The Heart Gets What The Heart Wants/FF ShivIka(Ud:May08 Ch:34a/pg141)

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shanry

@shanry

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#501

OMG! That was breathtaking, I think I'm going to have a heart attack from how wonderful I feel.

Fabulous chapter. Thank you so much. You're a wonderful writer - romantic and yet not over the top. 👍🏼👏

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#502

Amazing ❤️
Love this story..
Continue soon !!

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
Loved this chapter. Especially how you portrayed the conflict in anika..her anger at shivaay for controlling her life and taking advantage of her circumstances.. as well as her concern for him. I would have loved to see something of the sort on the show . But alas...sso had it too easy there.

Thanks for the PM. And needless to say..waiting for more ;)

Thank you 😊. I think we all (including me) need a proper redemption from him and hence I am trying to move the initial process as slowly as possible.
We know there will be a ShivIka in the end but we need them to work towards it slowly so that it is permanent

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
Love their heart to heart...wow...but glad shivaay realises he has a long way to go to atone for his behaviour...thnx for giving us d much aeaited redemption missing in d show for now...

Shivvay has to be the one to open up first because Annika is (in the show as well) always been very tight lipped about her past. He needs to build the trust from his end now

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: jeenal20
WOHOO...
Again what an update...
the whole talk between shivaay and anika... was so touching... and their pain... so bueatifully emoted..
Thank you

it is better that shivaay did not tel her about daksh stalking anika through cameras installed at her place... this would have broken anika a hell...
Yes true. That is a whole Chapter all by itself there ... lol
I have no idea how many I am going to write at this rate 😆

khanna and his vidoes...

plzzz cont soon

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: shanry
OMG! That was breathtaking, I think I'm going to have a heart attack from how wonderful I feel.
Fabulous chapter. Thank you so much. You're a wonderful writer - romantic and yet not over the top. 👍🏼👏

Thank You Shanry. I try to keep the balance as I am a die hard romantic at heart

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#507

Thank you all for reading and commenting. I am glad that you all enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it.
I would love any suggestions that you might have for me to weave into the story that might make it a little more interesting for you all. Present or Future scenes that you might want.
Feel free to include anyone,including ShivIka in these suggestions except for Romi and Svet in the house. I do not want to see RumYa or TejVi separated in my story and she does not feature in mine.
Except for that I am trying to keep it as close as possible to the current track.
Thank You
😛

Edited by asya34 - 8 years ago

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Monidipa konar

@ehmmbhluvr

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#508

today i read the entire story in one go..amazingly beautiful story...luvd it to core..pls do update soon and pls pm me 😊😊

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Kryztal

@Kryztal

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#509

This is so perfect. Thank you for the pm. God... Seeing shivaay being so tormented with even the thought of losing anika is so well written. I wish we could see that in the show. Keep up the good work😊

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: Kryztal
This is so perfect. Thank you for the pm. God... Seeing shivaay being so tormented with even the thought of losing anika is so well written. I wish we could see that in the show. Keep up the good work😊

Thank You. I have a feeling we will see that side of him very soon

Edited by asya34 - 8 years ago