Shivika 4S : Maan jao na Anika!!! Last part on pg 7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Interesting start :)
Awesome :)
Continue soon :)
PM me :)

Thanks suman, I am glad that you like the first part. Next part is coming soon

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Ani09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: jeenal20
Plzzz coont soon...kaash real serialmein bhi robinaake sabko sach bata de...

It too feel the same jeena but serial me kuch aur hi chal raha hai koi baat nahi. I assure you next part is going to be funny as well as romantic

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Ani09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Part 2

Near the pool

In Bar

Shivay was sitting on the chair and was lost in his own thoughts. By the time Omru visit him.

Rudra-hey bhagwan!! Bhaiya aap yaha is jagah kya kar rahe ho

Om kahi main sapna toh nahi dekh raha hoon

Shivay - "shut up Rudra!! Kyu main yaha nahi a sakta"

Rudra- actually mene itne saalo me apko kabhi yaha ate nahi dekha aur vo bhi hath me glass me wine liye.

Omkara- shivay jo kaam yeh sharab nahi kar payi shayad thoda sa pyaar karde.

Rudra aksar yeh kaha jata hai jo nasha sharab me nahi vo mohabbat me hai.

Rudra - samajh me nahi aya par jo bhi hoga accha hi hoga

Shivay - matlab kya hai Om tera

Omkara-matlab yeh hai ki tujhe Anika ko face karna chahiye aur use manana chahiye.

Shivay-Oh please!! Om me us ladki ko kyo manau tu toh aise bol raha hai jaise me usse pyaar karta hoon

(shivay was lost for a moment in all the sweet memories of his and anika)

Rudra shake him

Rudra-kaha kho gaye Anika ke baare me soch rahe ho

Shivay was about to move when Om stopped him.

Omkara - Shivay kab tak bhagega apni feelings se dekh yeh baat hum sab jaante hai ki tu anika ko pasand karne laga hai par bas tu inkaar karta hai

Dekh shivay pyaar har ek ko nahi milta tu naseeb wala hai jise mohabbat huyi hai.

Shivay was silent

Rudra - sun lo bhaiya pata chala train station se choot gayi toh problem ho jayegi..

Shivay - Haa!! Karta hoon pyaar anika se par kaise manau use... Kaise nazare milau usse... Vo toh meri shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahati.

Omkara- Shivay pyaar ko nibhane ke liye thode toh papad belne padenge kai intehaan dene padte hai..

Rudra- Try bhaiya jab aap college me top kar sakte ho to yeh toh chota sa exam hai

Shivay hug Omru and rushed towards Anika who was in his room arranging her clothes back

Om-chalo der se sahi akal to ayi isme

Rudra-ekdam correct

In Shivay's room

Anika saw Shivay and immediately leave the work she was doing and started moving. Shivay hold her hand and stopped her. Anika was so angry with her that she forcefully removed shivay hand

Shivay-vo... Actually... Vo.. Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.

Anika-par mujhe apse koi baat nahi karni...

Shivay - please baat toh suno

Anika -bolo shivay... Par jaldi mujhe dadi ke paas jaana hai

(pretending to be busy)

Shivay- vo... Mujhe kehna hai ki... Mene... Tumhare saath jo bhi kiya vo... It was wrong

Anika-"shivay jab log galti karte hai toh generally kuch kehte hai...

Shivay - yaa I... I am... I am SORRY!!!

Anika- apko kya lagata hai yaha film chal rahi ki aap ayenge apne large size ego ke saath sorry bolenge aur me maan jaungi. Apne socha bhi kaise???

Shivay- vaise galti tumhari bhi hai tumne daksh ko haan kyo bola aur phir vo...tum Daksh ke sath.. Ab aise me Koyi tumse kaise nafarat nahi toh kya pyaar karega..

Anika- us Daksh ne kaha aur apne maan liya yani mere upar itna sa bhi vishwas nahi hai apko

Shivay aap rehne dijiye

Anika leave the room

Shivay was still feeling guilt of how foolish he was to doubt such a girl

Hope you like it next part will have the ways he will try to make anika ready to accept him. Please reply

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rinku95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Superb
Waiting now what will shivay do
Continue soon

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Ani09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rinku95
Superb
Waiting now what will shivay do
Continue soon

Thanks rinku, next part coming soon

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Great update :)

Awesome :)

Update soon :)

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

superb update...👍🏼.rudra kabhi bhi serious nhi ho sakta...😆atleast Om ne shivaay ko samjha hi diya that he love annika...nhi toh wo apne king size ego ke saath hi akela reh jaata aur annika usse chor ke chali jaati...

Annika just rock...usse yahi karna chahiye...shivaay ko cold shoulder dena chahiye...

do continue soon...and by the way...I'm anya...😉

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Ani09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: itzanya32
superb update...👍🏼.rudra kabhi bhi serious nhi ho sakta...😆atleast Om ne shivaay ko samjha hi diya that he love annika...nhi toh wo apne king size ego ke saath hi akela reh jaata aur annika usse chor ke chali jaati...
Annika just rock...usse yahi karna chahiye...shivaay ko cold shoulder dena chahiye...
do continue soon...and by the way...I'm anya...😉

Thanks anya for this nice review. This means a lot for me. Haa akhir shivay ne anika ko itna tang kiya hai to anika ka gussa hona jayaz hai.

Oh sorry I actually don't know your name. My name is Ananya quite similar name

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks anya for this nice review. This means a lot for me. Haa akhir shivay ne anika ko itna tang kiya hai to anika ka gussa hona jayaz hai.
Oh sorry I actually don't know your name. My name is Ananya quite similar name

my pleasure dear...😳❤️

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