The Pursuit -Drabble Series (PriVeer OS)

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96

haha agreed😆
I've read the PriVeer story circle too
didnt get the time to post there but u guys are doing an amazing job
wait, i'll go post there too😆

Oh! Haha, thanks! The circle is just our way of filling the PriVeer void that we have been left with due to their lack of scenes in the show. Glad to know that others are liking it too. 😆

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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Oh! Haha, thanks! The circle is just our way of filling the PriVeer void that we have been left with due to their lack of scenes in the show. Glad to know that others are liking it too. 😆

Oh 😆

I am loving it 😆

Just saw that ACP is back, so eagerly waiting for their scenes 😛

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Its beautiful.specially the last part.wow .show me kab uska srory age barega?
Thanks twerp,for this wonderful drabble.hope more priveer from u in future.
👏 👏 👏

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RishuDarling

@RishuDarling

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Hi Twerps,

I am loving your drabble babble Series.

It really fits beautifully together.

I know this is about PriVeer but I also want to thank you for mentioning the 'interference' of Omkara. In the episode as well, I loved how powerful Omkara was, and Prinku in the end obeyed him. He yelled at her in the name of protection. So when you wrote that he realized the ACP was no match for the two and how he admired how the Oberois stuck together, I am sure he missed his sister and respected their bond.. Just beautiful.

ACP realization he was wrong, chasing the wrong people, Prinku and the Oberois assistance was wonderfully put into words. You made a complete full story including leap.

There were a lot of things I liked but will highlight these two

Prinku saying '"must you know the answer" "and '"the hunter feeling as the prey"

This is a perfect game of turning tables! Prinku is now teasing him somewhat and she is the one in charge. Poor ACP lost control 😆 mesmerised by her lips..

You could add the realisation, start of love but I don't mind it's not in the drabble. It's very obvious... You can always work out these drabble into more..

I absolutely loved it that Prinku spoke up, and is proactive, showing initiative.. Or perhaps even taking the lead and assisting her Ranveer. Finally, she is stepping up her game, and grew from stuttering Insecure girl to confident young woman. Full circle almost.

I could go on and on but I will pretend I do have a life and stop now 😆😉

But you dear Twerps are not allowed to stop!

Hope to see more of your drabble babbles, SS/FF!

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emerald39

@emerald39

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

TWERPS that was so beautiful. I couldn't stop smiling at the end of the story. Gosh I swear you breath so much of life into them with your words! Keep 'em coming please! 😎

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Oh my god. So much of Priveer all at once:")
Thank you so much! Each one is so well written! I love this idea of string of drabbles. Especially when it is coming from a seasoned writer like you. You have a special way of wordplay that speaks so much within the use of limited words and it is nothing but sheer brilliance. You go girl!

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

This was amazing twerps!!!!!!...This works better than an os, ss or ff!! Please write more

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-farzana

@-farzana

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

This was sucha good read, loved it. The ending was beautiful <3

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Awww, wow, this was great❤️
Especially loved when Prinku called him Ranveer...☺️
Beautifully written👏

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Res!

-EDITED-

You already know that I love the way you weave your words while telling a story and this piece wasn't any different. Loved the little peeks into random moments of their lives. My favourite has to be the one where Prinku spoke up and then the one where Randhawa realised that the culprit wasn't Prinku.

I like the idea of these random moments because often I get ideas for some PriVeer scenes that would either fit somewhere in a story or need a long winded OS to get the whole idea across. But this approach kind of takes cares of that and helps you convey the idea without having to delve into unnecessary details. I enjoyed this and look forward to more! 😉

Sarcy! 🤗

Thank you for these very encouraging words! I was so uncertain of this one but thank you for finding something positive in it!

But right now, only waiting for one thing! 😉 oh yes also waiting for ACP return but you know what I mean! 😆