The Pursuit -Drabble Series (PriVeer OS) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRKian

Twer is on a roll baby 😎

Res 😉

unres,

twer dis days u r surprising me wid ur stories😆 4m a baddie veer 2 a romantic veer😉
luved it❤️
nd u've sat da bar higher of ranveer 4 me nw i hope cvs dont disappoint me😳

nw dat hez back,can i expect another story on him soon?😉


hahaha!!! I am keeping my expectations very low so that the CVs can't disappoint me... meanwhile filling my life with PriVeer love...
seriously, there is like an explosion of PriVeer fics in the forum now and I am LOVING IT!!!!!
And Ani!! This one was to celebrate the fact that he is back! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96

i absolutely love ur stories on PriVeer ❤️


I think i fell in love with PriVeer because of ur stories 😆

Loved it! 😳


haha! Thank you girl! Since we barely got more than a couple of scenes of the pair, it is seriously through fanfiction that we have discovered the magic of PriVeer.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jarir2010

Its beautiful.specially the last part.wow .show me kab uska srory age barega?
Thanks twerp,for this wonderful drabble.hope more priveer from u in future.
👏 👏 👏


Thanks girl! 🤗 I think you can be certain of me writing more on the pair... 😆
And seriously, can't wait to have our ACP back on the show!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Hi Twerps,

I am loving your drabble babble Series.
It really fits beautifully together.

I know this is about PriVeer but I also want to thank you for mentioning the 'interference' of Omkara. In the episode as well, I loved how powerful Omkara was, and Prinku in the end obeyed him. He yelled at her in the name of protection. So when you wrote that he realized the ACP was no match for the two and how he admired how the Oberois stuck together, I am sure he missed his sister and respected their bond.. Just beautiful.

ACP realization he was wrong, chasing the wrong people, Prinku and the Oberois assistance was wonderfully put into words. You made a complete full story including leap.

There were a lot of things I liked but will highlight these two
Prinku saying '"must you know the answer" "and '"the hunter feeling as the prey"
This is a perfect game of turning tables! Prinku is now teasing him somewhat and she is the one in charge. Poor ACP lost control 😆 mesmerised by her lips..

You could add the realisation, start of love but I don't mind it's not in the drabble. It's very obvious... You can always work out these drabble into more..

I absolutely loved it that Prinku spoke up, and is proactive, showing initiative.. Or perhaps even taking the lead and assisting her Ranveer. Finally, she is stepping up her game, and grew from stuttering Insecure girl to confident young woman. Full circle almost.

I could go on and on but I will pretend I do have a life and stop now 😆😉
But you dear Twerps are not allowed to stop!
Hope to see more of your drabble babbles, SS/FF!


You are right! That is the thing missing! I should have had one piece on his realisation of his love for her! That would have kind of completed this! But I guess not everything can be just as you want so I shall leave this one as it is...
Thank you so much Rishu for taking the time out to leave such a wonderful feedback! I took so much away from this and will keep in mind for the future!
🤗
Love,
Twerps.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: jhillyarya

Beautifully written up👏


Thanks girl!! Do visit us at the ACP AT!! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: emerald39

TWERPS that was so beautiful. I couldn't stop smiling at the end of the story. Gosh I swear you breath so much of life into them with your words! Keep 'em coming please! 😎


Anu, thank you so much for this encouraging comment! I'll sure try to! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ThatNarcissist

Oh my god. So much of Priveer all at once:")
Thank you so much! Each one is so well written! I love this idea of string of drabbles. Especially when it is coming from a seasoned writer like you. You have a special way of wordplay that speaks so much within the use of limited words and it is nothing but sheer brilliance. You go girl!


seasoned writer?!!?! bahahahahaha!
but thanks girl!! Let's spread the PriVeer love!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Shivikaishkara

This was amazing twerps!!!!!!...This works better than an os, ss or ff!! Please write more


Thanks girl!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: -farzana

This was sucha good read, loved it. The ending was beautiful <3


Thank you so much!

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