The Heart Gets What The Heart Wants/FF ShivIka(Ud:May08 Ch:34a/pg141) - Page 24

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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant update Asya 👏.
Loving the way u r taking different turns in this story.
Shivaay is getting the way more better. He just wants to be with Anika...how much he felt out when he wasnt getting a chance to mentor Anika.
Hah! ShivIka showed Tia her right place..nd that short moment of Anika standing by Pinky aunty was really nyc.
I love this Bade papa. Mann!! He is way to humorous.
Anika is portrayed in her best way here... nd thats what i love about your ss nd thats the main thing that keeps me hooked to it.
Continue soon

Love Sharmi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ah Shivaay, he who must have control over every aspect of hos life. You gotta wonder how he functions day to day.
Wonderful update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Asya,
I'm going to start with an OH MY GOD because it is nothing short of tragedy for me that I didn't discover this sheer brilliance that you have written until today! I would kick myself in the head if I could for being so MIA from the forum that I didn't come across this! I so wish I had because then the last couple of weeks would have been so happily spent!

That being said, now let's return to your amazing story! I simply simply adore you for writing this! Oh, my, I so adore you for writing this! I don't even know where to begin because there so much that I love about this fic! But more than anything what I love is the humor in it! I have been laughing my butt off for the last hour because I read all your chapter back to back and oh, God, my stomach still hurts! This was so much fun! Undoubtedly what I love the most here is Anika! I want this Anika on the show dammit! Her sarcasm is so meticulously lethal and on-point that had she been a real person O would have given her a standing ovation for some of the things that she had said! Oh, how brilliant she is! Thank you for saving this character from the assassination that GK has put her through! Thank you thank you thank you!

My second most favorite thing is definitely the bond that Anika shares with Tej and Jhanvi! Oh, I love it! You have created what I have wanted to write about in my story except that I haven't been able to do that yet due to the much slower pace! So thank you for writing this! I too have always thought that ultimately it will Anika's ambition and thirst for knowledge that will turn Tej around because it will remind him of his Jhanvi, the one he kind of massacred. I have always seen Anika as an intriguing mixture of both Pinky and Jhanvi and you have managed to bring that about brilliantly so kudos to you darling!
Special mentions to all the other characters, especially the darling DevRu! And I absolutely love the torture you are putting SSO through!

Thank you for writing this! Your fic literally lessened my heart burn by at least a 95%! Thank you so much and keep it up and please update soon! I can't wait for more!

Lots of Love and Jhappis,
A.C.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely story. Waiting for the updates. please please male it quick. thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved Annika at the end 🤣. But Shivaay needs to chill like seriously he is treating her more like a secretary the dept. you will be teaching her about is not the only thing she needs to learn she has other things she needs to learn too. But not looking at that good job on backing up Annika in front of Tia Shivaay very proud. But the way he got upset and was like I guess you guys don't need me it kind of broke me inside so sad 😭. And you know what Annika good job on backing up for Pinky even if she doesn't like you at least she can realize her mistakes. Tia is so conceited can't even let Annika celebrate peacefully she had to create a scene (when she asked why didn't anyone tell me? I was like well honey I don't think anyone at this table can answer that question better then you but Annika did cause she is prefect like that).
PS-Lastly just wanna let you know I am loving this story sooo much thank you for writing it and writing it so beautifully keep up the great work. Waiting for the next update. Oh and I read this like a couple minutes after it was updated but I didn't have time to update so if there is anything wrong I'm sorry I went back and skimmed but I'm not sure if its right sorry.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Csunshine

Heyya Asya dear,
You completely nailed it...with this one...like how in a moment ...the tables have turned...with Annika being all herself ..!
Damn...after reading this whole piece of your mesmerising writing...and the way you have planned the plots ahead...you really need to take a bow!! :) Thank You 😊
This Shivaay ...who unknowingly is taking a step ahead in the direction..where his mind strictly prohibits...but heart is just following the path like a love sick puppy!
The hurt felt when he thought that he's not gonna play any role Annika's new venture...
Then again...the looks of jealousy..when Jhanvi just precisely mentioned about Rohan and that being counted..that he's smitten with Annnika...played wonders in striking the right chords in Shivaay's heart.. Yea! till then he was pretty sure she was not going to be interested in anyone with NKK. If Rohan succeeds she will be out of reach forever

Oh...his so much infuriated look...when she was mentioned as Ms.Annika...like it was that awww feeling...for us..to see Shivaay in such a state of hurt,jealousy,angst...when his lady love (which even he is gonna realize soon after further more such mini heart attacks from the lovely Badi ma, Dadi...Omru and the little sissy's too)
No dbt, after so many sharp shoots...he played his part well with those fierce yet courteous instructions for Annika! And our little minx...aha all fiesty cat...good one for Tia , she deserves it all..
Badi Ma,Tej,Dadi and the siblings ensamble as a whole...are playing so beautifully...like on edge still with courtesy and confidence...being on Annika's side...loving it all!!!
You knw I am actually very inactive on d forums...and rarely up...so when I am active...its just for this kind of wonderful art of words ..the lovely writers like You manage to create ...
Really love your writing skills..the visions you have planned for the further parts...the catchy roles for each character ...in toto all of it is going great !
Your writing has a fascinating flow that keeps the readers hooked up with it...and in person to, I love such beautiful pieces of words enmeshed to create such authentic writeups..
So...waiting for next such writeup...to see the clashing sparks in the office ...pretty exciting its gonna b !!
so update soonish dear:):)


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: A.C.

Dear Asya,

I'm going to start with an OH MY GOD because it is nothing short of tragedy for me that I didn't discover this sheer brilliance that you have written until today! I would kick myself in the head if I could for being so MIA from the forum that I didn't come across this! I so wish I had because then the last couple of weeks would have been so happily spent!
... and I am honored that you took the time to read mine. I have been completely hooked to yours since 2 weeks now and look out for any update eagerly. I love how you weave all the emotions and the last one, Sahil and Rudra, OMG that one was totally awesome!!!

That being said, now let's return to your amazing story! I simply simply adore you for writing this! Oh, my, I so adore you for writing this! I don't even know where to begin because there so much that I love about this fic! But more than anything what I love is the humor in it! I have been laughing my butt off for the last hour because I read all your chapter back to back and oh, God, my stomach still hurts! This was so much fun! Undoubtedly what I love the most here is Anika! I want this Anika on the show dammit! Her sarcasm is so meticulously lethal and on-point that had she been a real person O would have given her a standing ovation for some of the things that she had said! Oh, how brilliant she is! Thank you for saving this character from the assassination that GK has put her through! Thank you thank you thank you!
Thank you for those words 😊. It started out as a SS for fun because I had my other regular post on hold since the ShivIka wedding. I had lost my creativity for that post for the time being and this was a request from Aprilsunshine because she missed those posts and wanted me to write a piece on the current situation in IB since it was all so depressing.

My second most favorite thing is definitely the bond that Anika shares with Tej and Jhanvi! Oh, I love it! You have created what I have wanted to write about in my story except that I haven't been able to do that yet due to the much slower pace! So thank you for writing this! I too have always thought that ultimately it will Anika's ambition and thirst for knowledge that will turn Tej around because it will remind him of his Jhanvi, the one he kind of massacred. I have always seen Anika as an intriguing mixture of both Pinky and Jhanvi and you have managed to bring that about brilliantly so kudos to you darling!
I too have always felt Annika is a blend (of the good stuff) of Jhanvi and Pinky. Saying that I wanted the Jhanvi to take off first as she needs to get back on her feet and get independent and then the Pinky can take over a little later with Tia's exit. I hope I will be able to do that seamlessly in my writing. I feel that the Annika/ Jhanvi bond and the Om's lead and Pinky bond will be much more interesting as I feel Om is quite similar to Shakti in some ways.

Special mentions to all the other characters, especially the darling DevRu! And I absolutely love the torture you are putting SSO through!
DevRu is inseparable from his Anni Bhi .. lol we all know they are like 'two peas in a pod' and since Ms. Gul is not going to give us a satisfactory and belly full of SSO redemption we have to 'cook it up' ourselves ...lol
Thank you for writing this! Your fic literally lessened my heart burn by at least a 95%! Thank you so much and keep it up and please update soon! I can't wait for more!
... lol and reading yours makes my heart speed and pulse race ... my dil goes hmmm!!! 😉Thank you for giving us yours as well 😛
Lots of Love and Jhappis,
A.C.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Binge read 12 chapters
Lovee it to bits and pieces
Please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved ur way of writing👏 throughly enjoyed😆 Couldnt stop giggling😆 read all 12 parts in a go... Cant wait to see how the mentor/protege handle each other😳 Update soon pls😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey this so amazing waiting for the next update😊

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