posted by: poemssyndrome

This is breathtaking & beautiful! Oh the pain of separation they are going to go through. And I hope Anika really acts the way she acted here. She has been fighting for their relationship for so long. It's high time for Shivaay to actually value what they have & fight with his life for it!
So wonderfully written!

Originally posted by: Naz02

Amazing!! This is so heart wrenching and poignant.
Beautifully written.

Originally posted by: chottekikhushi

Loved it Ann! If things go according to what you wrote, I can finally see where the makers are going with the track too and though its so angsty, its going to be a hell of a watch and we are go ing to love it, especially with Narbhi's mindblowing acting!!

Like Om said though, these papers are not going to change whatever connection they have!! And judging by how much Shivaay relies on her these days, he is going to be doing everything in his power to get her back once he knows he is in love (yup, I still feel he hasn't accepted that fact!!) What a way to show a redemption track!!

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Loved this, and I HOPE this happens--or at least a watered down version of this because there is no way the makers would have the guts and the logic to do exactly this onscreen, because it is RIGHT. She deserves to leave, and he deserves to fix at least the one thing he created, even before she showed up --his fractured connection both to TIA and to the Kapoors.

I so want to see Shivaay actually win her back, rather than just stumble into getting her again.

In the excitement of watching the baby drama, we have forgotten the cold blooded matching of two families solely for a business deal that all this started with. Tia's betrayal or Mrs Kapoor's one blouse-wali vamping should not detract from the reptilian calculation that led to this alliance-- from both sides. Glad Tej is there, in full glory, to remind us of this, of how this world of the Oberois actually operate. Not Janvi's sweetness or Priyanka's showing up as a support is the real Oberoi way --this cold calculation is.

You know Navin, I think Tej is actually up to something on screen. Where is the Tej Oberoi who made a minister go on his knees to pick up coins he threw, just because the latter made him wait?

I want to see Tej and Shivaay incinerate the Kapoors , like the sharks they were made out to be. Tia and her mother are mere manipulators, schemers at best. I want to see them eat them up, just like Shivaay threatened to at the wedding...

For Anika, this reason to break a sacred bond, to get a divorce--so that a deal could be done at the cost of two people's MARRIAGE---this would be incomprehensible. How can Shivaay explain this to her? But the Anika in your story has seen the truth of one thing--she does not deserve this, whatever the hell it is. If he cannot tell her, (and how can he, its so.. disgusting) then she must leave. And as for his nausea---- he is as much to blame, whether Tia is using him now does not detract from the truth-- he is playing Tia's game. She is acting like this for her family's business as much as he is doing this, for his own. Those media people who are camped out --those very media were called in to receive Mrs Tia Oberoi six days ago.

WHY should we, and Anika, forget this? Why? He saved her life-- from the stalker he introduced into her life. Chalo. Bara wala thanks. He loves her .. Umm. Not yet. You cannot do what he did to someone you love. He cares for her...accha, dekha jayenga, when she is alone in her house, and he shows up or something. (PLEASE--PART TWO WHERE HE GOES TO HER? PLEASE? PLEASE??)

For you, Navin...

I will write a part 2 for you...❤️

But for now, EVEN if we don't get part 2, I am at peace with your ending. Her self respect is all she has, and telling her she can be thrown out like she was dragged in--I am sorry, but words have value. Words matter, because all she has are his words, to judge herself, in a way. So to do this even if its meant to remove her from his path as he fixes things--NO.

If he is punished for it, as a direct consequence of his stupidity, why should Anika stay? She has tried. But there is a saying--God helps those who helps themselves--and no matter what Gul does, Anika oncreen is still not a goddess, but an ordinary, courageous, loving kind girl who cant sew buttons and loves her man. But even for her, I say--ENOUGH.

Fantastic work, as you see, it brought me out of angry hibernation! So thank you for that!

Much Love back ❤️, thank you...!

Originally posted by: -Areeba-

Woah! That's brilliantly written, totally loved it. I would love to see this happen in the show, but then I think I'm asking for too much. *sigh*

Originally posted by: .Dalisay.

Superb piece of writing 👍🏼...enjoyed reading it! 😊

"Annika.. please don't take this personally. It's business, and I must do this for the family. Please understand my difficult position.." 🥱🥱 his family & business jaap he touched her arm lightly, as she flung it off like it was a poisonous bug. Good job, Annika 😡😆

He hated it that she had lost her ready smile for him, lost their connection and rapport. It's as though their bond never happened, and was a figment of his imagination.This was heartbreaking..there new found connection, that cute bond...it's all over now 🥺🥺

"Annika, talk to me. Please understand this does not reflect in any way to our relationship. I am and will always be there for you if you need me. You can call on me at anytime, for anything. I am just a phone call away.. Annika please..."his voice trailed off as she shot him a poisonous look of hatred. No, Shivaay the last time you promised her so you failed to be there for her..better don't promise her anything now Let her live her life.

Loved the ending..She is finally leaving..he should earn back her respect and her love. This needs to happen in the show...Can't take Annika being insulted and him being all disrespectful toward her now.

Originally posted by: jarir2010

its beautiful .plz do write more on current track.as maker r shoving craps after craps.plz do us some favor by writing some good story.thanks a lot .👏

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Anisa, awesome work, as usual! ❤️

Even if Shiv wants to push her away, he needs to be careful with the words because wounds of the words pain more than the physical ones. Glad to see Anika walk out without a word to him when she realised that she'd had enough. And my most favourite part? Like I was saying in the spoilers thread the other - Tej Singh Oberoi being aware of the scheme of the Kapoors and the real state of their finances! 😎 Because the Oberois are calculative and no way can someone like Tej be blind, unlike Shivaay who's got too many distractions in his life at the moment.

Can there be a second part to this one?

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Oh wow that was so beautiful n poignant at the same time...yup it was time...sad but true...