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~~~~CHAPTER 3~~~~

2 weeks later...CONVOCATION

ritika- (on call) Om pls help me dressing up... Uff this saree...itni lambi kyu hoti hai..listen Om...shadi ke baad mai saree nahi pehnungi...O hello!!!!muh mai dahi jama ke baithe ho kya???

Om- (controlling his laughter) I wish science could have been more advance to develop that facility in phones.

Ritika- shut up Om...aur ab jaldi aao meri helpkarne...mai tumhare art studio mai tumhara wait kar rahi hu.

Om- here I am..knock knock..

Ritika- how did u know ki mai yahan hu??

Om- I can feel you

Ritika-copycat...shivaay Bhaiya ka dialogue bhale hi tum bolo..magar unke jaisa romantic tum nahi ban sakte.

Om- acha ji(pulling her closer)bolo..kya karu kisse meri baby doll khush ho.

Ritika- saree pehnao.

Om- toh pehenlo

Ritika- nahi aayi

Om (raising his eyebrow) toh mat pehenlo.

Ritika- but mujhe peheni hai..I want to impress ur family..?taki woh kahe ki OMAKRA SINGH OBEROI ne bahut sanskari bahu dhundhi hai.

Without speaking further,he slowly removed her pink tube top and lightly touched her silky smooth shoulder.

It wasn't for the first time he was touching her but his touch sent shivers down the body...

Then she shyly turned around and wore her red blouse while Om tied Dori behind.

"Beautiful" thought Om.. And kissed her back.

Aaj jaane ki zid na karo
Yoonhi pahlu mein baithe raho
Yoonhi pahlu mein baithe raho
Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo

She couldn't take this anymore and hide her face in his chest..hugging him tightly .

Om- kya hua meri jangli bilki...aaj bheegi Billi kaise ban gayi??

Ritika did not answer. He massaged her bare waist making her moan his name.

Haaye mar jaaen ge ham to lut jaaen ge
Aisi baaten kiya naa karo
Aaj jane ki zid naa karo

He was about to open her jeans button but..

Ritika- Om..not now..I can do this myself.

Saying this she rushed inside a room with a peticot

Tum hi socho zara kyoon naa roke tumhe
Jaan jaati hai jab utth ke jaate ho tum
Jaan jaati hai jab utth ke jaate ho tum

She came out.

Om- you look red hot.

Ritika- Om..stop making me blush harder

Om pulled her towards him and pecked her lips. She was hell shocked as if some electric shock has been given. She responded passionately. But soon came to real world and moved away.

Ritika- Om ...I'm getting late...

He nodded.

Tum ko apni qasam jaane jaan
Baat itni meri maan lo
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo

Waqt ki qaid mein zindagi hai magar
Chand ghadiyan yahi hai jo azaad hai
Chand ghadiyan yahi hai jo azaad hai

And he slowly makes her wear saree...making a direct eye contact with her.

Inko kho kar meri jaane jaan aa
Umr bhar na taraste raho

Aaj jane ki zidd naa karoAaj jaane ki zid na karo
Yoonhi pahlu mein baithe raho
Yoonhi pahlu mein baithe raho
Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo

Haaye mar jaaen ge ham to lut jaaen ge
Aisi baaten kiya naa karo
Aaj jane ki zid naa karo

Ritika was blushing because of his sensuous touch.

After 2 hours...AT THE VENUE

Pinki- oh my Mata jethani ji..kitni wonderful arrangements ki hai in logo ne.

Jhanvi-haan pinki...it's very beautiful.

Pinki-nahi jethani ji...agar meri darling bahu arrangements karti toh chaar chand lag jate...waise mere heere bte and bahus kaha h??

Rudy-hmmm .raasleela rachane Gaye honge (with naughty smile)

SHIVIKA scene:-

(In hotel washroom)

Anika-shivaay ..kab tak bathtub mai aise baithe rahemge..chalo..Om ka function bhi shuru hone wale hai...

Shivaay-umm...thodi der bas..

Anika-shivaay... Bas..chalo...pata nahi waha log kya SOCH rahe honge...kitni der ho gayi...aur mai yeh aakhri baar bol rahi hu...iske baad aapki tadibaazi nahi chalegi samjhe..

Shivaay makes a puppy face and then they both get ready and reach the venue.

Dadi-oye khotte(pulling shivaay's ear) kaha the Gaye the dono??

Pinki- arre mummy ji..meri kanji ankhon wale grand babies ki tayari kar rahe the..haina???

Anika-shivaay embarrassed...

Jhanvi-om beta!

Om- mom..(he hug everyone and took blessings from his elders.

Dadi-kaisa hai mera bacha...

Om- dadi-..aapki tabiyat??

Dadi-oye.. Tabiyat gayi tail lene...arre aaj mere puttar ke zindagi ka itna wadda din..aur mai Na aaun..aisa ho sakta h

Pinki- ji mummy ji..Om bacha..u made us proud...God bless.

Om smiles...but his eyes were on ritika...watching her laugh and smile.

Rudra noticed this...

Rudy- ek Sher arz katta hu...gaur farmaiyega (pointing towards Om...and by now everyone noticed Om)

Hum aap ko dekhna chahte hain,
Aap se milna chahte hain,
Par ye log bahut zalim hain,
Mujhe aap se milne nahi dete...

Anika- wah wah...bilkul khidki Tod Sher...

Shivaay- hey bro...kaha khoye huye ho?

Om- (coming back to senses) kuch nahi

Jhanvi-om, maa Hun tumhari...sab janti hu..bolo..kya hua?

Om- mom mujhe aap sabhi ko kisi SE milwana hai.

Pinki- oh my maata jethani ji...chalo aap ke bhi din AA Gaye..ab OBEROI MANSION mai kanji ankhon wale aur beautiful hairs wale grand bacchhes aayenge.

Jhanvi-ek minute pinki...Om,then why are u hesitating.. Milwao.

Om- yeah..ek min..Ritikaaa

She turned around. Everyone was elated to see her.

Om- ritika...my family

And one by one she was introduced to the oberois...

Rudy- O!...Di..i mean bhabhi is so beautiful..

Om- (lost in her divine beauty) yeah

Pinki- oh my maata..issue toh sari peheni bhi aayi hai..

Om- (still lost)...usse kaha aati hai..woh to make PE Maine chauka lagaya aur Maine pehnayi...

Everyone shocked and cupped this face...ritika's eyes wide open.. And she faced down due embarrassment.

Shivaay-ahem ahem!!!lagtaa hai anika..soon we will become badi maa and bade papa

Om- shivaay..the meri kya baat kar raha h...khud ki sambhal pehle...

Shivaay was dumbstruck...

Jhanvi- anyways..hello beta..mai Om ki mom...Om ke papa nahi AA PAYE kyunki..(she was finding words to describe about the and swetlana)

Ritika- aunty ji...Om ne mujhe sab bata diya...din raat sirf aap logo ki hi baatein karte rehte h..bahut miss karte the aap sabhi ko..

Rudy- yo bhabhi...ooppss..Di..abhi toh shadi nahi Hui Na(winking).. Mujhe toh aap jante hi hoge!! Rudra!!!

Ritika- oh tum...wohi dumbbell oberoi!!

Everyone laughed

Rudy- O!...yeh tune acha nahi kiya...meri izzat ka falooda kar diya meri didi ke samne...

Ritika- arre..sorry baba...tum sidumbbell nahi...dumbbell nahi..balki ek bahut hi ache bhai- ho..Jo ek serious(looking towards Om) insaan ko rejuvenate kar ddte ho...

Rudy- yeh Hui Na baat (doing logic step)

Dadi-puttar..tumhare mummy Papa kaha h??

Ritika- woh rahe...mummyyy...paapaaa

Dadi- rajjo??? Ranveer beta???!!!

Ranjana- aunty ji aap...namaste

Both bend down to seek her blessings...




Precap- haven't thought about...

Guys... Not a good response ...if u want I can stop writing... I'm posting this chapter...if I don't get much response then I'll stop this here only...and will come back with a new story line


AnShi_LoVe thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Nice one dearie...
Loved it !!!!!
Thnx for the PM...Continue Soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
nice story nice part
loved it
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww...😳 loved it...looking forward for more update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb dear...👍🏼
Update soon and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnShi_LoVe

Nice one dearie...

Loved it !!!!!
Thnx for the PM...Continue Soon :)

Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sur1911

nice story nice part

loved it
update soon
thanks for pm

Thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurirane366

Aww...😳 loved it...looking forward for more update...

Thank you so much...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Romantic saari secen and or mere shivika to hot hai hi...😉
Very nice update yaara...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Imashkara

Romantic saari secen and or mere shivika to hot hai hi...😉

Very nice update yaara...

I'm not that good in writing romantic scenes..I just gave it a try...btw thank you again dear!!!!

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