Shivika SS: Enough *PART 3* pg 10* 5/1*

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Superb piece of writing 👍🏼...enjoyed reading it! 😊

"Annika.. please don't take this personally. It's business, and I must do this for the family. Please understand my difficult position.." 🥱🥱 his family & business jaap he touched her arm lightly, as she flung it off like it was a poisonous bug. Good job, Annika 😡😆

He hated it that she had lost her ready smile for him, lost their connection and rapport. It's as though their bond never happened, and was a figment of his imagination.This was heartbreaking..there new found connection, that cute bond...it's all over now 🥺🥺

"Annika, talk to me. Please understand this does not reflect in any way to our relationship. I am and will always be there for you if you need me. You can call on me at anytime, for anything. I am just a phone call away.. Annika please..."his voice trailed off as she shot him a poisonous look of hatred. No, Shivaay the last time you promised her so you failed to be there for her..better don't promise her anything now Let her live her life.

Loved the ending..She is finally leaving..he should earn back her respect and her love. This needs to happen in the show...Can't take Annika being insulted and him being all disrespectful toward her now.

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

its beautiful .plz do write more on current track.as maker r shoving craps after craps.plz do us some favor by writing some good story.thanks a lot .👏

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Ann this was really beautiful.. I would love to see her move out and him to get restless and ask her to come back...

If its not too much trouble, please write another part to this one. :)

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Anisa, awesome work, as usual! ❤️

Even if Shiv wants to push her away, he needs to be careful with the words because wounds of the words pain more than the physical ones. Glad to see Anika walk out without a word to him when she realised that she'd had enough. And my most favourite part? Like I was saying in the spoilers thread the other - Tej Singh Oberoi being aware of the scheme of the Kapoors and the real state of their finances! 😎 Because the Oberois are calculative and no way can someone like Tej be blind, unlike Shivaay who's got too many distractions in his life at the moment.

Can there be a second part to this one?

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Oh wow that was so beautiful n poignant at the same time...yup it was time...sad but true...

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WittyFlair

@WittyFlair

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wonderfully written! Loved that Anika walked out in the end

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow it was awesome...so apt and perfect

I really want anika to act this way only...and please make it a two shot...I want to see shivaay suffer even more he deserve it..always using anika as per his wish is so disgusting 🤢

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Aquamarine03

@Aquamarine03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

I love Anika as a tigress. Good job. Please write more.

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Ruchi

@Rachna.KG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Wow...superb. woke up in the middle of night...checked my phone for updates on the forum...your name and read the story...beautiful...as much as I like every thing Rosy in a love story...I have learnt from the wise on this forum that love is a journey and Shivika have a long way to go. I wish this happens on screen and I want Anika to get detached or atleast try to get detached...take her salary for the work done, get. Sahil out of 50 lakh school and move on...She is capable of standing tall even in the time of adversity.

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Juhi Mokal

@-Juhi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Wow! What a brilliant piece of writing..So well written 👍🏼
I love this Annika. Really hope she walks out of the OM without a second thought! And this time I hope she doesn't return the next day. 😆 Want her to focus on her business!!