Her broken trust... ShivIka TS. Last part updated on pg:9

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zaara610

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

loved it..very well written..I hope something like this happens in the show too.. especially the slap.. 😆
if possible can you please continue.. 😛

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Anika ne sahi kia thappad marke.. well done..
thnks for the pm Sharmi.

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

sharmi,hosake toh continue karo isse..

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Areeba

@Areebaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Believe me Sharmi, I'm dying to see Shivaay getting slap from Annika. 😆 Bhai Dekho, I love Shivaay, but to clear this ONS accusation this slap is necessary and it will definitely hit him hard. But still if I see Annika slapping Shivaay 'in real' then I'd feel for Billu g. Ye chemical locha Mera dimag Mai hua hai 😆 Ek taraf Mjhe thappar chaiye bhi or doosri taraf Nhe Bhi. 😲

Anyway, thank you for writing it down. It was nice.
I so want this PARTICULAR MU to be cleared at any cost.

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

FANTASTICALLY BEAUTIFUL OS...👏👏

I just wish something like this would have happened in the serial instead of the dragging about this idiotic accusing session...but, anyways...i guess, we have to bear with it & hope that even these false conceptions & misunderstanding will bring out some incredible turn in ShivIka's story...

Shivaay displayed a lot of emotions, anger, disgust, sad, restless, & many more...🥺

Anika was broken totally with the down-market false accusation by Shivaay...🥺😭

Trust is broken due to a misunderstanding & that which is based on some lies...😔😒

Wish Shivaay try his level best to mend it asap...

Thnkxxx for the pm, Sharmi...😊

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

sharmi this is to good yaar

plzzz do write 2nd part it just awesome

i really loved

this what i wish happen in show but alas i didn't see any chance now

u portrayed shivikas emotion very beautifully

plzz do write next plzzz

thank for the pm dear😊

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Nice OS Sharmi!

If only this had happened in the show today!! Atleast lets hope we can get to see this soonish !! Sigh!!

Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago

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LittleBeasty

@LittleBeasty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Waah...its perfectly written👏
U always describe ur story so nicely nd wid simple words anyone cud imagine it in their mind😳
I wish Ki something cud have shown todays epsd 😆
But anyway its better reading this kind of story rather than watching show😆
I can't help myself watching IB😳
Ok ok ...i so want to see a guilty n repentant Shivay like this hopefully will get it soon! Aww..Anika I m so happy she finally slapped him ! Shivay deserves that slap ! Much needed slap ! How dare he thinking so low about anika Uff! Still can't see him in pain at the same time😆
SHIVIKA driving me crazy🤪
Nd every time ur story does take me SHIVIKA land 😳
Thanks a ton dear for d PM🤗
Love
Tahsu.

Edited by ...Tahsu09... - 8 years ago

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Ah!! if only it had played out the way you penned it I would send you a thousand roses and hugs to go with it🤗
But humare ML's in the soaps have to be dumb (brains mein) and "gunne" (credit for this word goes to Ms. Annika - soon to be Mrs. SSO)
Could you write about Annika thrashing Daksh with her Chameli in the next chapter while the Oberoi Khandan (Shivvay included) watch the show over a cup of tea 🤣

Edited by asya34 - 8 years ago