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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Perfect. I wish show mein bhi kuch aisa dikhate. I want anika to walk out with head held high.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Much needed.
Superb one ya, great work.
You should continue this :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Fantastic it was emotions were beautifully expressed very well written i have a query waht does VB mean??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Hi all...reading all spoilers and segments...I am abusing shi ay in my mind now...more than a m the silent as dumb spectators of oberoi family. As for dadi... Have loved her throughout...but what she's doing with anika is also emotional blackmailing and playing her cards on Anita's vulnerability...for me tia is offically the wife now in eyes of society and law. Had dadi had the guts to refute Shivansh claim right there in front of media and introducing Anika as the lawful wife would have been anika...then my respect for her would have grown leaps and bounds...plus that would have been nayi soch ..but sorry to say dadi is indirectly force ng anika to be called the other women...rest my case...so here's my OS...


Shivay singh oberoi..the blue blood man..suddenly introduced Miss Tia kapoor as his lawful wife Infront of the whole media...this declaration shocked Anika to the core...she was numb...and she couldn't do anything to stop the mockery of a sacred thing as marriage. For the first time since meeting shivay...she felt nothing...no emotions no feelings...as if she had turned to stone...her blood had chilled down like ice...suddenly she felt something or rather someone hit her. She came out of her reverie.. she saw it was Tia who was winking at her and gloating with happiness. Shivay was also smiling and welcomed Tia in his arms. anika felt like a trash. She started feeling strangled from inside. She turned and started to walk away like a fellingless robot. But then dadi had to stop her. She took her back but what she never knew was that Anika she took back was not her Anika...she was the side of Anika which nobody had seen before...Anika who suddenly had a huge smile which didn't let her break and Anika who had decided to bestow this family with the best gift she could give them and begin her life like a free bird.
All were busy congratulating the much in love happy couple..except the sullen faces of the oberois who didn't have a backbone to stand up for a women respect in front of the media ...after all image mattered to all oberois..though like dadi they may rebuke later but not in front of media. She silently watched everyone...the most happy pinky aunty and Tia and of course the oberoi groom himself. She had no emotions on her face rather than she saw pity in eyes of money,dadi and Tejvi. Shakti uncle was as usual indifferent...but one thing was that they all were still one...at least in front of media. She had a smirk playing on her lips when she spotted the groom sneaking strange glances a her. Hmm...so it was time for her too thank oberois for all they had done to her..it was time...
Anika very smilingly approChed towards the couple . She suddenly felt as everyone was watching her. She heard a cameraman ,some reporter trying to no about her. Both the groom and bride...yes..I do not even wish to tKe there names...it sounds like poison and why should I suffer because of them...they both started looking towards me..while the guy was in anger,girl was worried...and then I was in front of them.
" Congratulations"!
Both and all oberois were shocked with my nonchalance..Groom and bride looked very surprised and taken aback...
" Congratulations Mr. and Mrs. Shivay oberoi !"
Finally my all efforts have paid off. You two look lovely together...made for each other. Not u guys at least thank me???"
Stunned seems a wrong word. The couple seemed to stiffen and lower there eyes with guilt...but then the groom said.
" Thanks!"
Anika gave a wide simple. She took out her Mangalsutra from her neck...and very smilingly VB put that Mangalsutra sutra in Tia' s neck. All the media was watching all this and picking pics...all wNted to know who this female was...Any oberois had no words to say...they were shocked was too less a word...Finally Anika said..
" Now now..what's a bride without a ms...so I couldn't think k of a better gift for a bride who forgot to wear her Ms just a day after her wedding...be careful Tia..now it seems belongs to right place...finally am free of it"
There was total silence in the hall. Everyone was stumped. Shivay was fuming with shock and anger and dadi felt betrayed but yet kept silent...Anika turned about to go when a young man dressed in a tuxedo suddenly asked her" who r you?"
" I am Anika...the wedding planner" All media people were curious to know who this lioness was...Shivika wanted to stop her but had to remain silent due to media coverage..
The guy "oh my god! You mean you have done this wedding decor...brilliant...beautiful...I mean am surprised I never heard your name before..sorry for that..."
Anika" That's because this was my first project and I am glad it came to a happy ending with a fhtful people on there exactly places "
One reporter " Aren't you the one who proved the innocence of elder oberois?"
Second reporter " Aren't you the one who saved this family many times?"
Third reporter" hey didn't you get engaged to Daksh Khanna ? When are you two getting married ?"
The Guy: "hey guys hold on! LeVe the beautiful girl alone...today is this couples reception focus on them all right...as for me...hey anika will you plan my wedding too?"
Anika " surely! Anyways my job is done here and to all Rep trees for the record mine and Daksh Khanna engagement has been already called off...so kindly no discussions on it. "
Anika starts to go when the guy follows her. " Hey ! I am Rishabh kundra !"
Anika has a big big smile .." oh that famous singer?" She becomes deliriously happy and starts giggling. It was her dream to meet her recent fav singer what she never knew wA that she would be planning g his wedding. Shivay was watching all this furiously and was burning in anger...while anika after a long time was genuinely happy. The guy " Anika...beautiful name...beautiful smile...but am a singer,a musician I can hear pain and longing in your voice...but let me tell you just one thing ..after every painful sound there is one happy sound...and am sure my wedding planning will make you identify that sound...when you will meet my fiance madhubala you will know what I mean...so is the deal on"
Anika had tears in her eyes which she could stop no more...she felt strong gratitude towards this gid sent man...and she would definitely wNt to catch that sound now..."so where will be the wedding Mr.Kundra?..."
"Goa! But am sorry you will have to work in tandem with my younger brother Shlok kundra...who by the way is also in line to be a musician...but don't worry he will help you out...he will pick you up day after tomorrow to go to Goa..I hope you don't mind..."
" I will be ready Mr.kundra".
Shivay who caught up with bits and pieces of there talks couldn't control himself more and went to Anika after kundra left. " What the hell do you think of yourself creating a scene here? You just want to revenge me right and spoil mine and Tia's name?"
Anika " Mr.Oberoi..you being a married man should not touch any young women like me...your wife Tia may feel insulted. Secondly. .my job is done here and from when has gifting someone anything become a crime...thirdly I don't keep anybody's secondhand or any unwanted things with me. So I gave tia what according to law and you us her right. As for us...I mean you and me...it's official Tia is your wife...and you accept her...so there is nothing between us..finally for revenge...hmm...karma...Mr.oberoi...karma will take revenge on you when you will know Tia's truth...so happy life...and yeah I have flight to catch tomorrow...Meri zibdagi ki nayi udaan jisme aap kabhi nahi hongey ..Thanx for freeing me forever...bye to you all...forever..."
With that Anika walks away dreaming about a new future leaving behind her past forever...defo...sounds of waves change...towards a new beginning...



BANG ON... I wish the creators of Ishqbaaaz could read your story... Just love it 👏
Especially love the last part about "karma"
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Ooh totally loved it. I just want to see a very very strong Anika everytime Shivay lowers himself in front of the world.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sofna

Ooh totally loved it. I just want to see a very very strong Anika everytime Shivay lowers himself in front of the world.

same here...shivay is falling so low in my eyes that I wish anika gets a new hero...or in fact why do she need anyone...fir me she's a one man army...but I just want shivay to cry on his misfortune and anika be happy with the new hero...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
This is what I wanted on the show. But alas nothing of that he is going to happen. Loved reading it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Loved it!!😃 👏
Annika ⭐️
Thanks so much for writing this..it lifted my mood completely 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Loved it to the core. I've been waiting to see something like this in the show, but I know it's not gonna happen. Is ka ulta hojaye ga Lekin Ye kabhi Nhe hoga.😡

Amazing Shot!
Edited by -Areeba- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
omg this is just amazing dear
loved it very much 😊😊
i really those this give back policy hw i wish anika is like this

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