Her broken trust... ShivIka TS. Last part updated on pg:9 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Since everyone had requested a second part.. i have written a part 2...
I dont know what i have done. nd i hope its up to hour hopes dear ppl.
Thrashing is also welcomed warmly..

Part 2

OmRu had witnessed the end of the happeneing between these two. They were shocked to see Anika like that. She didnt even look at them and stomped off the room.
OmRu came upto him and consoled him.
Shivaay hugged Om.

"How did i??? How could i make such a big mistake. I doubted her chastity? I? Didnt think once before spilling it out. She is the one who saved from the murder case by putting herself at stake. And i doubted her... nd confronted her in a harsh manner..said all that i shouldnt have told...ever. I should have atleast asked her. I broke her trust Om. And she trusted me so much...nd i did this to her?? I feel so low Om. I am soo sorrry Anika...i am really Sorry Anika..."
He broke down into his brothers arms. The guilt inside was already killing him. Om hugged him tighter and Rudra joined in too. It pained for them to see their brother...the Great Wall Of Shivaay broken.
Tears streaming from their eyes.
"I almost lost her Om. I lost her trust. I failed her...nd proved that i never ever deserved her trust. Her trust...thats why always saved me. Always stood by my side. And what did i do?? Doubted her... insulted her.. humiliated her and accused her of something of which she wasnt even aware of!" Suddenly he pondered through what he said...he repeated the words.
"...something of what she wasnt even aware of..."

She didnt want to waste her tears... waste them on him. On the man who never cared about her feelings. Who always humiliated her and doubted her intentions.
"How dare he? He thought i was here with Daksh last night. With Daksh! My foot!!
He thinks i am dying to be in his arms for a budle of notes. Seriously Shivaay? I cant digest the fact that u...u thought about your Paanika in this way? She felt like michmichi inside her. I dont wanna think about you Mr. SSO!"
Nd she shut her eyes and took deep breaths. Wiped of the tears. And put up a fake smile.

Someone had witnessed all the happeneings and was filled with happiness. Afterall his planned has worked...
Daksh to himself..." I know ki Shivaay ko almost sach pata chal gaya... par Shivaay Anika ki nazron mein girchuka hai... so Anika will not forgive him...aur...i will potray Shivaay to be the worst in Anika's eyes. Then she will be disgusted at him and will not even throw a glance at him. Phir Anika meri ho jaayegi...Anika is all mine nd only mine..." nd he puts his hoody on nd was running his hand over her pic on the wall. In all that obsessed and psycho mode.
"I love u Anika...tum sirf meri ho...sirf meri."

Anika was standing at the door and heared his self confession. She was hell shocked.

"Daksh..." she called out and he turned.
He too was equally shocked to see her.
"Daksh ye sab kya hai? Kya tumne vo saari baatein Shivaay ko batayi? Bolo Daksh. Kya tumne ye kaha..ki...mein kal tumhare saath thi...raat bhar?" She looked at him with one of her deadliest glares.

"BOLO...DAKSH JAWAAB DO!" she screamed.

"Haan... Anika..meine hi vo saari baatein Shivaay ko bataya tha. Aur ye bhi kaha ki tumse shaadi karne ka faisla bas tumhare saath ek raat rehne keliye hai...aur kuch nahi. Par vo sab jhoot tha...mein nahi chatha ki vo Shivaay tumhare baare mein soche. Shivaay tumse...tumse pyasr nahi kartha...mein tumse pyaar kartha hun Anika...mein" He said pulling her close by her arms. Anika tried to get off from his grip but he was too strong for her.
"Tumhe pata hai Anika... aaj tak mujhe kisi se pyaar nahi hua...tumhe dekhte hi mujhe pyaar hogaya..bus. Phir maine dekha ki tumhare mann mein Shivaay keliye feelings hai. Aur mujhe bohoth bura kaga jab tumne mujhe na bola tha. Mein sehen nahi kar paya...aur isikye maine tumhe stalk kiya...tumhe daraya."

Anika never expected this from him.

"So somewhere i was right by doubting on you. Y? Y did u plan all those attacks Daksh? Y?"
"Because i Love u Anika. Main tumhe pana chatha tha...aur isiliye maine vo sab kiya. Tum sirf meri ho...meri ho Anika. Anika main tumhe iss duniya ki har khushi dena chatha hun. Aur uss khushi ki wajah main banna chatha hun." He said and was acting like a psycho. He cupped her face and held her close.

"Bolo Anika...tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho na? U love me right? Tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karthi ho na..jit..jitna main tumse karta hun?? Bolo Anika...bolo ki tumhare mann mein shivaay keliye koi jagah nahi hai...sirf mere liye hai...Bolo??" Anika with all her force pushed him.

"Mujhe chuna bhi matt. She warned her. Shivaay aur mere beech mein galat famie peda karke tum mujhe apna banana chahte ho? Huh? Tumhari soch itna ghatiya hoga maine socha nahi. Thoo" she spat down.
Daksh felt very insuted. He went and hugged her tight. She tried to get out..but he wouldnt let her.
"You are only mine Anika...tumhe mujhse koi door nahi karsaktha...i love u Anika. Shivaay ko bhool jao Anika...tum par sirf mera haqq hai." he ran his hands all over her body. She felt like he was forcing himself on her.

"Daksh chodo mujhe" she screamed.

Suddely someone came and pulled Anika out of the so called disgusting hug and kicked Daksh.🥳
He came in front...and it was Shivaay.
"Shivaay!" She exclaimed happily... and hugged him.😳 She cried as she clutched his shirt. Daksh's touch made her uncomfortable.
"Shh.. Anika tumhe kuch nahi hoga...main aagya hun...dont wrry." Nd he returned her hug.
Om and Rudra came and held Daksh.
"Shivaay tumhari itni himmat."
"Tumne meri Anika ko kaise chua? How dare u touch her. How dare u?!" And he started puching
him. OmRu joined the fight.

The Obros dragged him to the main hall.
"Anika main tumse pyaar karta hun... bus tumhe paana chahtha tha. Pls mujhe accept karlo."
She came in and slapped him hard.
"Pyaar?! Tujhe pyaar ka matlab pata bhi hai? Pyaar vo hai jab do insaan ek doosre ke hojaate hain..toh sab ko kareeb le ata hai. Pyaar khudkarz nahi hai Daksh. Love is selfless. Pyaar ko mehsoos karte hain. Agar tumne mujhe such mein mujhse pyaar kiya hota toh, tum mujhe kabhi force nahi karte..ye jaante hue ki mere mann mein kya hai."

She slapped him again...

"Ye mujhe mujhe meri marzi ke khilaaf chune keliye."

And then she removed her chandni and started hitting him badly.

"Aur ye... Shivaay se mere baare mein gande baat kehne keliye. Tum jaise insaan ke saath ek raat kya..ek pal bhi nahi rahi sakthi.. Aur iss harkat ke baad timhe kaise laga ki main tumse shaadi karungi...kabhi nahi karungi tum jaise gande aadmi se shaadi."
She turned to leave.
Suddenly Daksh's nose started bleeding.
"Aur ye mere upar vo attacks karne keliye." She completed.
"Pachtaaoge Anika.." He warned as he touched the blood running from his nose.
"Haan..dekhenge.."
"Kya?? toh voh saara atttacks isine ki hai. Ab toh isse mein nahi chodunga." nd then Shivaay started beating him black and blue.
"Tumne meri Anika didi ko itna pareshaan kiya.. ye lo" nd Rudra kicked him.
The Obros dragged him and threw him out of the house.

"Tum theek ho?" Shivaay asked.
She looked at him. He saw that she was still hurt.
She was about to leave when she felt a tug in her hand.
Shivaay had held her wrist. She turned to face him.

"Iss baar Paani nahi phekogi?" He asked her.
"Aapki iss galati keliye na mujhe aapko paani mein phekni chaahiye." She said with tears brimming in her eyes.
"Toh vahi sahi..jaise tum chaaho." He said
She was shocked at his calmness.
She held his collar.
"Aapko kya lagta hai...jab mann kiya..toh accha boldiya...aur jab mann kiya bura...aur kabhi kabhi bohoth bura. Kya chahte hai mujhse...boliye?"
He looked at her with guilt.
"Kuch bhi kehne se pehle sochiye. Shak agar karna ho toh...sab kar sathe hain...bohoth asaan hai. Par bharosa sab par nahi kar sakthe. Aur agar kisi par karthe hain...toh unki kadar karna chaahiye. Lekin aapko meri kadar nahi thi... kabhi nahi. Aapne apni Paanika ke baare mein sochliya... mujhse bina kuch puche... aapko such mein aisa laga?" She asked.
"I am sorry Anika...mein uski baaton mein aagaya."
As soon the words left his mouth he felt wet. A jug full of water dumped on him.
"Laxmi...ek aur jug." She ordered the servant.
Shivaay's eyes went wide after what she said.
*splashh!!!*
He was wet enough. OmRu's mouth went in a big O.

She stood there staring at him..her anger not ready to cool down.
"Agar aapke jagah koi aur hota...toh mujhe koi fark nahi padthi. Par aapke baaton se fark padtha hai mujhe. Samjhe aap!" She said Shoving him back.
"Aur agar tumhe koi aur chue toh mujhe fark padtha hai..."
Before she could understand what he said...she was pulled into a bone crushing .
Hug.
"I am sorry...meri Paanika...i am srry. Aur vaada karta hun...ki tum par kabhi shak nahi karunga. Tum par mera bharosa air bhi bad gaya."
She relaxed in his arms...and her anger was cooled down.
He pulled back nd wiped her tears.
Everyone witnessed the happenings nd were shocked to see this side of ShivIka...

Now u ppl say...whether i should continue or not...
I hope u guyz r okay with the HingLish... vo kya hain na emotions mein behgayi toh hindi mein shift hogayi..😆.
Didnt reread...so pls ignore typos...

Love Sharmi
Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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1st.. again..!
Lovely Sharmi...

Ponytail ki dulhaai by ShivOmRuAnni.. Wah wah👏

Thaapad pe thappad.. Wow.. 😆

And that🥳 u put there.. 🤣

Paani pe paani
OmRu Anika pe vaari.. Wah kya scene..!

Thanks for making it a 2 shot😃

Mazza aa gaya..


Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
aww so cute...nice hope same goes in the show
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wah...mast part tha...how much i hope ki show mein bhi aisa hi ho...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haaye! What an update Sharmi!

I'll be back here to edit this comment once I switch to laptop.

But meanwhile, I cant tell you how much I enjoyed reading this. Ek secret bolu, kisise kehna mat 😆 , but crying girl and her partner consoling her , she is in problem and he is there to protect her...these two things fascinates me beyond anything...That doesnt mean I like abla nari type women but I simply love the conditions I stated above, so now you can imagine how much I must have loved this update.

loads of love
- Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yayyy! Daksh ka sach is out and woh bhi out!
And the bone crushing hug! Do continue!! And no problem with ur Hinglish 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice read both parts in one go plzz make it a 3 shot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it!! I think we all needed this! After all the angst caused by things being left unsaid in the show, your OS really helped to cope with the feels!
Want to see Anika really throw a jug of water on SSO's head when she finally learns of the reason for his anger! 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Wonderful Update...👍🏼😃
OmRu supporting Shivaay & Shivaay feeling very guilty was a superbly written scene...👏
Anika is so lost & broken...😭😭
Daksh...he deserves all the Chameli(s) & Chandni(s)...sanki pagal darinda hai Daksh...😡😡
Anika overheard everything Daksh said...
Daksh...don't you dare touch & hurt Anika...you creep...😡😡
Shivaay ne pitayi kar di Daksh ki...🥳
ShivIka hug was blissful & so caring...😳
Anika ne bhi Daksh ko maara...superb...just what I wanted...
Last Bagad Billa & Paanika scene was awesome...a bit humorous & a lot of love...😉😆.😳
Keep going Sharmi....😃😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow sharmi its jus taawesome
loved it very much
that daksh psycho how dare he try to force on anika
wah anika u slapped him good very good
anika neh paani phekha sso pe 😆
plzzz do continue soon nah plzzz
thanks for the pm dear 😃😃

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