Daksh will return with big bang Last part update on page 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
oh! damn...getting sooo interesting
but curious to know about the gift, so update ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Last part
I hope u will like it

Shivay shouts in loud voice
Daksh Daksh
Everyone gather in Hall
Tej= what happened shivay
Dadi= shivay what happened
Shivay= Daksh daksh

Daksh came with smiling face what happened shivay

Shivay grabs daksh caller and said how can u do this
U don't know the result of this gift
Daksh pushes shivay and said i want only smile on Anika's face no matter what is right or wrong
Everyone become shocked
Anika enter
Shivay shouts Anika and hold her hand tightly
Dadi= Shivay what r u doing leave her hand
Shivay leave Anika
Om= what happened shivay
Shivay= Ask from daksh or Anika
Dadi= Anika what happened
Anika= i don't know dadi
Shivay= u don't know
Anika u are really immature or u r acting like immature
Anika= i think u become mad why u r always talk in tashan
Shivay goes in room for taking gift
He enter with gifts and throws it infront of everyone
Daksh and anika become shocked
Tej= what nonsense shivay
Shivay= anika tell what is your gift which u like more and u know anika i thought u r a master to creating problem specially in my life
Rudra= Bhaiya what r u saying
Anika di is a angle in your life she always solve your problem
Shivay and anika sees each other
O.jana...
Daksh fumes in anger
Om= shivay tell us about this gift
Rudra lift the gift and open
Everyone sees the gift

Pinky= This is little computer
Rudra= chachi it is notepad little form of laptop
Pinky= i m saying same "ha ni to"

Shakti= what is big deal shivay it is simple notepad
Anika= what's your problem shivay
Shivay=shutup anika
And goes near Rudra and press switch"on" button of notepad

Notepad start opening

Everyone become shocked

In notepad vedio clipping is running

In vedio clipping Sahil playing game with their friends
Anika smile seeing sahil happy

Suddenly om gives shocking reaction and said in loud voice

Om= shivay it is live recording i think any camera is fitted in sahil room and capturing his all activities day and night

Shivay= ya, but camera is not fitted in sahil room actually camera fitted in boarding hostel's room
Anika= what's big deal i can see my sahil from these camera

Om=Anika this is very big deal, daksh how can u do this
U have taken the permission of school authority to fitted these camera

Daksh turn his face
Om= daksh this is crime u Brock the security of school administration
Everyone become shocked

Daksh= wait om i not interested to knowing what is wrong or what is right
I want only smile on anika face that's why i fitted camera in School hostel room and sahil knows about it
Om= Daksh, sahil is child he don't know about the rules or regulation of boarding school but u know very well breaking the Privacy of any hostel room is crime if school authority will know about it they will punish sahil or may be anika
For breaking rules sahil may be dismiss from school and anika may go to jail
Anika= No it cant be happen my sahil study is very important for me i took rs. 15 lakh loan for his study

Everyone become shocked
Shivay thought Anika took loan how it is possible and thinks Flash back when daksh told anika taking15 lakh from me for one night

Rudra= Anika di how can u become so immature " bachhe jaisa kam karne par to mera copyright hai"
Somya= shutup Rudra

Tej= shivay go and remove there camera from boarding school room if school administration will know about it they will take strict action against sahil or anika
Shakti= anika now your respect related to oberoi mansion please work with your sense

Dadi and om said shivay go

Shivay= no need to go
I have already handle this matter now everything is fine

Om= shivay but recording is continuously running on notepad
Shivay= it is old recording
Daksh= so mr. Sso now my anika will not see her brother now u r happy u know how much anika love sahil

Anika is in tear
Suddenly recording stop and sahil came on screen
Sahil= hello anika Di u r weeping
Everyone become surprised
Anika= Are sahil tu
Sahil= u know anika di yesterday night your billu ji came here and he talked our school authority and my school authority gave me permission for Skype chat so now we can chat on Skype one hour morning and1 hour evening and if u feel alone u can call me any time i will reply when i get free time

Shivay smile seeing anika

Anika= kaisa hai tu
Sahil=aapke billu ko meri taraf se thanks kahna ab ham khul kar ek doosre se chat kar sakte hai

Everyone smile
Anika sees shivay(we can imagine same seen from movie"hamari adhuri kahani")

Anika and sahil start gossiping
Shivay smiling seeing anika omru and dadi smile seeing shivay
Daksh and Tia fumes in anger

Anika goes near to shivay and said " Thank you" shivay
Shivay lost in thought and said billu ji

Anika= what
Shivay=nothing

Both were stareing each other and smile

O. Jana...

Finish Thank you ...

Edited by superdil19 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Lesy

oh! damn...getting sooo interesting
but curious to know about the gift, so update ASAP

Thank you so much u all like

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Good update.
Daksh knows Tia's past. That's cool.
Well i want a longer update next time..

Love sharmi


Thank you
Who is love sharmi actually u write all time so i become curious if u have no problem i want to know
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ck1234

Gift h kya...

I wanna know...
And if u have time u can read my FF...
And if u like it...
Don't forget to comment...

Yes definitely i will read because i like ff
Please can u provide me link your ff so i will read regularly
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ck1234

its awwwsome...

dont end... continue...

Thank you so much u will like it
Sunday is very boring so i thought i will start story on Sunday from current track with different angle 😊and finish on monday
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Awesome part...totaly amazing...
pls dont end now...continue it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
its just awesome
loved it
plzz don't end here do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
It was short...but u just nade it sooo intresting dear...
Shivaay cares for Anika and Saahil. Finally Daksh is out. I hate this guy!!😡
Superb ending...dramatic tha...
Nd the last scene was cute...AniHil gossiping
Shivaay staring at Anika... nd then "billuji" was really cute.
Thank u for this...

Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Wish u where the writer of the show😛

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